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_/\_The Changers_/\_ (My 3rd roleplay..)
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| Supernerd | Date: Sunday, 2011-10-09, 1:16 AM | Message # 1 |
 A Hater/Friend of Equinox
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| Oh? So you think this is cool? To be a Change? No, its not, its a nightmare, a nightmare that i hope that never happens to anybody else....i only wished that my hope was true...Listen. Having these powers are a pain in the ass,the cops are after us,so are the TAPA, The Anti Power Association... having scientists wanting to know how we do such amazing powers that we do with our hands, or well, anything. Don't ask me how I got them, cause i don't know...I was just a kid just like you, a family...a home, but thats gone now. All i have are my guts, and instincts, to help me pass each minute, each hour, each day...if you see this message,and if you are one of me, read this message carefully. Never trust anyone you see...never trust any one of your own, not even me, y'see,they have spies, they use them..to plot there next strategy on us, on how to capture us, in case were somehow giving a "virus" to anyone..we already had to kill one of our own..lets just hope your not next. All I can say is...its a hard life to be me, a Changer.
(Sorry couldnt really think of anything good to call the people with powers...XD)
-Changer Character sheet-
Name:
Age:
Appearance:
Weapon(s)?(Dont have to have one):
Powers(Two please..no more than that.):
When were you a Changer?:
Bio:
Other: (Sorta for like giving a tip about how you can calm down your character or like foreshadowing)
-T.A.P.A Spy Character Sheet- (No more than two...)
Name:
Age:
Appearance:
Weapons(?):
Powers(Once again no more than two):
When were you a changer?:
When you were caught(Can be at birth...):
Bio:
Other: (same as the other other,)
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Reviews
~Equinox~
Story:3/5
It's got a story, but not a REAL story. It's hard to explain. There's a story from a unknown person's view, but not a plot for any long term story.
Grammar:4/5
It's got some good grammar, but just a FEW mistakes. A very few.
Character detail:4/5
Very nice character sheets and variety of character values. It's well done.
Plot Development:2.5/5
It's got a bit of a plot. Trying to put up with being a changeling. Not a massive or expansive plot though, so it's not a very good plot development, but it's got some possibilities.
Overall rating:3/5
Honestly, this is a pretty good RP. I don't plan on joining, but I must say if I had about 1 cell more in my brain to put up with making a CS, I would gladly join. Don't think this is a bad RP because I don't feel like joining, it's honestly really good. My laziness is just getting to me from work.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
Message edited by Supernerd - Sunday, 2011-10-09, 12:14 PM |
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| Demon | Date: Saturday, 2011-12-24, 11:28 AM | Message # 916 |
 ※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
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| I narrowed my eyes. "I never said you did"
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| Kenzieroo | Date: Saturday, 2011-12-24, 11:30 AM | Message # 917 |
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From the Forest
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| ~Cat
I shrug, this well interesting different then the outcome I predicted.
On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic
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| Demon | Date: Saturday, 2011-12-24, 11:33 AM | Message # 918 |
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| "Anyways... Who are you?"
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| Kenzieroo | Date: Saturday, 2011-12-24, 11:37 AM | Message # 919 |
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From the Forest
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| ~Cat
"My names Cat." I say reluctant because so many people make fun of my name.
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| Demon | Date: Saturday, 2011-12-24, 11:38 AM | Message # 920 |
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| I nodded. "I'm Brisk" I held out a hand.
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| Kenzieroo | Date: Saturday, 2011-12-24, 11:44 AM | Message # 921 |
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From the Forest
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| ~Cat
I hesitate then shake her hand.
On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic
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| Demon | Date: Saturday, 2011-12-24, 11:45 AM | Message # 922 |
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| I smiled, and pulled back. "Thats Virra" I pointed to Virra. "Thats Isaac." I scowled, pointing to Isaac. "And thats... Hey, who are you?" I looked at the man in blackk.
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| Kenzieroo | Date: Saturday, 2011-12-24, 11:47 AM | Message # 923 |
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From the Forest
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| ~Cat
"Nice to met you, I guess."
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| Demon | Date: Saturday, 2011-12-24, 1:09 PM | Message # 924 |
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| I smiled.
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| Evie | Date: Saturday, 2011-12-24, 2:13 PM | Message # 925 |
 RP'er Without A Life
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| I ignored Brisks question and put the pill into Issac's hand. When I turned around there was another girl. "Hi, I'm Virra." I told her happily.
Shoot for the moon★ ☆ ✰
If you miss★ ☆ ✰
You'll still land among the stars★ ☆ ✰
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| Zombo104 | Date: Saturday, 2011-12-24, 7:09 PM | Message # 926 |
 Famous RP'er
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| "Ok well now that that's over with lets go find the others." I said starting to walk towards the mouth of the cave.
It's funny until someone gets hurt. Then it's just hilarious.
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| Equinox | Date: Saturday, 2011-12-24, 7:55 PM | Message # 927 |
 Social warrior of the administration
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| "I already told you, I'm someone who knows what is to come, in the future. That is all you need to know. If you need a name to call me, make it Forlorn."
(If you know what the name means, you'll know what is to come.)
~Glacial Malphite: The Shard of the Monolith~
"I hear rumors that the Shard of the Monolith is an unstoppable force. They aren't rumors."-Nausus, on the topic of Malphite's arrival.
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| Demon | Date: Saturday, 2011-12-24, 7:58 PM | Message # 928 |
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| "Oh, ya, what a great name. I'm guessing you had wonderful parents, for them to name you Forlorn. So are you hopeless?"
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| Equinox | Date: Saturday, 2011-12-24, 8:56 PM | Message # 929 |
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| "No, but I can tell you right now, you'll regret the future."
"Also, if you can figure out who my parents are, I can easily get you a answer on that name."
~Glacial Malphite: The Shard of the Monolith~
"I hear rumors that the Shard of the Monolith is an unstoppable force. They aren't rumors."-Nausus, on the topic of Malphite's arrival.
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| Demon | Date: Saturday, 2011-12-24, 9:01 PM | Message # 930 |
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| "Eh, deffinetly can't be worse than mine. Tch, my parents sucked" I shrugged.
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