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_/\_The Changers_/\_ (My 3rd roleplay..)
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| Supernerd | Date: Sunday, 2011-10-09, 1:16 AM | Message # 1 |
 A Hater/Friend of Equinox
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| Oh? So you think this is cool? To be a Change? No, its not, its a nightmare, a nightmare that i hope that never happens to anybody else....i only wished that my hope was true...Listen. Having these powers are a pain in the ass,the cops are after us,so are the TAPA, The Anti Power Association... having scientists wanting to know how we do such amazing powers that we do with our hands, or well, anything. Don't ask me how I got them, cause i don't know...I was just a kid just like you, a family...a home, but thats gone now. All i have are my guts, and instincts, to help me pass each minute, each hour, each day...if you see this message,and if you are one of me, read this message carefully. Never trust anyone you see...never trust any one of your own, not even me, y'see,they have spies, they use them..to plot there next strategy on us, on how to capture us, in case were somehow giving a "virus" to anyone..we already had to kill one of our own..lets just hope your not next. All I can say is...its a hard life to be me, a Changer.
(Sorry couldnt really think of anything good to call the people with powers...XD)
-Changer Character sheet-
Name:
Age:
Appearance:
Weapon(s)?(Dont have to have one):
Powers(Two please..no more than that.):
When were you a Changer?:
Bio:
Other: (Sorta for like giving a tip about how you can calm down your character or like foreshadowing)
-T.A.P.A Spy Character Sheet- (No more than two...)
Name:
Age:
Appearance:
Weapons(?):
Powers(Once again no more than two):
When were you a changer?:
When you were caught(Can be at birth...):
Bio:
Other: (same as the other other,)
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Reviews
~Equinox~
Story:3/5
It's got a story, but not a REAL story. It's hard to explain. There's a story from a unknown person's view, but not a plot for any long term story.
Grammar:4/5
It's got some good grammar, but just a FEW mistakes. A very few.
Character detail:4/5
Very nice character sheets and variety of character values. It's well done.
Plot Development:2.5/5
It's got a bit of a plot. Trying to put up with being a changeling. Not a massive or expansive plot though, so it's not a very good plot development, but it's got some possibilities.
Overall rating:3/5
Honestly, this is a pretty good RP. I don't plan on joining, but I must say if I had about 1 cell more in my brain to put up with making a CS, I would gladly join. Don't think this is a bad RP because I don't feel like joining, it's honestly really good. My laziness is just getting to me from work.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
Message edited by Supernerd - Sunday, 2011-10-09, 12:14 PM |
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| Evie | Date: Monday, 2011-12-26, 7:30 PM | Message # 976 |
 RP'er Without A Life
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| "I don't get why we don't just kill him then.."
Shoot for the moon★ ☆ ✰
If you miss★ ☆ ✰
You'll still land among the stars★ ☆ ✰
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| Supernerd | Date: Monday, 2011-12-26, 7:40 PM | Message # 977 |
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A Hater/Friend of Equinox
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| Isaac-
I stared at Brisk as she rattled off at the rest of the group, telling nothing of what I intended. "Those T.A.P.A retards aren't going to help, I've lost lots of faith in them, and maybe gained a little with you, which could easily be deminished." I replied. "There's only one person who I tend to confront, who has the most power over the human society of Politics. Now, leave me alone. Don't try to kill me, cause if you do, you might've just ruined your lives." I felt that Icy cold feeling as I turned invisible, and walked away from Brisk. I didn't walk around her, I just simply took a left and straight on.
Cody-
I thought over it for a couple seconds. I'm the one who silences and stops those, who are too ignorant or arrogant to understand such things. And I must ask, what are you?
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Equinox | Date: Monday, 2011-12-26, 7:51 PM | Message # 978 |
 Social warrior of the administration
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| I am the one, who makes it happen.
~Glacial Malphite: The Shard of the Monolith~
"I hear rumors that the Shard of the Monolith is an unstoppable force. They aren't rumors."-Nausus, on the topic of Malphite's arrival.
