|
_/\_The Changers_/\_ (My 3rd roleplay..)
|
|
| Supernerd | Date: Sunday, 2011-10-09, 1:16 AM | Message # 1 |
 A Hater/Friend of Equinox
Group: Special
Messages: 3145
Status: Offline
| Oh? So you think this is cool? To be a Change? No, its not, its a nightmare, a nightmare that i hope that never happens to anybody else....i only wished that my hope was true...Listen. Having these powers are a pain in the ass,the cops are after us,so are the TAPA, The Anti Power Association... having scientists wanting to know how we do such amazing powers that we do with our hands, or well, anything. Don't ask me how I got them, cause i don't know...I was just a kid just like you, a family...a home, but thats gone now. All i have are my guts, and instincts, to help me pass each minute, each hour, each day...if you see this message,and if you are one of me, read this message carefully. Never trust anyone you see...never trust any one of your own, not even me, y'see,they have spies, they use them..to plot there next strategy on us, on how to capture us, in case were somehow giving a "virus" to anyone..we already had to kill one of our own..lets just hope your not next. All I can say is...its a hard life to be me, a Changer.
(Sorry couldnt really think of anything good to call the people with powers...XD)
-Changer Character sheet-
Name:
Age:
Appearance:
Weapon(s)?(Dont have to have one):
Powers(Two please..no more than that.):
When were you a Changer?:
Bio:
Other: (Sorta for like giving a tip about how you can calm down your character or like foreshadowing)
-T.A.P.A Spy Character Sheet- (No more than two...)
Name:
Age:
Appearance:
Weapons(?):
Powers(Once again no more than two):
When were you a changer?:
When you were caught(Can be at birth...):
Bio:
Other: (same as the other other,)
-----------------------
Reviews
~Equinox~
Story:3/5
It's got a story, but not a REAL story. It's hard to explain. There's a story from a unknown person's view, but not a plot for any long term story.
Grammar:4/5
It's got some good grammar, but just a FEW mistakes. A very few.
Character detail:4/5
Very nice character sheets and variety of character values. It's well done.
Plot Development:2.5/5
It's got a bit of a plot. Trying to put up with being a changeling. Not a massive or expansive plot though, so it's not a very good plot development, but it's got some possibilities.
Overall rating:3/5
Honestly, this is a pretty good RP. I don't plan on joining, but I must say if I had about 1 cell more in my brain to put up with making a CS, I would gladly join. Don't think this is a bad RP because I don't feel like joining, it's honestly really good. My laziness is just getting to me from work.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
.....
There you have it.
Message edited by Supernerd - Sunday, 2011-10-09, 12:14 PM |
| |
| |
| Evie | Date: Sunday, 2011-12-25, 9:10 PM | Message # 961 |
 RP'er Without A Life
Group: Checked
Messages: 2382
Status: Offline
| "Hey Issac, you ok? Its going to be hard to travel in those conditions."
Shoot for the moon★ ☆ ✰
If you miss★ ☆ ✰
You'll still land among the stars★ ☆ ✰
|
| |
| |
| Kenzieroo | Date: Sunday, 2011-12-25, 9:15 PM | Message # 962 |
|
From the Forest
Group: Moderators
Messages: 7524
Status: Offline
| ~Cat
I nod at her question I was Cat, that was clear and the fact that I nodded felt weird. She craked a smile as she mouthed '20 broken reds' which was an inside joke only The Silver would know and even after ten or so years it was still funny.
On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic
|
| |
| |
| Demon | Date: Monday, 2011-12-26, 7:59 AM | Message # 963 |
 ※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
Group: Administrators
Messages: 9627
Status: Offline
| "Seriously, why the fuck are you being nice to him?"
ಠ_ಠ (づ ￣ ³￣)づ
um
|
| |
| |
| Supernerd | Date: Monday, 2011-12-26, 1:37 PM | Message # 964 |
|
A Hater/Friend of Equinox
Group: Special
Messages: 3145
Status: Offline
| ______________
All you could hear was Isaac's scowl in the distance as he walked away.
Isaac-
They were so Ignorant....yes, that was the word, those morons. I can finally get away from here....I know exactly what i'm going to do....but I guess some hacking would have to be involved....and major traveling....oh well. "Hehe" I chuckled quietly.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
.....
There you have it.
|
| |
| |
| Demon | Date: Monday, 2011-12-26, 1:39 PM | Message # 965 |
|
※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
Group: Administrators
Messages: 9627
Status: Offline
| "And where the hell do you think you're going?!" I scowled, yelling to Isaac.
I morphed into a large dragon, and rocketed into the air. I blocked Isaacs path completely.
