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Jude and the Three Dragons
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| Spark | Date: Sunday, 2012-01-22, 2:29 PM | Message # 1 |
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| Jude is a girl who goes hiking, fishing, you name it. She always gets straight As and never gives up. But when she goes on a hiking journey, and discovers that three dragons need her help... will she ever return?
"Flying is learning how to throw yourself at the ground and miss."
You tried your best and you failed miserably. The lesson is 'never try'.
After twelve years of therapy my psychiatrist said something that brought tears to my eyes. He said, "No hablo ingles."
Duct tape is like the force. It has a light side, a dark side, and it holds the world together.
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| Spark | Date: Sunday, 2012-01-22, 3:04 PM | Message # 2 |
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| CHAPTER 1
I GO ON A TRIP TO FALL
It was about late afternoon. I was sweating. I decided to sit down and rest. I'm Jude. i'm not that popular.
I was already kicked out of so many schools because of nothing. I was nothing. I wasn't perfect. Yay for
you, being able to sit down and do whatever. i'm me. That's why I like to get out more, be myself. It was
summer, and nothing interesting happened so far. I was alone, a 16 year- old out nowhere, with no one
to supervise me. I was sitting down on a rock. The heat source was getting stronger as I got up and
headed towards the top. Once i'm there, I reach a boulder, half-covering something.
(A)-Move it
(B)Leave it
"Flying is learning how to throw yourself at the ground and miss."
You tried your best and you failed miserably. The lesson is 'never try'.
After twelve years of therapy my psychiatrist said something that brought tears to my eyes. He said, "No hablo ingles."
Duct tape is like the force. It has a light side, a dark side, and it holds the world together.
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| Zyphon | Date: Sunday, 2012-01-22, 3:43 PM | Message # 3 |
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| (...?)
(What's with the "(A)-Move it (B)-Leave it" thing? Is this supposed to be some sort of interactive sotry, if so you should said so in the first post.
Anyways, the other thing is that you say "I" too many times... And the text doesn't really seem to flow properly, but anyways... Good story?)
Flying Penguins
The world would be a better place if they existed.
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| Spark | Date: Sunday, 2012-01-22, 3:45 PM | Message # 4 |
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| (I just got bored. I couldn't decide.)
"Flying is learning how to throw yourself at the ground and miss."
You tried your best and you failed miserably. The lesson is 'never try'.
After twelve years of therapy my psychiatrist said something that brought tears to my eyes. He said, "No hablo ingles."
Duct tape is like the force. It has a light side, a dark side, and it holds the world together.
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| Zyphon | Date: Sunday, 2012-01-22, 4:44 PM | Message # 5 |
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Flying Penguins
The world would be a better place if they existed.
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| Spark | Date: Sunday, 2012-01-22, 4:57 PM | Message # 6 |
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| I lean against it. It was heavier than a statue of a greek god. "Rrtgh..."
"Flying is learning how to throw yourself at the ground and miss."
You tried your best and you failed miserably. The lesson is 'never try'.
After twelve years of therapy my psychiatrist said something that brought tears to my eyes. He said, "No hablo ingles."
Duct tape is like the force. It has a light side, a dark side, and it holds the world together.
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| Spark | Date: Thursday, 2012-01-26, 9:38 PM | Message # 7 |
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| I try again. No luck. I start hitting it with my knifes, and it WORKS. The
boulder starts cracking, and dissolves into pieces. Then extreme heat
broke loose. It burnt my face. Something MAD was stirring in there.
I didn't want to find out what it was, but my curiosity got the best of me.
I peeked inside. There were three shades of black, sleeping in a circle.
Steam billowed from their noses. I flinch. What was that ODOR?! Then
again, there was SMOKE billowing from NOSES. What the HECK?!?! I
look in closer. I creep inside, quiet as ever. I turned on my flashlight,
and saw them. They were FREAKING SCARY!!!!!!!!!!!!! I screamed at
their sight.
That woke them all up. They made rumbling noises that creeped the
hell out of me.
(Sorry for it short, gtg to bed.)
"Flying is learning how to throw yourself at the ground and miss."
You tried your best and you failed miserably. The lesson is 'never try'.
After twelve years of therapy my psychiatrist said something that brought tears to my eyes. He said, "No hablo ingles."
Duct tape is like the force. It has a light side, a dark side, and it holds the world together.
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| Spark | Date: Wednesday, 2012-02-08, 8:07 AM | Message # 8 |
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| They had huge beaming red eyes the size or ferarris. They had a thin pupil.
(I give up. they had a pupil like this:
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They seemed to bellow smoke faster than any group of 10 smokers. Their movement sends chills up my spine and earthquakes under my feet. I whimpered. The one behind me said; "What the heck is this?" The one infront of me said, "It looks like a beast." "I'm not a beast! I'm a human!" I scream. "No... humans are supposed to be extinct! Mabye Adam and Eve escaped and repopulated... DAMN THEM!" said the one in the middle. "Wha?!" I say. "Oh. This one must be stupid. We are the Fighters of Badek. Badek is an ancient city burried underneath the United States." Said the first. "We don't need any help. Don't think about it! We don't need help recovering the whole city." The third says. "What city?"
"Flying is learning how to throw yourself at the ground and miss."
You tried your best and you failed miserably. The lesson is 'never try'.
After twelve years of therapy my psychiatrist said something that brought tears to my eyes. He said, "No hablo ingles."
Duct tape is like the force. It has a light side, a dark side, and it holds the world together.
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