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| Supernerd | Date: Monday, 2011-12-26, 7:57 PM | Message # 979 |
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A Hater/Friend of Equinox
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Messages: 3145
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| Hmph, Really now?. How so? You can look into time, doesn't mean that you can change it...or can you? I asked, shifting somewhat uncomfortably on the smooth rock I sat on.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Demon | Date: Monday, 2011-12-26, 8:23 PM | Message # 980 |
 ※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
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Messages: 9627
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| I grunted. "We'll find you later. Lets get going" I turned human and headed for the cave.
ಠ_ಠ (づ ￣ ³￣)づ
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| Equinox | Date: Monday, 2011-12-26, 8:52 PM | Message # 981 |
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Social warrior of the administration
Group: Administrators
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| I look into the future, and I change what I please. If I don't like it, I remove it, before it becomes a problem. All I have to do is find a person with the ability to distort time, and we could remove anything we want.
~Glacial Malphite: The Shard of the Monolith~
"I hear rumors that the Shard of the Monolith is an unstoppable force. They aren't rumors."-Nausus, on the topic of Malphite's arrival.
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| Evie | Date: Monday, 2011-12-26, 9:09 PM | Message # 982 |
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RP'er Without A Life
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| I didn't follow brisk, I followed Issac making sure he couldn't see me. I tracked him by following his footsteps.
Shoot for the moon★ ☆ ✰
If you miss★ ☆ ✰
You'll still land among the stars★ ☆ ✰
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| Supernerd | Date: Monday, 2011-12-26, 9:26 PM | Message # 983 |
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A Hater/Friend of Equinox
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Messages: 3145
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| Cody-
I was quiet for a couple seconds. Maybe its good that there aren't anyone who can. I replied.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Demon | Date: Monday, 2011-12-26, 9:46 PM | Message # 984 |
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※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
Group: Administrators
Messages: 9627
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| (Hey, Equinox...
Can I make a person that can distort time?
>:3)
ಠ_ಠ (づ ￣ ³￣)づ
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| Supernerd | Date: Monday, 2011-12-26, 10:04 PM | Message # 985 |
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A Hater/Friend of Equinox
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Messages: 3145
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| (Normally you should ask ME if your allowed XD And your allowed.)
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Kenzieroo | Date: Monday, 2011-12-26, 10:37 PM | Message # 986 |
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From the Forest
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| (Wow.)
On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic
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| Demon | Date: Monday, 2011-12-26, 10:39 PM | Message # 987 |
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※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
Group: Administrators
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| (:3
I'm just collaborating abit...)
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| Kenzieroo | Date: Monday, 2011-12-26, 10:40 PM | Message # 988 |
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From the Forest
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| (Lol)
On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic
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| Equinox | Date: Monday, 2011-12-26, 11:23 PM | Message # 989 |
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Social warrior of the administration
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| (Ah, sure go ahead. The perfect threat, considering the surprise I have in store for the later story.)
(Let's just say, the surprise involves him, and yet it doesn't.)
Oh, but there is. You see, I met a child, long ago, that I could tell, had true power. The way time seemed to react oddly within clocks and such when she was around, made it clear, she would be a great asset one day. The gods GAVE ME her presence, for my own greater good! And once we meet up, we shall purge the world of the darkness, and all the filth whom stand before our path.
Now, do you plan to stand in our paths?
~Glacial Malphite: The Shard of the Monolith~
"I hear rumors that the Shard of the Monolith is an unstoppable force. They aren't rumors."-Nausus, on the topic of Malphite's arrival.
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| Supernerd | Date: Tuesday, 2011-12-27, 1:28 AM | Message # 990 |
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A Hater/Friend of Equinox
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Messages: 3145
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| (Who is 'he'? are you meaning Cody? Or your character??)
Cody-
I was somewhat taken aback. He was clearly hinting a threat. Well as long as it is used for good. Then I won't be. But if you change your intentions and go to the bad. I WILL meet you, and block your path.
Isaac-
I was invisible, now running, while trying to figure out how to hack a commercial airplane place for tickets. It sounded rediculous sure, impossible, sure. But I had enough. I was going to confront the government who set up this T.A.P.A. Shit.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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