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_/\_The Changers_/\_ (My 3rd roleplay..)
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| Supernerd | Date: Sunday, 2011-10-09, 1:16 AM | Message # 1 |
 A Hater/Friend of Equinox
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| Oh? So you think this is cool? To be a Change? No, its not, its a nightmare, a nightmare that i hope that never happens to anybody else....i only wished that my hope was true...Listen. Having these powers are a pain in the ass,the cops are after us,so are the TAPA, The Anti Power Association... having scientists wanting to know how we do such amazing powers that we do with our hands, or well, anything. Don't ask me how I got them, cause i don't know...I was just a kid just like you, a family...a home, but thats gone now. All i have are my guts, and instincts, to help me pass each minute, each hour, each day...if you see this message,and if you are one of me, read this message carefully. Never trust anyone you see...never trust any one of your own, not even me, y'see,they have spies, they use them..to plot there next strategy on us, on how to capture us, in case were somehow giving a "virus" to anyone..we already had to kill one of our own..lets just hope your not next. All I can say is...its a hard life to be me, a Changer.
(Sorry couldnt really think of anything good to call the people with powers...XD)
-Changer Character sheet-
Name:
Age:
Appearance:
Weapon(s)?(Dont have to have one):
Powers(Two please..no more than that.):
When were you a Changer?:
Bio:
Other: (Sorta for like giving a tip about how you can calm down your character or like foreshadowing)
-T.A.P.A Spy Character Sheet- (No more than two...)
Name:
Age:
Appearance:
Weapons(?):
Powers(Once again no more than two):
When were you a changer?:
When you were caught(Can be at birth...):
Bio:
Other: (same as the other other,)
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Reviews
~Equinox~
Story:3/5
It's got a story, but not a REAL story. It's hard to explain. There's a story from a unknown person's view, but not a plot for any long term story.
Grammar:4/5
It's got some good grammar, but just a FEW mistakes. A very few.
Character detail:4/5
Very nice character sheets and variety of character values. It's well done.
Plot Development:2.5/5
It's got a bit of a plot. Trying to put up with being a changeling. Not a massive or expansive plot though, so it's not a very good plot development, but it's got some possibilities.
Overall rating:3/5
Honestly, this is a pretty good RP. I don't plan on joining, but I must say if I had about 1 cell more in my brain to put up with making a CS, I would gladly join. Don't think this is a bad RP because I don't feel like joining, it's honestly really good. My laziness is just getting to me from work.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
Message edited by Supernerd - Sunday, 2011-10-09, 12:14 PM |
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| Kenzieroo | Date: Sunday, 2011-12-25, 1:38 PM | Message # 946 |
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From the Forest
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| ~Cat
I shrug, "Aparently, no one knows. What was his name, Forlorn?"
On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic
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| Supernerd | Date: Sunday, 2011-12-25, 1:45 PM | Message # 947 |
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| Isaac-
"Forlorn..." I said quietly to myself, closing my eyes, trying to see if I remember his name...
Cody-
I was sitting down on a rock in the cave, since I had regained my energy. I sat there in silence, 'listening.' I could feel that faint grip, I was now in Isaac's thoughts. He was with the rest of the group, he was thinking of someone named Forlorn.... "Forlorn...hmph," The name tasted funny on my tongue. I let go of Isaac's thoughts, and I searched again, 'listening' for Forlorn...I closed my eyes harder..focusing deeper. I could sorta sense something...but it was definitely not familiar...I tried to enter the thoughts...but something was preventing me from doing it. (Forlorn's preventing it, since im sorta just assuming if i ever did try, he would either confront me with thoughts or reject my character's attempt to get into his brain. Just something u would probably do Equi. :P But i can always edit this post if you dont like it.)
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Kenzieroo | Date: Sunday, 2011-12-25, 1:47 PM | Message # 948 |
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From the Forest
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| (I agree with you.)
On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic
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| Evie | Date: Sunday, 2011-12-25, 3:29 PM | Message # 949 |
 RP'er Without A Life
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| "I've never seen that guy before in my life.." I answered Issac's question.
