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_/\_The Changers_/\_ (My 3rd roleplay..)
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| Supernerd | Date: Sunday, 2011-10-09, 1:16 AM | Message # 1 |
 A Hater/Friend of Equinox
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| Oh? So you think this is cool? To be a Change? No, its not, its a nightmare, a nightmare that i hope that never happens to anybody else....i only wished that my hope was true...Listen. Having these powers are a pain in the ass,the cops are after us,so are the TAPA, The Anti Power Association... having scientists wanting to know how we do such amazing powers that we do with our hands, or well, anything. Don't ask me how I got them, cause i don't know...I was just a kid just like you, a family...a home, but thats gone now. All i have are my guts, and instincts, to help me pass each minute, each hour, each day...if you see this message,and if you are one of me, read this message carefully. Never trust anyone you see...never trust any one of your own, not even me, y'see,they have spies, they use them..to plot there next strategy on us, on how to capture us, in case were somehow giving a "virus" to anyone..we already had to kill one of our own..lets just hope your not next. All I can say is...its a hard life to be me, a Changer.
(Sorry couldnt really think of anything good to call the people with powers...XD)
-Changer Character sheet-
Name:
Age:
Appearance:
Weapon(s)?(Dont have to have one):
Powers(Two please..no more than that.):
When were you a Changer?:
Bio:
Other: (Sorta for like giving a tip about how you can calm down your character or like foreshadowing)
-T.A.P.A Spy Character Sheet- (No more than two...)
Name:
Age:
Appearance:
Weapons(?):
Powers(Once again no more than two):
When were you a changer?:
When you were caught(Can be at birth...):
Bio:
Other: (same as the other other,)
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Reviews
~Equinox~
Story:3/5
It's got a story, but not a REAL story. It's hard to explain. There's a story from a unknown person's view, but not a plot for any long term story.
Grammar:4/5
It's got some good grammar, but just a FEW mistakes. A very few.
Character detail:4/5
Very nice character sheets and variety of character values. It's well done.
Plot Development:2.5/5
It's got a bit of a plot. Trying to put up with being a changeling. Not a massive or expansive plot though, so it's not a very good plot development, but it's got some possibilities.
Overall rating:3/5
Honestly, this is a pretty good RP. I don't plan on joining, but I must say if I had about 1 cell more in my brain to put up with making a CS, I would gladly join. Don't think this is a bad RP because I don't feel like joining, it's honestly really good. My laziness is just getting to me from work.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
Message edited by Supernerd - Sunday, 2011-10-09, 12:14 PM |
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| Equinox | Date: Saturday, 2011-12-24, 9:50 PM | Message # 931 |
 Social warrior of the administration
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| "For all I know, that could be what my mother did for a living. I didn't know 'em."
~Glacial Malphite: The Shard of the Monolith~
"I hear rumors that the Shard of the Monolith is an unstoppable force. They aren't rumors."-Nausus, on the topic of Malphite's arrival.
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| Kenzieroo | Date: Saturday, 2011-12-24, 10:40 PM | Message # 932 |
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From the Forest
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| ~Cat
"Cat isn't exactly a creative name either."
On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic
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| Supernerd | Date: Saturday, 2011-12-24, 11:53 PM | Message # 933 |
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A Hater/Friend of Equinox
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Messages: 3145
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| (Forlorn...so im guessing some fighting's gonna happen? Either that or stupidness. :P)
Isaac-
I shakily, slowly getting up, my eye twitched as I winced getting up pushing off my knee to help me stand up. I stood there breathing heavily. I had dropped the pill, not even noticing that I had it in the first place. I coughed a little bit as I was shaky, turning around. Seeing, Brisk, (Zombo), and three other people, including a shady looking person, who I didn't even know of, he didn't look like a T.A.P.A. agent, so i'm guessing he isnt supposed to be the support to save my ass. I scowled slightly. I glared at the man, but mostly cause I was suspicious. My glare looked like a scowl cause of the frustration in my eyes and the blood that stained the right part of my bangs.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Evie | Date: Sunday, 2011-12-25, 0:15 AM | Message # 934 |
 RP'er Without A Life
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| (I dunno forlorn just means lonely and sad; forsaken. )
"How exactly do you know the future?" I asked the man who called himself Forlorn.
Shoot for the moon★ ☆ ✰
If you miss★ ☆ ✰
You'll still land among the stars★ ☆ ✰
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| Demon | Date: Sunday, 2011-12-25, 5:37 AM | Message # 935 |
 ※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
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| "Maybe the guys a changer"
ಠ_ಠ (づ ￣ ³￣)づ
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| Kenzieroo | Date: Sunday, 2011-12-25, 10:01 AM | Message # 936 |
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From the Forest
Group: Moderators
Messages: 7524
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| ~Cat
I stood quietly, I felt award just some random ease dropper. Now more awkward sine I was caught.
On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic
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| Equinox | Date: Sunday, 2011-12-25, 10:13 AM | Message # 937 |
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Social warrior of the administration
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| (No, forlorn means regret.)
"Because,"
A red eye with markings in it lit up from the darkness covering his face.
"I just can."
~Glacial Malphite: The Shard of the Monolith~
"I hear rumors that the Shard of the Monolith is an unstoppable force. They aren't rumors."-Nausus, on the topic of Malphite's arrival.
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| Kenzieroo | Date: Sunday, 2011-12-25, 10:15 AM | Message # 938 |
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From the Forest
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| (It means all of those things.)
On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic
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| Demon | Date: Sunday, 2011-12-25, 10:22 AM | Message # 939 |
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※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
Group: Administrators
Messages: 9627
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| I grunted, un-impressed. "Thats great and all, but I'm busy"
ಠ_ಠ (づ ￣ ³￣)づ
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| Kenzieroo | Date: Sunday, 2011-12-25, 10:31 AM | Message # 940 |
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From the Forest
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| ~Cat
I was about to say that was cool then I stoped myself, I felt weird about saying it. Well mostly I felt weird being here at all with so many, people.
On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic
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| Equinox | Date: Sunday, 2011-12-25, 10:33 AM | Message # 941 |
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Social warrior of the administration
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| "Alright, just watch out for that snare trap, set up four trees north." I say, as I walk off.
~Glacial Malphite: The Shard of the Monolith~
"I hear rumors that the Shard of the Monolith is an unstoppable force. They aren't rumors."-Nausus, on the topic of Malphite's arrival.
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| Demon | Date: Sunday, 2011-12-25, 10:34 AM | Message # 942 |
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※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
Group: Administrators
Messages: 9627
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| "Hn. Thanks, I guess"
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| Kenzieroo | Date: Sunday, 2011-12-25, 10:37 AM | Message # 943 |
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From the Forest
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| ~Cat
"..." still wanting to talk but refraining from doing so.
~Silver
"Ok then, let's find them," I said following her. I look at the recked collar and pick it up stuffing it back in my pocket, maybe it will come in handy.
On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic
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| Equinox | Date: Sunday, 2011-12-25, 10:38 AM | Message # 944 |
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Social warrior of the administration
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| I began to walk off, into the forest, going east.
~Glacial Malphite: The Shard of the Monolith~
"I hear rumors that the Shard of the Monolith is an unstoppable force. They aren't rumors."-Nausus, on the topic of Malphite's arrival.
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| Supernerd | Date: Sunday, 2011-12-25, 1:37 PM | Message # 945 |
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A Hater/Friend of Equinox
Group: Special
Messages: 3145
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| Isaac-
I stared at the man as he walked away. I looked over at the group. "Who the hell was he? One of your changer refugee friends as well?" I retorted as I gritted my teeth.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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