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_/\_The Changers_/\_ (My 3rd roleplay..)
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| Supernerd | Date: Sunday, 2011-10-09, 1:16 AM | Message # 1 |
 A Hater/Friend of Equinox
Group: Special
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| Oh? So you think this is cool? To be a Change? No, its not, its a nightmare, a nightmare that i hope that never happens to anybody else....i only wished that my hope was true...Listen. Having these powers are a pain in the ass,the cops are after us,so are the TAPA, The Anti Power Association... having scientists wanting to know how we do such amazing powers that we do with our hands, or well, anything. Don't ask me how I got them, cause i don't know...I was just a kid just like you, a family...a home, but thats gone now. All i have are my guts, and instincts, to help me pass each minute, each hour, each day...if you see this message,and if you are one of me, read this message carefully. Never trust anyone you see...never trust any one of your own, not even me, y'see,they have spies, they use them..to plot there next strategy on us, on how to capture us, in case were somehow giving a "virus" to anyone..we already had to kill one of our own..lets just hope your not next. All I can say is...its a hard life to be me, a Changer.
(Sorry couldnt really think of anything good to call the people with powers...XD)
-Changer Character sheet-
Name:
Age:
Appearance:
Weapon(s)?(Dont have to have one):
Powers(Two please..no more than that.):
When were you a Changer?:
Bio:
Other: (Sorta for like giving a tip about how you can calm down your character or like foreshadowing)
-T.A.P.A Spy Character Sheet- (No more than two...)
Name:
Age:
Appearance:
Weapons(?):
Powers(Once again no more than two):
When were you a changer?:
When you were caught(Can be at birth...):
Bio:
Other: (same as the other other,)
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Reviews
~Equinox~
Story:3/5
It's got a story, but not a REAL story. It's hard to explain. There's a story from a unknown person's view, but not a plot for any long term story.
Grammar:4/5
It's got some good grammar, but just a FEW mistakes. A very few.
Character detail:4/5
Very nice character sheets and variety of character values. It's well done.
Plot Development:2.5/5
It's got a bit of a plot. Trying to put up with being a changeling. Not a massive or expansive plot though, so it's not a very good plot development, but it's got some possibilities.
Overall rating:3/5
Honestly, this is a pretty good RP. I don't plan on joining, but I must say if I had about 1 cell more in my brain to put up with making a CS, I would gladly join. Don't think this is a bad RP because I don't feel like joining, it's honestly really good. My laziness is just getting to me from work.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
Message edited by Supernerd - Sunday, 2011-10-09, 12:14 PM |
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| Supernerd | Date: Friday, 2011-12-23, 10:43 PM | Message # 886 |
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A Hater/Friend of Equinox
Group: Special
Messages: 3145
Status: Offline
| (How about this Zebra, How about you say. "The more you bitch, the more you wont be on the website now shutup." Cause she's pissing me off.)
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Kenzieroo | Date: Friday, 2011-12-23, 10:47 PM | Message # 887 |
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From the Forest
Group: Moderators
Messages: 7524
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| ~Cat
I move a few inches closer, why do I even care what there talking about?!?
On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic
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| ZebraLover | Date: Friday, 2011-12-23, 11:08 PM | Message # 888 |
 Better RP'er
Group: Blocked
Messages: 140
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| (Im sorry i don't swear!)
~ZebraLover~
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| Evie | Date: Saturday, 2011-12-24, 1:23 AM | Message # 889 |
 RP'er Without A Life
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Messages: 2382
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| Issac cried out in pain beside me. "Take this." I said sternly holding out the pill.
Shoot for the moon★ ☆ ✰
If you miss★ ☆ ✰
You'll still land among the stars★ ☆ ✰
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| Demon | Date: Saturday, 2011-12-24, 7:24 AM | Message # 890 |
 ※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
Group: Administrators
Messages: 9627
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| (Ok, just to clear this up...
I BLOCKED HER.
PROBLEM SOLVED.)
I watched her give him the pill. "Why so nice?"
ಠ_ಠ (づ ￣ ³￣)づ
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| Kenzieroo | Date: Saturday, 2011-12-24, 10:11 AM | Message # 891 |
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From the Forest
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| ~Cat
My eyes dart around, Why the heck am I spying?!? I would have sighed, but I didn't can cats even sigh, even I don't know that.
On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic
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| Demon | Date: Saturday, 2011-12-24, 10:13 AM | Message # 892 |
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※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
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| My ears twitched.
"I hear someones breathing..." I looked in (Cat's) direction.
ಠ_ಠ (づ ￣ ³￣)づ
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| Kenzieroo | Date: Saturday, 2011-12-24, 10:21 AM | Message # 893 |
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From the Forest
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| ~Cat
I dont move and inch, I just watch though my cold and narrow cat eyes.
On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic
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| Demon | Date: Saturday, 2011-12-24, 10:23 AM | Message # 894 |
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※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
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| I stepped towards the bush.
I morphed into a wolf, and sniffed it. "Someones deffinetly there." I growled.
"C'mere kitty kitty..."
ಠ_ಠ (づ ￣ ³￣)づ
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| Kenzieroo | Date: Saturday, 2011-12-24, 10:26 AM | Message # 895 |
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From the Forest
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| ~Cat
I spit out a steady growl, slowly backing up.
On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic
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| Demon | Date: Saturday, 2011-12-24, 10:30 AM | Message # 896 |
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※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
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| "C'mon out, no need to be shy" I hissed.
ಠ_ಠ (づ ￣ ³￣)づ
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| Kenzieroo | Date: Saturday, 2011-12-24, 10:33 AM | Message # 897 |
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From the Forest
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Messages: 7524
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| ~Cat
My growls sound increases as my fur stands up, I wanted to see as much like a real bobcat as possible.
On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic
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| Demon | Date: Saturday, 2011-12-24, 10:34 AM | Message # 898 |
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※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
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| I clicked my tongue. "Nice try, kitty. But I can smell that you're human"
ಠ_ಠ (づ ￣ ³￣)づ
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| Kenzieroo | Date: Saturday, 2011-12-24, 10:37 AM | Message # 899 |
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From the Forest
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Messages: 7524
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| ~Cat
I flicker my eyes and continue to hiss. Back arched, still backing up.
On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic
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| Demon | Date: Saturday, 2011-12-24, 10:38 AM | Message # 900 |
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※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
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| "Aw, c'mon, quit playing" I grinned, baring my fangs.
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