Shoot for the moon★ ☆ ✰
If you miss★ ☆ ✰
You'll still land among the stars★ ☆ ✰
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| Zombo104 | Date: Sunday, 2011-12-25, 4:36 PM | Message # 950 |
 Famous RP'er
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| I looked down at Isaac's leg. "What the hell happened to you?" I grabbed some bandages out of my pocket and tossed them to him.
It's funny until someone gets hurt. Then it's just hilarious.
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| Supernerd | Date: Sunday, 2011-12-25, 4:48 PM | Message # 951 |
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| (Now bandages....THE FUCK?!?!?!?!?! Well, im waiting for Equi.)
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Kenzieroo | Date: Sunday, 2011-12-25, 5:30 PM | Message # 952 |
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From the Forest
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| (Wow.)
~Silver
I stand to the side, waiting for nothing.
On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic
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| Equinox | Date: Sunday, 2011-12-25, 5:40 PM | Message # 953 |
 Social warrior of the administration
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| Yes? The voice of the man came, through his mind.
~Glacial Malphite: The Shard of the Monolith~
"I hear rumors that the Shard of the Monolith is an unstoppable force. They aren't rumors."-Nausus, on the topic of Malphite's arrival.
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| Supernerd | Date: Sunday, 2011-12-25, 6:36 PM | Message # 954 |
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| Cody-
I finally was let in to his thoughts, hearing a mans voice. 'yes? He said, I sat there silently for a sec. Then responded. Who are you? Why are you not even suprised that you hear a voice in your head? I asked, still in the same pose, sitting down, eyes closed and tight.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Equinox | Date: Sunday, 2011-12-25, 8:01 PM | Message # 955 |
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| Because I knew it was going to happen.
~Glacial Malphite: The Shard of the Monolith~
"I hear rumors that the Shard of the Monolith is an unstoppable force. They aren't rumors."-Nausus, on the topic of Malphite's arrival.
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| Supernerd | Date: Sunday, 2011-12-25, 8:32 PM | Message # 956 |
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| Cody-
I opened my eyes slightly in surprise, then closed them, quickly focusing again on Forlorn. Ignoring the wave of shock that had overcome my body. Forlorn...what the hell are you? Don't give me a pathetic white lie, or answer. I want a direct answer. I also assume you know where I am too hm? I said. I was concerned, confused, and somewhat doubtly, but I may as well play along.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
Message edited by Supernerd - Sunday, 2011-12-25, 8:33 PM |
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| Demon | Date: Sunday, 2011-12-25, 8:33 PM | Message # 957 |
 ※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
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| "Oh, his leg? I bit it"
ಠ_ಠ (づ ￣ ³￣)づ
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| Supernerd | Date: Sunday, 2011-12-25, 8:35 PM | Message # 958 |
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| Isaac-
"Damn right you did bitch." I snapped at Brisk, and shouldered past her as I limped away, I was dead set on a direction. I wasn't heading to T.A.P.A. No, those retards can't do a thing.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Kenzieroo | Date: Sunday, 2011-12-25, 8:42 PM | Message # 959 |
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From the Forest
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| ~Silver
I looked at the people, my heart skips a beat when I see the new girl. I've seen before I swear, but I was 5 it could be the same person could it? Soon her eyes brushed mine and for a half a second it seemed that we read each others minds.
I start to say something but I came up nothing. My mouth felt dry like sand paper, I swallow nothing down hard.
"Cat?" the one word came out weird, almosted craked but not quiet. Close to a whisper, but to loud.
~Cat
My eyes glazed over, so this is really Silver or is it. I hadn't seen her in a long time, over ten years at lest. Probably the only person I'd been friends with at first sight. That might be why I could recognize her.
On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic
Message edited by Kenzieroo - Sunday, 2011-12-25, 9:05 PM |
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| Equinox | Date: Sunday, 2011-12-25, 9:03 PM | Message # 960 |
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| No, I do not know where you are. I can see in to the future, I am not a human radar. I would have to look into your future, to know for myself.
~Glacial Malphite: The Shard of the Monolith~
"I hear rumors that the Shard of the Monolith is an unstoppable force. They aren't rumors."-Nausus, on the topic of Malphite's arrival.
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