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_/\_The Changers_/\_ (My 3rd roleplay..)
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| Supernerd | Date: Sunday, 2011-10-09, 1:16 AM | Message # 1 |
 A Hater/Friend of Equinox
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| Oh? So you think this is cool? To be a Change? No, its not, its a nightmare, a nightmare that i hope that never happens to anybody else....i only wished that my hope was true...Listen. Having these powers are a pain in the ass,the cops are after us,so are the TAPA, The Anti Power Association... having scientists wanting to know how we do such amazing powers that we do with our hands, or well, anything. Don't ask me how I got them, cause i don't know...I was just a kid just like you, a family...a home, but thats gone now. All i have are my guts, and instincts, to help me pass each minute, each hour, each day...if you see this message,and if you are one of me, read this message carefully. Never trust anyone you see...never trust any one of your own, not even me, y'see,they have spies, they use them..to plot there next strategy on us, on how to capture us, in case were somehow giving a "virus" to anyone..we already had to kill one of our own..lets just hope your not next. All I can say is...its a hard life to be me, a Changer.
(Sorry couldnt really think of anything good to call the people with powers...XD)
-Changer Character sheet-
Name:
Age:
Appearance:
Weapon(s)?(Dont have to have one):
Powers(Two please..no more than that.):
When were you a Changer?:
Bio:
Other: (Sorta for like giving a tip about how you can calm down your character or like foreshadowing)
-T.A.P.A Spy Character Sheet- (No more than two...)
Name:
Age:
Appearance:
Weapons(?):
Powers(Once again no more than two):
When were you a changer?:
When you were caught(Can be at birth...):
Bio:
Other: (same as the other other,)
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Reviews
~Equinox~
Story:3/5
It's got a story, but not a REAL story. It's hard to explain. There's a story from a unknown person's view, but not a plot for any long term story.
Grammar:4/5
It's got some good grammar, but just a FEW mistakes. A very few.
Character detail:4/5
Very nice character sheets and variety of character values. It's well done.
Plot Development:2.5/5
It's got a bit of a plot. Trying to put up with being a changeling. Not a massive or expansive plot though, so it's not a very good plot development, but it's got some possibilities.
Overall rating:3/5
Honestly, this is a pretty good RP. I don't plan on joining, but I must say if I had about 1 cell more in my brain to put up with making a CS, I would gladly join. Don't think this is a bad RP because I don't feel like joining, it's honestly really good. My laziness is just getting to me from work.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
Message edited by Supernerd - Sunday, 2011-10-09, 12:14 PM |
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| Kenzieroo | Date: Sunday, 2012-02-26, 10:58 AM | Message # 1306 |
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From the Forest
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| (Can I met you soon?)
~Vala
The air child in my irritation and the rain fell harder. There was someone watching me and I was about ready to pull out my sword but I waited and walked.
On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic
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| Evie | Date: Tuesday, 2012-03-06, 4:46 PM | Message # 1307 |
 RP'er Without A Life
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| (Not yet. If Super would come on more often then yes.. *mutters to self* I have a plan but I can't do it without him coming on.)
~Dee
I sat and waited for there dreams to begin.
Shoot for the moon★ ☆ ✰
If you miss★ ☆ ✰
You'll still land among the stars★ ☆ ✰
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| Kenzieroo | Date: Tuesday, 2012-03-06, 8:56 PM | Message # 1308 |
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From the Forest
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| (Then tell me when I can join in, uh for know I guess I can battle my phantom, or somthin')
On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic
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| Evie | Date: Friday, 2012-03-09, 1:19 AM | Message # 1309 |
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RP'er Without A Life
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Messages: 2382
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| (mkay.)
~Virra
I was in a room with deep blue walls and a wooden floor. My dad sat across from me sipping tea and I felt happy because I recognized this as my old home even the familiar dent was there from my mom dropping a piece of furniture on the ground when we had first moved in. My mom then walked into the room and she bent over as my dad kissed her on the cheek. I smiled and got up to hug her but I walked right through her. I was surprised and upset but even more so when I noticed her swelled pregnant belly. My parents never had any more children. My mom looked down and rubbed her belly then slowly looked up and this time noticed me. She glared at me staring me down then started laughing my dad soon to join in. Something inside her belly moved and shifted poking at her stomach from the inside. I looked back at her mouth and while it was still so wide I saw a small hand clawing its way out in the back of her throat. My dad smiled with glee and whispered, "I hope its a boy." Then all the sudden my dream switched.
Shoot for the moon★ ☆ ✰
If you miss★ ☆ ✰
You'll still land among the stars★ ☆ ✰
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| Supernerd | Date: Friday, 2012-03-09, 1:29 AM | Message # 1310 |
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A Hater/Friend of Equinox
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Messages: 3145
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| (I will post it later.....) ((cause i cant tonight, too late, and i may not be able to post for a bit....Patience?))
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Evie | Date: Friday, 2012-03-09, 10:58 PM | Message # 1311 |
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RP'er Without A Life
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Messages: 2382
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| (Alright Gabe, I will wait. >:( :3 )
Shoot for the moon★ ☆ ✰
If you miss★ ☆ ✰
You'll still land among the stars★ ☆ ✰
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| Kenzieroo | Date: Tuesday, 2012-03-13, 8:46 AM | Message # 1312 |
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From the Forest
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Messages: 7524
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| (eh, I'll just wait 'till I can meet you guys. I don't have much to do, or I'll wait until my writers block is gone.)
:P
On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic
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| Kenzieroo | Date: Friday, 2012-05-11, 8:30 AM | Message # 1313 |
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From the Forest
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Messages: 7524
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| (Bump, maybe?)
On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic
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| Evie | Date: Friday, 2012-05-11, 5:59 PM | Message # 1314 |
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RP'er Without A Life
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Messages: 2382
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| (Im pretty sure this is dead.)
Shoot for the moon★ ☆ ✰
If you miss★ ☆ ✰
You'll still land among the stars★ ☆ ✰
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| Kenzieroo | Date: Friday, 2012-05-11, 7:58 PM | Message # 1315 |
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From the Forest
Group: Moderators
Messages: 7524
Status: Offline
| (I know, but I'm SO BORED!)
On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic
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