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_/\_The Changers_/\_ (My 3rd roleplay..)
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| Supernerd | Date: Sunday, 2011-10-09, 1:16 AM | Message # 1 |
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| Oh? So you think this is cool? To be a Change? No, its not, its a nightmare, a nightmare that i hope that never happens to anybody else....i only wished that my hope was true...Listen. Having these powers are a pain in the ass,the cops are after us,so are the TAPA, The Anti Power Association... having scientists wanting to know how we do such amazing powers that we do with our hands, or well, anything. Don't ask me how I got them, cause i don't know...I was just a kid just like you, a family...a home, but thats gone now. All i have are my guts, and instincts, to help me pass each minute, each hour, each day...if you see this message,and if you are one of me, read this message carefully. Never trust anyone you see...never trust any one of your own, not even me, y'see,they have spies, they use them..to plot there next strategy on us, on how to capture us, in case were somehow giving a "virus" to anyone..we already had to kill one of our own..lets just hope your not next. All I can say is...its a hard life to be me, a Changer.
(Sorry couldnt really think of anything good to call the people with powers...XD)
-Changer Character sheet-
Name:
Age:
Appearance:
Weapon(s)?(Dont have to have one):
Powers(Two please..no more than that.):
When were you a Changer?:
Bio:
Other: (Sorta for like giving a tip about how you can calm down your character or like foreshadowing)
-T.A.P.A Spy Character Sheet- (No more than two...)
Name:
Age:
Appearance:
Weapons(?):
Powers(Once again no more than two):
When were you a changer?:
When you were caught(Can be at birth...):
Bio:
Other: (same as the other other,)
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Reviews
~Equinox~
Story:3/5
It's got a story, but not a REAL story. It's hard to explain. There's a story from a unknown person's view, but not a plot for any long term story.
Grammar:4/5
It's got some good grammar, but just a FEW mistakes. A very few.
Character detail:4/5
Very nice character sheets and variety of character values. It's well done.
Plot Development:2.5/5
It's got a bit of a plot. Trying to put up with being a changeling. Not a massive or expansive plot though, so it's not a very good plot development, but it's got some possibilities.
Overall rating:3/5
Honestly, this is a pretty good RP. I don't plan on joining, but I must say if I had about 1 cell more in my brain to put up with making a CS, I would gladly join. Don't think this is a bad RP because I don't feel like joining, it's honestly really good. My laziness is just getting to me from work.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
Message edited by Supernerd - Sunday, 2011-10-09, 12:14 PM |
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| Demon | Date: Thursday, 2011-12-29, 6:44 PM | Message # 1051 |
 ※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
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| ~Brisk~
I narrowed my eyes. "I'm Brisk.... Thats Cody" I pointed to Cody. I stepped closer to her. "Who are you? Are you a changer?"
~Iris~
I giggled. "Silly, of course I'm a changer! I can play with time!" I giggled again, and spun around in a circle.
(Shes so happy its creepy @.@)
ಠ_ಠ (づ ￣ ³￣)づ
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| Kenzieroo | Date: Thursday, 2011-12-29, 6:49 PM | Message # 1052 |
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From the Forest
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| (Lol)
~Silver
I sit as I what Cat jump into a tree and start, "Wait, I'm not that good at forest travel yet!" I yell to her she stops in place.
"I'll go a bit slower," was her only respons and then she continues
I run after her but within the first few feet I trip and fall flat on my face. "Crap I'm clumsy."
On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic
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| Supernerd | Date: Thursday, 2011-12-29, 7:40 PM | Message # 1053 |
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| (Maybe its cause ur roleplaying her.)
Cody-
I froze. I had already figured that out before she even said that. "How...old are you? " I asked.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Kenzieroo | Date: Thursday, 2011-12-29, 8:13 PM | Message # 1054 |
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From the Forest
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| (I agree XD, now I got to think off a way to join back up wityh you guys without being cheesy... I'll think of somthing.)
~Silver
I got back up and fix the scrap on my knee, thins time I was more carful and I feel a lot less. I look around and see no signs of Cat.. "Cat?" I holler. Thats when a blur falls infrount off me and I fall back it was cat.
