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_/\_The Changers_/\_ (My 3rd roleplay..)
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| Supernerd | Date: Sunday, 2011-10-09, 1:16 AM | Message # 1 |
 A Hater/Friend of Equinox
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| Oh? So you think this is cool? To be a Change? No, its not, its a nightmare, a nightmare that i hope that never happens to anybody else....i only wished that my hope was true...Listen. Having these powers are a pain in the ass,the cops are after us,so are the TAPA, The Anti Power Association... having scientists wanting to know how we do such amazing powers that we do with our hands, or well, anything. Don't ask me how I got them, cause i don't know...I was just a kid just like you, a family...a home, but thats gone now. All i have are my guts, and instincts, to help me pass each minute, each hour, each day...if you see this message,and if you are one of me, read this message carefully. Never trust anyone you see...never trust any one of your own, not even me, y'see,they have spies, they use them..to plot there next strategy on us, on how to capture us, in case were somehow giving a "virus" to anyone..we already had to kill one of our own..lets just hope your not next. All I can say is...its a hard life to be me, a Changer.
(Sorry couldnt really think of anything good to call the people with powers...XD)
-Changer Character sheet-
Name:
Age:
Appearance:
Weapon(s)?(Dont have to have one):
Powers(Two please..no more than that.):
When were you a Changer?:
Bio:
Other: (Sorta for like giving a tip about how you can calm down your character or like foreshadowing)
-T.A.P.A Spy Character Sheet- (No more than two...)
Name:
Age:
Appearance:
Weapons(?):
Powers(Once again no more than two):
When were you a changer?:
When you were caught(Can be at birth...):
Bio:
Other: (same as the other other,)
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Reviews
~Equinox~
Story:3/5
It's got a story, but not a REAL story. It's hard to explain. There's a story from a unknown person's view, but not a plot for any long term story.
Grammar:4/5
It's got some good grammar, but just a FEW mistakes. A very few.
Character detail:4/5
Very nice character sheets and variety of character values. It's well done.
Plot Development:2.5/5
It's got a bit of a plot. Trying to put up with being a changeling. Not a massive or expansive plot though, so it's not a very good plot development, but it's got some possibilities.
Overall rating:3/5
Honestly, this is a pretty good RP. I don't plan on joining, but I must say if I had about 1 cell more in my brain to put up with making a CS, I would gladly join. Don't think this is a bad RP because I don't feel like joining, it's honestly really good. My laziness is just getting to me from work.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
Message edited by Supernerd - Sunday, 2011-10-09, 12:14 PM |
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| Equinox | Date: Thursday, 2011-12-29, 10:56 AM | Message # 1036 |
 Social warrior of the administration
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| (I don't know yet, but I don't plan for it to happen quite yet, because it'll be a bit of a dangerous twist. I'm currently trying to figure out how I can incorporate that into it, and not screw up everything and make the big twist I have planned, impossible.)
~Glacial Malphite: The Shard of the Monolith~
"I hear rumors that the Shard of the Monolith is an unstoppable force. They aren't rumors."-Nausus, on the topic of Malphite's arrival.
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| Kenzieroo | Date: Thursday, 2011-12-29, 10:59 AM | Message # 1037 |
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From the Forest
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| (Nothing is imposable, just improbable.)
On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic
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| Demon | Date: Thursday, 2011-12-29, 11:01 AM | Message # 1038 |
 ※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
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| (Ok. Tell me when you want it to start)
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| Equinox | Date: Thursday, 2011-12-29, 11:31 AM | Message # 1039 |
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Social warrior of the administration
Group: Administrators
Messages: 7183
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| (You can use her whenever you want, Forlorn just wont be doing any of that yet.)
~Glacial Malphite: The Shard of the Monolith~
"I hear rumors that the Shard of the Monolith is an unstoppable force. They aren't rumors."-Nausus, on the topic of Malphite's arrival.
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| Demon | Date: Thursday, 2011-12-29, 12:09 PM | Message # 1040 |
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※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
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| (I know that)
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| Supernerd | Date: Thursday, 2011-12-29, 1:06 PM | Message # 1041 |
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A Hater/Friend of Equinox
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Messages: 3145
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| Cody-
"He wasn't surprised." I said. Getting up to my feet and looking at her with a concerned expression and with slight fear.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
Message edited by Supernerd - Thursday, 2011-12-29, 1:07 PM |
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| Demon | Date: Thursday, 2011-12-29, 1:59 PM | Message # 1042 |
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※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
Group: Administrators
Messages: 9627
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| "Huh.... He's a strange one, I'll tell ya that"
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| Evie | Date: Thursday, 2011-12-29, 2:35 PM | Message # 1043 |
 RP'er Without A Life
Group: Checked
Messages: 2382
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| "With whatever you need. Even if its helping TAPA." I told him smiling at his reaction.
Shoot for the moon★ ☆ ✰
If you miss★ ☆ ✰
You'll still land among the stars★ ☆ ✰
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| Supernerd | Date: Thursday, 2011-12-29, 3:52 PM | Message # 1044 |
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A Hater/Friend of Equinox
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Messages: 3145
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| Isaac-
I looked at her skeptically. "Now, what's with the change here? First, you hate me, now you don't, and your saying that you want to help me?? There's gotta be a catch to this."
Cody-
I still had that same worried look. "I spoke to him, through his brain. And he wasn't surprised, not in his tone, his way of words. He claims he sees the future....and he told me a plan of his...." I shifted uncomfortably.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Demon | Date: Thursday, 2011-12-29, 3:56 PM | Message # 1045 |
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※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
Group: Administrators
Messages: 9627
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| "Well, what is it?"
~Iris~
I wandered the woods, and heard voices in a cave that was next to me. I hadn't encountered humans in such a long time!
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| Supernerd | Date: Thursday, 2011-12-29, 4:06 PM | Message # 1046 |
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A Hater/Friend of Equinox
Group: Special
Messages: 3145
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| (Nice demon.)
Cody-
I sighed. "He claims there is a girl, that he saw in the future that would eventually come to her. She could distort time. He claims that the Gods made him see this. And that he and the girl could change time with their powers combined. He claims hes going to use them for good..." I shifted again. "But I don't believe him."
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Evie | Date: Thursday, 2011-12-29, 4:23 PM | Message # 1047 |
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RP'er Without A Life
Group: Checked
Messages: 2382
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| "It's my father. He's dying.."
Shoot for the moon★ ☆ ✰
If you miss★ ☆ ✰
You'll still land among the stars★ ☆ ✰
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| Demon | Date: Thursday, 2011-12-29, 6:37 PM | Message # 1048 |
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※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
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| "Well thats intresting...." I paused, and my ears twitched. I turned towards the entrance of the cave. "It seems we have a visitor"
~Iris~
I happily hopped out of my hiding place, and bounced into the cave. I was a rather bubbly girl. "Hi! I'm Iris."
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| Kenzieroo | Date: Thursday, 2011-12-29, 6:40 PM | Message # 1049 |
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From the Forest
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| ~Silver
I beam, "He likes me still, right?" she nodded. "Hey can I see your 'family'?" she took a second.
"Uh, yea that would be ok."
On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic
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| Supernerd | Date: Thursday, 2011-12-29, 6:40 PM | Message # 1050 |
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A Hater/Friend of Equinox
Group: Special
Messages: 3145
Status: Offline
| Cody-
I was rather taken aback by her...poppyness, or whatever u call it. I glanced over at Brisk. I forgot she had good hearing. I should've been able to locate the girl. Hear her thoughts. I guess I was just distracted. I stared at her. I didn't have to close my eyes this time.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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