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The Zebra
ZebraLoverDate: Wednesday, 2011-12-14, 10:43 AM | Message # 1
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We lived in a old town it was dirty, people would die from not getting any food and we did not know where we were.
then one day we were walking and someone found this hole so we started to go through it and THERE WE, WE SAW IT!!!!!!!!!!!
we wanted to wait tell the next day to go look so we went back to the old town and went to bed the next day we could not find the new place and we went looking for it for 4 days

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Message edited by ZebraLover - Thursday, 2011-12-15, 10:41 PM
 
DemonDate: Wednesday, 2011-12-14, 7:20 PM | Message # 2
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(Afew tips; When you make a roleplay,you should make a plot. Unless the plot develops as you go on. And also, maybe fix the grammar and spelling xD
Like these:
Aperrince=Appearance
Weapans=Weapons

Just helping :3)


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KenzierooDate: Wednesday, 2011-12-14, 7:29 PM | Message # 3
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(I agree with Demon, also don't forget the detail, or like Miss. Ford said use Mir the simple sentences, use complex ones as well.)

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Message edited by Kenzieroo - Wednesday, 2011-12-14, 7:29 PM
 
ZebraLoverDate: Thursday, 2011-12-15, 10:49 PM | Message # 4
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(ok thanks for the help)

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so started to change things but im starting to get stuck on what to do next.

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~Charater~
Name Jazzy Day Lee NamitTell
Age
Apperance She has long black hair, red eyes, wite wings, a short black dress, and last white boots.
Bio
Weapons butcher knife
Other she keeps her butcher kinife in her right leg boot

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Age 20


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KenzierooDate: Friday, 2011-12-16, 6:04 PM | Message # 5
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(Ok.)

On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic
 
TeddyDate: Wednesday, 2011-12-21, 8:57 PM | Message # 6
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(I want to join half Sis)
 
EquinoxDate: Wednesday, 2011-12-21, 9:35 PM | Message # 7
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(Go ahead and join then teddy, nothing is stopping you from joining any of the roleplays we have here.)

(P.S. Nice to meet you, Me and demon are the current owners of the site, and we're very happy to have you here!)


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KenzierooDate: Thursday, 2011-12-22, 11:34 AM | Message # 8
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(Teddy you can join any RP, you just can't start until you CS is accepted.)

On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic
 
TeddyDate: Thursday, 2011-12-22, 12:26 PM | Message # 9
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ZebraLoverDate: Friday, 2011-12-23, 11:35 AM | Message # 10
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(Teddy if want to join then make a CS)

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(Well Teddy you goin join?)


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lOVERpIGDate: Friday, 2011-12-23, 12:16 PM | Message # 11
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Name Lillill
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Apperance Long black hair, a blue sword a glove with rodes on it and a short pink dress
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Weapons sword
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ZebraLoverDate: Friday, 2011-12-23, 12:35 PM | Message # 12
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(Accepted)

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