"Yes?" she asked giggling. I smile.
"Hey NOT fair!" and I tackle her.
On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic
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| Supernerd | Date: Thursday, 2011-12-29, 8:19 PM | Message # 1055 |
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| Isaac-
"And what do you think that whatever i'll do will involve T.A.P.A.? It involves changers. I'm going to try and make it so that we can be free. So that we won't have to hide or be captured."
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
Message edited by Supernerd - Thursday, 2011-12-29, 8:20 PM |
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| Kenzieroo | Date: Thursday, 2011-12-29, 8:27 PM | Message # 1056 |
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From the Forest
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| ~Cat
I push Silver off of me as we laugh. Quickly I stand back up and brushed myself off. "Come on let's go." she gives a slit moan.
"But it's so far!" she said sarcastically.
On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic
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| Evie | Date: Friday, 2011-12-30, 0:40 AM | Message # 1057 |
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| "Hmmmmm....interesting. I'm in!" I say happily and continue to follow Issac.
Shoot for the moon★ ☆ ✰
If you miss★ ☆ ✰
You'll still land among the stars★ ☆ ✰
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| Supernerd | Date: Friday, 2011-12-30, 1:30 AM | Message # 1058 |
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| Isaac-
I sighed facepalming as I walked ahead. "How the hell, could you help?" I looked backed at her as I walked for a couple seconds.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Evie | Date: Friday, 2011-12-30, 1:39 AM | Message # 1059 |
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| "Well for starters I'm good at stealing. I can rob banks without the cameras seeing me because I can move so fast." I explained
Shoot for the moon★ ☆ ✰
If you miss★ ☆ ✰
You'll still land among the stars★ ☆ ✰
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| Supernerd | Date: Friday, 2011-12-30, 2:03 AM | Message # 1060 |
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| Isaac-
I smirked. "But there's locks, codes etc. You need more than speed."
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Evie | Date: Friday, 2011-12-30, 3:48 AM | Message # 1061 |
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| "Trust me I've done it before. I'm good."
Shoot for the moon★ ☆ ✰
If you miss★ ☆ ✰
You'll still land among the stars★ ☆ ✰
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| Demon | Date: Friday, 2011-12-30, 8:50 AM | Message # 1062 |
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| ~Iris~
"I'm 17!" I jumped up.
~Brisk~
Good god... SHES the time traveler? Good luck, Forlorn I laughed silently
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| Kenzieroo | Date: Friday, 2011-12-30, 9:52 AM | Message # 1063 |
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From the Forest
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| (Lol)
~Silver
We both sat there a minute staring at the clear sky though a small opening in the trees.
"I remember the good times before I found out I was a changer.." I sigh feeling sad for Cat, she never had that chance.
"Remember when we first met, you almost ripped my tail of." we both laugh a second.
Pushing myself up with my hands I looked around, I wish I hadn't been locked inside all my life. It's so beautiful out here even if I keep falling on my face.
On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic
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| Equinox | Date: Friday, 2011-12-30, 10:35 AM | Message # 1064 |
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| -Jarren-
"Vila Mivo, Give me your power!"
As I drained Vila Mivo's power, she slowly rotted into a skeleton, hanging from the side of the ship that was in the lake.
"See you in hell."
I kick her off the side of the ship, into the water. I held out a blade, as it absorbed a yellow light from the skeleton.
"Now, what is your power..."
I pointed the blade forward and blasted, and it shot a bolt of lightning into a sail of the ship, and caught it on fire.
"Lightning? Oh, looks like I better get out of here." I say, as I jump into the water to escape the burning ship.
~Glacial Malphite: The Shard of the Monolith~
"I hear rumors that the Shard of the Monolith is an unstoppable force. They aren't rumors."-Nausus, on the topic of Malphite's arrival.
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| Kenzieroo | Date: Friday, 2011-12-30, 10:40 AM | Message # 1065 |
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From the Forest
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| (Woe, just wow)
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