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Story: 8/10

Grammar: 9/10

Originality: 10/10

Effort: 8/10

Character Sheet: 10/10

Review: The first thing I noticed about "Death's Academy" was how original it was, and it easily scored a 10/10 for originality. Character Sheet, of course, got a 10/10 as well, as it's almost impossible to get a low score on that. All the other scores, though not 10/10, were quite close. Story was 8/10 as nearer to the end it felt more just a list of things that needed to be explained, not a sotry. Grammar only got a 9/10 because a characters "color" changed as they were speaking. And only an 8/10 for effort because of how there was only a character sheet and a fairly short story. Even though it wasn't perfect, I don't think I've ever seen a perfect RP, and this is pretty close to being perfect, I would definately called it a great RP that I hope will last for quite a while.

 

~Zyphon, The Flying Penguin