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_/\_The Changers_/\_ (My 3rd roleplay..)
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| Supernerd | Date: Sunday, 2011-10-09, 1:16 AM | Message # 1 |
 A Hater/Friend of Equinox
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| Oh? So you think this is cool? To be a Change? No, its not, its a nightmare, a nightmare that i hope that never happens to anybody else....i only wished that my hope was true...Listen. Having these powers are a pain in the ass,the cops are after us,so are the TAPA, The Anti Power Association... having scientists wanting to know how we do such amazing powers that we do with our hands, or well, anything. Don't ask me how I got them, cause i don't know...I was just a kid just like you, a family...a home, but thats gone now. All i have are my guts, and instincts, to help me pass each minute, each hour, each day...if you see this message,and if you are one of me, read this message carefully. Never trust anyone you see...never trust any one of your own, not even me, y'see,they have spies, they use them..to plot there next strategy on us, on how to capture us, in case were somehow giving a "virus" to anyone..we already had to kill one of our own..lets just hope your not next. All I can say is...its a hard life to be me, a Changer.
(Sorry couldnt really think of anything good to call the people with powers...XD)
-Changer Character sheet-
Name:
Age:
Appearance:
Weapon(s)?(Dont have to have one):
Powers(Two please..no more than that.):
When were you a Changer?:
Bio:
Other: (Sorta for like giving a tip about how you can calm down your character or like foreshadowing)
-T.A.P.A Spy Character Sheet- (No more than two...)
Name:
Age:
Appearance:
Weapons(?):
Powers(Once again no more than two):
When were you a changer?:
When you were caught(Can be at birth...):
Bio:
Other: (same as the other other,)
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Reviews
~Equinox~
Story:3/5
It's got a story, but not a REAL story. It's hard to explain. There's a story from a unknown person's view, but not a plot for any long term story.
Grammar:4/5
It's got some good grammar, but just a FEW mistakes. A very few.
Character detail:4/5
Very nice character sheets and variety of character values. It's well done.
Plot Development:2.5/5
It's got a bit of a plot. Trying to put up with being a changeling. Not a massive or expansive plot though, so it's not a very good plot development, but it's got some possibilities.
Overall rating:3/5
Honestly, this is a pretty good RP. I don't plan on joining, but I must say if I had about 1 cell more in my brain to put up with making a CS, I would gladly join. Don't think this is a bad RP because I don't feel like joining, it's honestly really good. My laziness is just getting to me from work.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
Message edited by Supernerd - Sunday, 2011-10-09, 12:14 PM |
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| Equinox | Date: Tuesday, 2011-12-27, 1:37 PM | Message # 1006 |
 Social warrior of the administration
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| (It's very difficult process to understand, and even longer to figure out how to explain it. If I hadn't studied Einstein's Theory of Relativity then I wouldn't know a damn thing about it.)
~Glacial Malphite: The Shard of the Monolith~
"I hear rumors that the Shard of the Monolith is an unstoppable force. They aren't rumors."-Nausus, on the topic of Malphite's arrival.
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| Demon | Date: Tuesday, 2011-12-27, 1:43 PM | Message # 1007 |
 ※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
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| (I haven't studied a damn thing about Einstien. XD)
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| Equinox | Date: Tuesday, 2011-12-27, 1:46 PM | Message # 1008 |
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| (Einstein actually explained how time travel would worth, which is why it's such a controversy that it is.)
~Glacial Malphite: The Shard of the Monolith~
"I hear rumors that the Shard of the Monolith is an unstoppable force. They aren't rumors."-Nausus, on the topic of Malphite's arrival.
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| Supernerd | Date: Tuesday, 2011-12-27, 2:53 PM | Message # 1009 |
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A Hater/Friend of Equinox
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| (I read what Equi said about einstein and I understand it quite well. But question, why the hell would you study einsteins theory?? xD)
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Evie | Date: Tuesday, 2011-12-27, 2:58 PM | Message # 1010 |
 RP'er Without A Life
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| (Oh yeah I've seen the incredibles and Virra can run on water when shes moving fast enough.)
I kept to following Issac, I needed to see what he was up to.
Shoot for the moon★ ☆ ✰
If you miss★ ☆ ✰
You'll still land among the stars★ ☆ ✰
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| Equinox | Date: Tuesday, 2011-12-27, 3:31 PM | Message # 1011 |
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Social warrior of the administration
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| (Because it simplifies everyday work, in the form of math, science, and more. Name one thing you do during the day that doesn't use any form of Einstein's work.)
~Glacial Malphite: The Shard of the Monolith~
"I hear rumors that the Shard of the Monolith is an unstoppable force. They aren't rumors."-Nausus, on the topic of Malphite's arrival.
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| Zombo104 | Date: Tuesday, 2011-12-27, 4:32 PM | Message # 1012 |
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| Name:Maria Heart
Age:15
Appearance:In Attachment
Weapon(s):Knife
Powers:Teleportation and strength
When were you a Changer?:14th birthday
Bio:Maria was normal like every other kid in this world until she had her 14th birthday party, all of it went terribly wrong, she got angry and ended up slaughtering half her family with inhuman strength. Later the TAPA showed up and locked her away, she's escaped from them 10 times now and is currently on the run.
Other:She has extraordinary senses from being on the run so long, it is next to impossible to sneak up on her.
It's funny until someone gets hurt. Then it's just hilarious.
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| Equinox | Date: Tuesday, 2011-12-27, 5:47 PM | Message # 1013 |
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Social warrior of the administration
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Messages: 7183
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| (Not impossible, it never is.)
~Glacial Malphite: The Shard of the Monolith~
"I hear rumors that the Shard of the Monolith is an unstoppable force. They aren't rumors."-Nausus, on the topic of Malphite's arrival.
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| Demon | Date: Tuesday, 2011-12-27, 7:05 PM | Message # 1014 |
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※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
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| (Equinox has a point. Accepted)
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| Kenzieroo | Date: Tuesday, 2011-12-27, 8:26 PM | Message # 1015 |
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From the Forest
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| ~Cat
Silver and I stood still as the others left, practicly reading eachothers mind. No way was I, no where we going back with the strangers. It was a wast of time and to be honest I don't think either of us liked being in big groups.
On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic
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| Evie | Date: Tuesday, 2011-12-27, 9:44 PM | Message # 1016 |
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RP'er Without A Life
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| I kept my distance but not too far so I could still track him.
Shoot for the moon★ ☆ ✰
If you miss★ ☆ ✰
You'll still land among the stars★ ☆ ✰
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| Kenzieroo | Date: Tuesday, 2011-12-27, 10:58 PM | Message # 1017 |
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From the Forest
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| ~Silver
When I was sure everyone was far from us I start talking. "So what have you been doing?"
"Just hanging out with family." she cracks a smile and we both start laughing. Instant friends then and now.
On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic
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| Supernerd | Date: Tuesday, 2011-12-27, 11:26 PM | Message # 1018 |
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A Hater/Friend of Equinox
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| (Waiting for u demon)
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Demon | Date: Wednesday, 2011-12-28, 7:59 AM | Message # 1019 |
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※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
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| (Actually Im waiting for u)
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| Kenzieroo | Date: Wednesday, 2011-12-28, 10:47 AM | Message # 1020 |
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From the Forest
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| (Lol)
On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic
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