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_/\_The Changers_/\_ (My 3rd roleplay..)
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| Supernerd | Date: Sunday, 2011-10-09, 1:16 AM | Message # 1 |
 A Hater/Friend of Equinox
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| Oh? So you think this is cool? To be a Change? No, its not, its a nightmare, a nightmare that i hope that never happens to anybody else....i only wished that my hope was true...Listen. Having these powers are a pain in the ass,the cops are after us,so are the TAPA, The Anti Power Association... having scientists wanting to know how we do such amazing powers that we do with our hands, or well, anything. Don't ask me how I got them, cause i don't know...I was just a kid just like you, a family...a home, but thats gone now. All i have are my guts, and instincts, to help me pass each minute, each hour, each day...if you see this message,and if you are one of me, read this message carefully. Never trust anyone you see...never trust any one of your own, not even me, y'see,they have spies, they use them..to plot there next strategy on us, on how to capture us, in case were somehow giving a "virus" to anyone..we already had to kill one of our own..lets just hope your not next. All I can say is...its a hard life to be me, a Changer.
(Sorry couldnt really think of anything good to call the people with powers...XD)
-Changer Character sheet-
Name:
Age:
Appearance:
Weapon(s)?(Dont have to have one):
Powers(Two please..no more than that.):
When were you a Changer?:
Bio:
Other: (Sorta for like giving a tip about how you can calm down your character or like foreshadowing)
-T.A.P.A Spy Character Sheet- (No more than two...)
Name:
Age:
Appearance:
Weapons(?):
Powers(Once again no more than two):
When were you a changer?:
When you were caught(Can be at birth...):
Bio:
Other: (same as the other other,)
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Reviews
~Equinox~
Story:3/5
It's got a story, but not a REAL story. It's hard to explain. There's a story from a unknown person's view, but not a plot for any long term story.
Grammar:4/5
It's got some good grammar, but just a FEW mistakes. A very few.
Character detail:4/5
Very nice character sheets and variety of character values. It's well done.
Plot Development:2.5/5
It's got a bit of a plot. Trying to put up with being a changeling. Not a massive or expansive plot though, so it's not a very good plot development, but it's got some possibilities.
Overall rating:3/5
Honestly, this is a pretty good RP. I don't plan on joining, but I must say if I had about 1 cell more in my brain to put up with making a CS, I would gladly join. Don't think this is a bad RP because I don't feel like joining, it's honestly really good. My laziness is just getting to me from work.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
Message edited by Supernerd - Sunday, 2011-10-09, 12:14 PM |
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| Supernerd | Date: Thursday, 2011-10-13, 3:49 PM | Message # 46 |
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A Hater/Friend of Equinox
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| (Dirty blonde XD)
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Supernerd | Date: Thursday, 2011-10-13, 3:51 PM | Message # 47 |
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A Hater/Friend of Equinox
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| My eyes widened.. backing up slowly, "N-nice Wolf...Nice wolf..." I slowly grabbed my pocket knife and faced it towards the wolf, "nice wo-Ahh!" I fell backwards, slamming my head on a tree, falling unconscious.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Demon | Date: Thursday, 2011-10-13, 3:51 PM | Message # 48 |
 ※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
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Holy fuck... I logged out of Demon2 5 minutes ago, and it says Demon2 is still online...
Damn.. Some guests are hacking..)
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| Demon | Date: Thursday, 2011-10-13, 3:52 PM | Message # 49 |
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※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
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| (Is Isaac a spy or Changer?)
I grumbled, turned human, and sat down. I waited for him to wake up.
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| Zero | Date: Thursday, 2011-10-13, 3:59 PM | Message # 50 |
 Great RP'er
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| (Bye setting I mean where on earth are we or is this earth in a different perspective)
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| Supernerd | Date: Thursday, 2011-10-13, 4:00 PM | Message # 51 |
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A Hater/Friend of Equinox
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Messages: 3145
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| (my rank is special :3, litterally)
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Demon | Date: Thursday, 2011-10-13, 4:00 PM | Message # 52 |
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※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
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| (Really doesnt matter where we are... I think were somewhere in the US... >_<)
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| Zero | Date: Thursday, 2011-10-13, 4:15 PM | Message # 53 |
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Great RP'er
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| (Ok)So after breakfast I decided to go for a walk, as I left the house I don't know why but a newspaper clipping off strange happenings in the forest..."DAMNIT", I said to myself, must I always get drawn in by the stupidest of things! Then I headed off in the direction of the forest...
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| Zyphon | Date: Thursday, 2011-10-13, 4:16 PM | Message # 54 |
 The Flying Penguin
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| (This seems...)
(Well, I'll be honsest, It's not that interesting to me, but i'm still going to join because I can... And because minecraft crashed, it's raining outside, and My brother is currently using the TV.)
-Changer Character sheet-
Name: Gregar Frost
Age: 17
Appearance: Tall(6'2"), thin but still strong, white-blond hair, icy blue eyes, sharp features, usually wears a white hoodie, jeans, blue t-shirt, black sneakers, and a silver cross around his neck.
Weapon?: His trusty pocket knife/ice sword.
Powers: Has power over ice and water(Really, would you expect anything different?)
When were you a Changer?: (I assume this mean when did you find out) When he was 7, TBR
Bio: TBR
Other: Gregar never likes getting in a fight if there's no good reason, but when he does get in a fight, he usually wins.
Flying Penguins
The world would be a better place if they existed.
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| Demon | Date: Thursday, 2011-10-13, 4:20 PM | Message # 55 |
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※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
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| (Waitin for Suuper....)
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| Supernerd | Date: Thursday, 2011-10-13, 4:34 PM | Message # 56 |
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A Hater/Friend of Equinox
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| (accepted, ) (Im with Zero XD)
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Demon | Date: Thursday, 2011-10-13, 4:36 PM | Message # 57 |
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※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
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| (?)
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| Supernerd | Date: Thursday, 2011-10-13, 4:46 PM | Message # 58 |
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A Hater/Friend of Equinox
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| (like, im right beside him lol)
I groaned, my eyes blurry as i slowly woke up, as my vision blurred i looked right into the eyes of ....a person. I groaned slightly.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
Message edited by Supernerd - Thursday, 2011-10-13, 9:52 PM |
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| Demon | Date: Thursday, 2011-10-13, 4:50 PM | Message # 59 |
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※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
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| (XD)
(I turned human, you know...)
I looked up. "Your awake?"
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| Zombo104 | Date: Thursday, 2011-10-13, 8:42 PM | Message # 60 |
 Famous RP'er
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| I looked away from the path when I heard and sensed that there was something or someone else in the forest, I heard the cry and ran in the direction of it turning back into a cougar.
It's funny until someone gets hurt. Then it's just hilarious.
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