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_/\_The Changers_/\_ (My 3rd roleplay..)
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| Supernerd | Date: Sunday, 2011-10-09, 1:16 AM | Message # 1 |
 A Hater/Friend of Equinox
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| Oh? So you think this is cool? To be a Change? No, its not, its a nightmare, a nightmare that i hope that never happens to anybody else....i only wished that my hope was true...Listen. Having these powers are a pain in the ass,the cops are after us,so are the TAPA, The Anti Power Association... having scientists wanting to know how we do such amazing powers that we do with our hands, or well, anything. Don't ask me how I got them, cause i don't know...I was just a kid just like you, a family...a home, but thats gone now. All i have are my guts, and instincts, to help me pass each minute, each hour, each day...if you see this message,and if you are one of me, read this message carefully. Never trust anyone you see...never trust any one of your own, not even me, y'see,they have spies, they use them..to plot there next strategy on us, on how to capture us, in case were somehow giving a "virus" to anyone..we already had to kill one of our own..lets just hope your not next. All I can say is...its a hard life to be me, a Changer.
(Sorry couldnt really think of anything good to call the people with powers...XD)
-Changer Character sheet-
Name:
Age:
Appearance:
Weapon(s)?(Dont have to have one):
Powers(Two please..no more than that.):
When were you a Changer?:
Bio:
Other: (Sorta for like giving a tip about how you can calm down your character or like foreshadowing)
-T.A.P.A Spy Character Sheet- (No more than two...)
Name:
Age:
Appearance:
Weapons(?):
Powers(Once again no more than two):
When were you a changer?:
When you were caught(Can be at birth...):
Bio:
Other: (same as the other other,)
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Reviews
~Equinox~
Story:3/5
It's got a story, but not a REAL story. It's hard to explain. There's a story from a unknown person's view, but not a plot for any long term story.
Grammar:4/5
It's got some good grammar, but just a FEW mistakes. A very few.
Character detail:4/5
Very nice character sheets and variety of character values. It's well done.
Plot Development:2.5/5
It's got a bit of a plot. Trying to put up with being a changeling. Not a massive or expansive plot though, so it's not a very good plot development, but it's got some possibilities.
Overall rating:3/5
Honestly, this is a pretty good RP. I don't plan on joining, but I must say if I had about 1 cell more in my brain to put up with making a CS, I would gladly join. Don't think this is a bad RP because I don't feel like joining, it's honestly really good. My laziness is just getting to me from work.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
Message edited by Supernerd - Sunday, 2011-10-09, 12:14 PM |
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| Supernerd | Date: Sunday, 2011-10-09, 1:25 AM | Message # 2 |
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A Hater/Friend of Equinox
Group: Special
Messages: 3145
Status: Offline
| -T.A.P.A Spy Character Sheet-
Name:Isaac Jarome
Age:13
Appearance:Isaac is tall about 5"7' and has deep green eyes, with short dirty blonde coloured hair. He has a friendly looking face, he has smile marks when he grins. He wears a dark blue and light blue striped long slevved shirt, going horizontally with a white collar. Isaac wears black skinny jeans and a matching pair of black runners.
Weapons(?):Pocket knife.
Powers(Once again no more than two):Invisibility, and speechcraft.
When were you a changer?:Since he was two.
When you were caught(Can be at birth...):At 2 years old, cause his mother and father sent him there, cause they were scared of him.
Bio:Isaac has caught many people..all by the same strategy.
Other: Isaac has a habit of getting close with everyone....
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Demon | Date: Sunday, 2011-10-09, 7:20 AM | Message # 3 |
 ※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
Group: Administrators
Messages: 9627
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| Name: Brisk
Age: 15
Appearance: You know this by now...
Weapon(s)?(Dont have to have one): Long black katana
Powers(Two please..no more than that.): Shapeshifting, control over dark element
When were you a Changer?: Oddly, by birth
Bio: TBR (Even though I've said it so many times that you all know it XD)
Other: Brisk can get SERIOUSLY lethal at times.... (You all should now what I mean by this XD)
ಠ_ಠ (づ ￣ ³￣)づ
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| Supernerd | Date: Sunday, 2011-10-09, 10:11 AM | Message # 4 |
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A Hater/Friend of Equinox
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| (I would accept, but first, are you a T.A.P.A Changer Spy? Or just a Changer? trying to avoid getting captured?)
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Demon | Date: Sunday, 2011-10-09, 12:58 PM | Message # 5 |
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※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
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| (Just a changer, avoiding capture)
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| Supernerd | Date: Sunday, 2011-10-09, 2:55 PM | Message # 6 |
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| (k accepted)
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Spark | Date: Sunday, 2011-10-09, 2:57 PM | Message # 7 |
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| Name: Cane
Age: 15
Appearance: In link
Weapon(s)?(Dont have to have one): Sword
Powers(Two please..no more than that.): Shapeshift, Telekenesis.
When were you a Changer?: 7 years ago.
Bio: N/a
Other:N/a
"Flying is learning how to throw yourself at the ground and miss."
You tried your best and you failed miserably. The lesson is 'never try'.
After twelve years of therapy my psychiatrist said something that brought tears to my eyes. He said, "No hablo ingles."
Duct tape is like the force. It has a light side, a dark side, and it holds the world together.
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| Demon | Date: Sunday, 2011-10-09, 4:07 PM | Message # 8 |
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※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
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| (Ofcourse someone else takes shapeshifting, right after I do.
How ironic. Happens every time .__.)
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| Supernerd | Date: Sunday, 2011-10-09, 8:26 PM | Message # 9 |
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A Hater/Friend of Equinox
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| (Umm, spark, how about something else than shapeshift? Since Demon already has it..)
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Demon | Date: Monday, 2011-10-10, 6:47 AM | Message # 10 |
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※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
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| (XD
Like... Invisibility, or Element Control...)
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| Supernerd | Date: Monday, 2011-10-10, 8:58 AM | Message # 11 |
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A Hater/Friend of Equinox
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| (My guy already has invisibility)
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Demon | Date: Monday, 2011-10-10, 9:22 AM | Message # 12 |
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※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
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Messages: 9627
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| (>_<'
Maybe; Telepathy, Mind control, Necromancy, etc)
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| Supernerd | Date: Monday, 2011-10-10, 9:28 AM | Message # 13 |
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A Hater/Friend of Equinox
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| (waaiittinn for spark, and other ppplll XD)
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Spark | Date: Monday, 2011-10-10, 9:31 AM | Message # 14 |
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Zyphon's Supporter
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| (telekenesis, invisibility.)
"Flying is learning how to throw yourself at the ground and miss."
You tried your best and you failed miserably. The lesson is 'never try'.
After twelve years of therapy my psychiatrist said something that brought tears to my eyes. He said, "No hablo ingles."
Duct tape is like the force. It has a light side, a dark side, and it holds the world together.
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| Supernerd | Date: Monday, 2011-10-10, 9:32 AM | Message # 15 |
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A Hater/Friend of Equinox
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Messages: 3145
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| (Noy invieibilty!!! Lol i just said i ALREADY HAVE IT!)
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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