ಠ_ಠ (づ ￣ ³￣)づ
um
|
| |
| |
| Kenzieroo | Date: Monday, 2011-12-26, 1:42 PM | Message # 966 |
|
From the Forest
Group: Moderators
Messages: 7524
Status: Offline
| ~Silver
I watch silently as one guy, what ever his name was trys to run away. Brisk stoping him, I should have left a long time ago, glad I didn't though.
On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic
|
| |
| |
| Supernerd | Date: Monday, 2011-12-26, 2:27 PM | Message # 967 |
|
A Hater/Friend of Equinox
Group: Special
Messages: 3145
Status: Offline
| Isaac-
I stopped, breathing somewhat heavily for a couple seconds, in silence. Then saying. "I'm going to confront someone. And that someone, is certainly not you. Now move, otherwise, I won't mind the detour of going around you." I said, standing there.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
.....
There you have it.
|
| |
| |
| Equinox | Date: Monday, 2011-12-26, 3:05 PM | Message # 968 |
 Social warrior of the administration
Group: Administrators
Messages: 7183
Status: Offline
| (Is there going to be a response from cody or not? I need to know so I can do something else if there wont be.)
~Glacial Malphite: The Shard of the Monolith~
"I hear rumors that the Shard of the Monolith is an unstoppable force. They aren't rumors."-Nausus, on the topic of Malphite's arrival.
|
| |
| |
| Evie | Date: Monday, 2011-12-26, 3:50 PM | Message # 969 |
|
RP'er Without A Life
Group: Checked
Messages: 2382
Status: Offline
| (I don't know why I was being so nice to Issac, Christmas spirit I think  )
"Hes weak, if we did just let him go he wouldn't do anything to us."
Shoot for the moon★ ☆ ✰
If you miss★ ☆ ✰
You'll still land among the stars★ ☆ ✰
|
| |
| |
| Kenzieroo | Date: Monday, 2011-12-26, 3:53 PM | Message # 970 |
|
From the Forest
Group: Moderators
Messages: 7524
Status: Offline
| ~Silver
I walk over the Cat, we where both standing far from the 'main' group but I had been to the east and her to the northwest. We where 'out of the picture'.
"Hey long to no see, it's been what ten years?" Cat asked me, I simple shrug.
On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic
|
| |
| |
| Zombo104 | Date: Monday, 2011-12-26, 5:41 PM | Message # 971 |
 Famous RP'er
Group: Checked
Messages: 831
Status: Offline
| I looked at Isaac, Come back here, NOW I began to wire the thought into his brain.
It's funny until someone gets hurt. Then it's just hilarious.
|
| |
| |
| Kenzieroo | Date: Monday, 2011-12-26, 5:47 PM | Message # 972 |
|
From the Forest
Group: Moderators
Messages: 7524
Status: Offline
| ~Cat
"You not stuck at home, I guess you where found out?" I asked her.
"Yea, about three weeks ago. I found these people today." She sighed.
On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic
|
| |
| |
| Supernerd | Date: Monday, 2011-12-26, 5:56 PM | Message # 973 |
|
A Hater/Friend of Equinox
Group: Special
Messages: 3145
Status: Offline
| (Oh sorry didnt see the response)
Cody-
I was silent for a moment at this response. So if you know whats happening the future, then wouldn't it make sense that you would be able to see into the past? Also, if you know whats going to happen in the future, then what's going to happen to me? Is everything going to change soon? The T.A.P.A Agency? Will Equality soon spread to everyone? Changers and humans alike? (The answer to the equality question will determine if Isaac will succeed.)
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
.....
There you have it.
Message edited by Supernerd - Monday, 2011-12-26, 5:57 PM |
| |
| |
| Equinox | Date: Monday, 2011-12-26, 6:44 PM | Message # 974 |
|
Social warrior of the administration
Group: Administrators
Messages: 7183
Status: Offline
| There will never be full equality. Just like other forms of prejudice, racism and alike, there will always be those who will hate those of another kind. Just as there are those who are born to kill, and those to stop them, there are those to hate, and those to silence those opinions. Now what I want to know is, which one are you?
~Glacial Malphite: The Shard of the Monolith~
"I hear rumors that the Shard of the Monolith is an unstoppable force. They aren't rumors."-Nausus, on the topic of Malphite's arrival.
|
| |
| |
| Demon | Date: Monday, 2011-12-26, 6:46 PM | Message # 975 |
|
※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
Group: Administrators
Messages: 9627
Status: Offline
| "Oh, verry funny Virra. He has connections with TAPA. The little prick would bloody tell on us!" I snarled. I turned to Isaac. "Nice try"
ಠ_ಠ (づ ￣ ³￣)づ
um
|
| |
| |
