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_/\_The Changers_/\_ (My 3rd roleplay..)
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| Supernerd | Date: Sunday, 2011-10-09, 1:16 AM | Message # 1 |
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| Oh? So you think this is cool? To be a Change? No, its not, its a nightmare, a nightmare that i hope that never happens to anybody else....i only wished that my hope was true...Listen. Having these powers are a pain in the ass,the cops are after us,so are the TAPA, The Anti Power Association... having scientists wanting to know how we do such amazing powers that we do with our hands, or well, anything. Don't ask me how I got them, cause i don't know...I was just a kid just like you, a family...a home, but thats gone now. All i have are my guts, and instincts, to help me pass each minute, each hour, each day...if you see this message,and if you are one of me, read this message carefully. Never trust anyone you see...never trust any one of your own, not even me, y'see,they have spies, they use them..to plot there next strategy on us, on how to capture us, in case were somehow giving a "virus" to anyone..we already had to kill one of our own..lets just hope your not next. All I can say is...its a hard life to be me, a Changer.
(Sorry couldnt really think of anything good to call the people with powers...XD)
-Changer Character sheet-
Name:
Age:
Appearance:
Weapon(s)?(Dont have to have one):
Powers(Two please..no more than that.):
When were you a Changer?:
Bio:
Other: (Sorta for like giving a tip about how you can calm down your character or like foreshadowing)
-T.A.P.A Spy Character Sheet- (No more than two...)
Name:
Age:
Appearance:
Weapons(?):
Powers(Once again no more than two):
When were you a changer?:
When you were caught(Can be at birth...):
Bio:
Other: (same as the other other,)
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Reviews
~Equinox~
Story:3/5
It's got a story, but not a REAL story. It's hard to explain. There's a story from a unknown person's view, but not a plot for any long term story.
Grammar:4/5
It's got some good grammar, but just a FEW mistakes. A very few.
Character detail:4/5
Very nice character sheets and variety of character values. It's well done.
Plot Development:2.5/5
It's got a bit of a plot. Trying to put up with being a changeling. Not a massive or expansive plot though, so it's not a very good plot development, but it's got some possibilities.
Overall rating:3/5
Honestly, this is a pretty good RP. I don't plan on joining, but I must say if I had about 1 cell more in my brain to put up with making a CS, I would gladly join. Don't think this is a bad RP because I don't feel like joining, it's honestly really good. My laziness is just getting to me from work.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
Message edited by Supernerd - Sunday, 2011-10-09, 12:14 PM |
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| Demon | Date: Monday, 2011-10-10, 9:32 AM | Message # 16 |
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| Supernerd | Date: Monday, 2011-10-10, 9:33 AM | Message # 17 |
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| Demon | Date: Monday, 2011-10-10, 9:34 AM | Message # 18 |
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| Supernerd | Date: Monday, 2011-10-10, 9:56 AM | Message # 19 |
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| (I'd like to have one more..)
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| Demon | Date: Tuesday, 2011-10-11, 3:38 PM | Message # 20 |
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| (Can we start? Its dieing...)
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| Supernerd | Date: Tuesday, 2011-10-11, 4:25 PM | Message # 21 |
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| (Ugh..i just want one more! T_T Then we can start.)
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| Demon | Date: Tuesday, 2011-10-11, 4:28 PM | Message # 22 |
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| Supernerd | Date: Tuesday, 2011-10-11, 4:35 PM | Message # 23 |
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| (Someone like Zyphon Or Equinox. XD I hope my roleplay doesnt sound boring.... >_>)
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| Zombo104 | Date: Thursday, 2011-10-13, 0:23 AM | Message # 24 |
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| -Changer Character sheet-
Name:Alisa Robinson
Age:16
Appearance:Medium length black hair with bangs that stop just above her bright emerald green eyes. She always wears all black clothing, normally a t-shirt and jeans. Her skin is very pale and almost cream colored.
Weapon(s)?(Dont have to have one):Normally always tries to carry around a pocket knife for protection.
Powers(Two please..no more than that.):Shapeshifter and can control minds.
When were you a Changer?:Since she was born.
Bio:Has a bad habit of getting angry at teachers and sending them to the hospital. Never get her angry.
Other: (Sorta for like giving a tip about how you can calm down your character or like foreshadowing)
There is no found way of how you can calm Emily down probably because no one has ever tried because they're afraid she'll kill them.
It's funny until someone gets hurt. Then it's just hilarious.
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| Supernerd | Date: Thursday, 2011-10-13, 0:31 AM | Message # 25 |
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| (Not accepted, cause im guessing you didnt read my story closely, i said that changers are practically fugitives, getting hunted down, i dont think they would be in school -_- But nice try.)
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| Supernerd | Date: Thursday, 2011-10-13, 0:32 AM | Message # 26 |
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| (Edit your bio about going to school and stuff...then i will accept)
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| Zombo104 | Date: Thursday, 2011-10-13, 0:36 AM | Message # 27 |
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| (I meant before anyone found out she was a changer) Added (2011-10-13, 0:36 Am)
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(ill change it anyways though, i thought of a better idea)
It's funny until someone gets hurt. Then it's just hilarious.
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| Supernerd | Date: Thursday, 2011-10-13, 0:36 AM | Message # 28 |
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| (But you said she was a changer since she was born XD)
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| Zombo104 | Date: Thursday, 2011-10-13, 0:38 AM | Message # 29 |
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| -Changer Character sheet-
Name:Alisa Robinson
Age:16
Appearance:Medium length black hair with bangs that stop just above her bright emerald green eyes. She always wears all black clothing, normally a t-shirt and jeans. Her skin is very pale and almost cream colored.
Weapon(s)?(Dont have to have one):Normally always tries to carry around a pocket knife for protection.
Powers(Two please..no more than that.):Shapeshifter and can control minds.
When were you a Changer?:Since she was born.
Bio:Before it was discovered that she was a changer Alisa had a bad habit of getting angry at teachers and sending them to the hospital. Never get her angry.
Other: (Sorta for like giving a tip about how you can calm down your character or like foreshadowing)
There is no found way of how you can calm Emily down probably because no one has ever tried because they're afraid she'll kill them.Added (2011-10-13, 0:38 Am)
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(i know but nobody knew that but her lol i need to explain these things in the CS don't I lol)
It's funny until someone gets hurt. Then it's just hilarious.
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| Supernerd | Date: Thursday, 2011-10-13, 0:39 AM | Message # 30 |
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| (Accepted XD Sorry i was confused, we can now start the roleplay)
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
Message edited by Supernerd - Thursday, 2011-10-13, 0:41 AM |
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