I find that really good, cause its out of 10 and not 5...(>_>). Also, thd originality Idea I love a lot, but the length..? No. You could be very descriptive with big words, and probably describe a roleplay obetter than a longer, small words, paragraphs. I suggest maybe Character Sheets ?/10 would be a good one.Added (2011-11-22, 1:21 Am)
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I would also take out effort, cause lack of effort means a bad roleplay, and that is pointless if your rating the story.