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_/\_The Changers_/\_ (My 3rd roleplay..)
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| Supernerd | Date: Sunday, 2011-10-09, 1:16 AM | Message # 1 |
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| Oh? So you think this is cool? To be a Change? No, its not, its a nightmare, a nightmare that i hope that never happens to anybody else....i only wished that my hope was true...Listen. Having these powers are a pain in the ass,the cops are after us,so are the TAPA, The Anti Power Association... having scientists wanting to know how we do such amazing powers that we do with our hands, or well, anything. Don't ask me how I got them, cause i don't know...I was just a kid just like you, a family...a home, but thats gone now. All i have are my guts, and instincts, to help me pass each minute, each hour, each day...if you see this message,and if you are one of me, read this message carefully. Never trust anyone you see...never trust any one of your own, not even me, y'see,they have spies, they use them..to plot there next strategy on us, on how to capture us, in case were somehow giving a "virus" to anyone..we already had to kill one of our own..lets just hope your not next. All I can say is...its a hard life to be me, a Changer.
(Sorry couldnt really think of anything good to call the people with powers...XD)
-Changer Character sheet-
Name:
Age:
Appearance:
Weapon(s)?(Dont have to have one):
Powers(Two please..no more than that.):
When were you a Changer?:
Bio:
Other: (Sorta for like giving a tip about how you can calm down your character or like foreshadowing)
-T.A.P.A Spy Character Sheet- (No more than two...)
Name:
Age:
Appearance:
Weapons(?):
Powers(Once again no more than two):
When were you a changer?:
When you were caught(Can be at birth...):
Bio:
Other: (same as the other other,)
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Reviews
~Equinox~
Story:3/5
It's got a story, but not a REAL story. It's hard to explain. There's a story from a unknown person's view, but not a plot for any long term story.
Grammar:4/5
It's got some good grammar, but just a FEW mistakes. A very few.
Character detail:4/5
Very nice character sheets and variety of character values. It's well done.
Plot Development:2.5/5
It's got a bit of a plot. Trying to put up with being a changeling. Not a massive or expansive plot though, so it's not a very good plot development, but it's got some possibilities.
Overall rating:3/5
Honestly, this is a pretty good RP. I don't plan on joining, but I must say if I had about 1 cell more in my brain to put up with making a CS, I would gladly join. Don't think this is a bad RP because I don't feel like joining, it's honestly really good. My laziness is just getting to me from work.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
Message edited by Supernerd - Sunday, 2011-10-09, 12:14 PM |
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| Evie | Date: Tuesday, 2011-12-27, 2:09 AM | Message # 991 |
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| I could run fast and silently so Issac couldn't notice me.
Shoot for the moon★ ☆ ✰
If you miss★ ☆ ✰
You'll still land among the stars★ ☆ ✰
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| Zombo104 | Date: Tuesday, 2011-12-27, 2:57 AM | Message # 992 |
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| (Super, may I make another character please?)
It's funny until someone gets hurt. Then it's just hilarious.
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| Demon | Date: Tuesday, 2011-12-27, 11:53 AM | Message # 993 |
 ※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
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| Name: Iris Shinigami
Age: 17
Appearance: In attatchment
Weapon(s)?(Dont have to have one): A strong, silver sword
Powers(Two please..no more than that.): Distort time
When were you a Changer?: Ever since birth
Bio: N/A
Other: N/A
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| Supernerd | Date: Tuesday, 2011-12-27, 12:00 PM | Message # 994 |
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| (No attachment lol, why does everyone forget that?) Added (2011-12-27, 12:00 PM)
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(And zombo, of course, also, for the distorting time thing, will that means you'll be in a different time setting? Cause if so, if one of our characters meet u, then im guessing their personalities would change and stuff.)
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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| Demon | Date: Tuesday, 2011-12-27, 12:02 PM | Message # 995 |
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| (Theres one now XD)
(And for distorting time, she would be in the same time as you. Its just that she could go into the past and future and do crap like that.)
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| Supernerd | Date: Tuesday, 2011-12-27, 12:06 PM | Message # 996 |
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| (Hey Evie, since i know ur a huge movie nut, remember the Incredibles? And how Dash could run really fast and run on water? Cause i may have an idea...)
Isaac-
I was near the city now, I knew that. I was still doubting my hacking skills though.Added (2011-12-27, 12:06 PM)
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(Ik, but normally, in those movies, when time goes ahead for you guys, the regular time shall keep going, as will the future time shall keep running, cause of all the different universes. And if you guys go into the future time, and see one of our characters in the future, then what? Would you just message us a plan about what our character should be like, scarred, personality stuff etc?)
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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| Demon | Date: Tuesday, 2011-12-27, 12:08 PM | Message # 997 |
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| (Im guessing Im accepted)
~Iris~
I walked through the forest, enjoying the day. I can practically do anything! I can even stop time! I thought cheerily.
~Brisk~
I walked back into the cave.
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| Supernerd | Date: Tuesday, 2011-12-27, 12:18 PM | Message # 998 |
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| (Accepted xD)
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
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| Demon | Date: Tuesday, 2011-12-27, 12:47 PM | Message # 999 |
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| (x3)
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| Supernerd | Date: Tuesday, 2011-12-27, 12:59 PM | Message # 1000 |
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| As Brisk walked into the Cave, Cody was still sitting on the rock, eyes closed, eyebrows furrowed.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
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| Demon | Date: Tuesday, 2011-12-27, 1:00 PM | Message # 1001 |
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| I looked at Cody. "You alright?"
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| Supernerd | Date: Tuesday, 2011-12-27, 1:06 PM | Message # 1002 |
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| Cody-
I lost concentration as she asked that question, and my connection towards Forlorn's thoughts disappeared, broke. I opened my eyes and I gasped for breath, breathing heavily as sweat had formed on my forehead. I looked over to see Brisk, was the one that had talked to me. "Sh-" I stopped, she looked so pretty when she was concerned...the look in her eye. That was it. "I mean-uh, yeah, I'm fine." I said as I scrambled to my feet. I felt like an idiot at the moment.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Demon | Date: Tuesday, 2011-12-27, 1:07 PM | Message # 1003 |
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| I laughed abit. "What, were you having a daydream or something?"
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| Equinox | Date: Tuesday, 2011-12-27, 1:22 PM | Message # 1004 |
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| (To explain this, I'd have to explain the concept of time travel.)
(Basically, if you encounter someone in the past, then go back to the future and encounter them again, they will not remember the experience. It will basically be a missing memory, to prevent the destruction of time, through mass-paradox and controversy.)
(This can result in the future being changed dramatically. Let's say in current time, two people have just met up, and because of the two meeting up, they managed to survive a ambush barely. If you go into the past and do something that's slowed one of them down, they would not meet, and the other would die from the ambush, and the other would most likely fall for the same ambush, in which the world would either fall to it's destruction, or another person would take up the hero role. Or in which, there would be the developing process of A new species who will have it's own heroes, to save the species, or bring it back to it's earlier origin. Basically, no matter what you do, There will always be a replacement to do what is needed to be done.)
~Glacial Malphite: The Shard of the Monolith~
"I hear rumors that the Shard of the Monolith is an unstoppable force. They aren't rumors."-Nausus, on the topic of Malphite's arrival.
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| Demon | Date: Tuesday, 2011-12-27, 1:29 PM | Message # 1005 |
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| (Oh... It took me awhile to understand that XD)
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