_/\_The Changers_/\_ (My 3rd roleplay..) - Page 59

Date: Sunday, 2011-10-09, 1:16 AM | Message # 1

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Oh? So you think this is cool? To be a Change? No, its not, its a nightmare, a nightmare that i hope that never happens to anybody else....i only wished that my hope was true...Listen. Having these powers are a pain in the ass,the cops are after us,so are the TAPA, The Anti Power Association... having scientists wanting to know how we do such amazing powers that we do with our hands, or well, anything. Don't ask me how I got them, cause i don't know...I was just a kid just like you, a family...a home, but thats gone now. All i have are my guts, and instincts, to help me pass each minute, each hour, each day...if you see this message,and if you are one of me, read this message carefully. Never trust anyone you see...never trust any one of your own, not even me, y'see,they have spies, they use them..to plot there next strategy on us, on how to capture us, in case were somehow giving a "virus" to anyone..we already had to kill one of our own..lets just hope your not next. All I can say is...its a hard life to be me, a Changer.

(Sorry couldnt really think of anything good to call the people with powers...XD)

-Changer Character sheet-

Name:
Age:
Appearance:
Weapon(s)?(Dont have to have one):
Powers(Two please..no more than that.):
When were you a Changer?:
Bio:
Other: (Sorta for like giving a tip about how you can calm down your character or like foreshadowing)

-T.A.P.A Spy Character Sheet- (No more than two...)
Name:
Age:
Appearance:
Weapons(?):
Powers(Once again no more than two):
When were you a changer?:
When you were caught(Can be at birth...):
Bio:
Other: (same as the other other,)

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Reviews
~Equinox~

Story:3/5
It's got a story, but not a REAL story. It's hard to explain. There's a story from a unknown person's view, but not a plot for any long term story.

Grammar:4/5
It's got some good grammar, but just a FEW mistakes. A very few.

Character detail:4/5
Very nice character sheets and variety of character values. It's well done.

Plot Development:2.5/5
It's got a bit of a plot. Trying to put up with being a changeling. Not a massive or expansive plot though, so it's not a very good plot development, but it's got some possibilities.

Overall rating:3/5
Honestly, this is a pretty good RP. I don't plan on joining, but I must say if I had about 1 cell more in my brain to put up with making a CS, I would gladly join. Don't think this is a bad RP because I don't feel like joining, it's honestly really good. My laziness is just getting to me from work.

Some say its nice to have good signatures....

Well.

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There you have it.

Message edited by Supernerd - Sunday, 2011-10-09, 12:14 PM

Equinox

Date: Friday, 2011-12-23, 9:51 PM | Message # 871

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(I banned her for 10 hours. If she continues to spam, tell me, I'll gladly extend the fucking ban.)

~Glacial Malphite: The Shard of the Monolith~

"I hear rumors that the Shard of the Monolith is an unstoppable force. They aren't rumors."-Nausus, on the topic of Malphite's arrival.

Date: Friday, 2011-12-23, 9:53 PM | Message # 872

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(Don't worry, I think we fitted everything when you were gone Super.)

On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic

Date: Friday, 2011-12-23, 10:01 PM | Message # 873

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Isaac-

I continued to cry out in pain, I held my leg, trying to stop the bleeding, it stung like a bitch. Worse than that, it reminded me of the time I actually tazored myself when I was training back at T.A.P.A...."FUCK!" I yelled, gingerly slowly getting up, shakily, but not fully to my feet yet, my back still faced at the man and the rest of them.

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(Also, might she be asleep??????? So she wouldnt really be 'banned' if she's asleep)

Some say its nice to have good signatures....

Well.

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There you have it.

Date: Friday, 2011-12-23, 10:03 PM | Message # 874

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(I doubt she's asleep shes in my time zone and it's only 7pm)

On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic

Date: Friday, 2011-12-23, 10:04 PM | Message # 875

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(Doesnt mean she aint asleep, Equi, I suggest 24 hours, just so she knows she's banned, just in case she is asleep and only really is technically banned for an hour, when shes awake.)

Some say its nice to have good signatures....

Well.

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There you have it.

Date: Friday, 2011-12-23, 10:10 PM | Message # 876

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(She is not asleep because i know her and she called me and tryed to get me talk you guys out of it and i said no)

~ZebraLover~

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Date: Friday, 2011-12-23, 10:11 PM | Message # 877

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(She's also getting deleted posts, and a PM already. If she doesn't notice, I can simply make it a god damn week.)

~Glacial Malphite: The Shard of the Monolith~

"I hear rumors that the Shard of the Monolith is an unstoppable force. They aren't rumors."-Nausus, on the topic of Malphite's arrival.

Date: Friday, 2011-12-23, 10:14 PM | Message # 878

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(Teddy also had sent me a message earlier that was titled 'hi' then her message was 'Kenzieroo is a spammer!!!!!' And i went bezerk or her. Also Zebra, if your inviting people to this website, please make sure that they're actually very descriptive in writing, and not purely random. like the GGGG Comment, and Boo.....|||||| Dear Santa, All i want for christmas is a big punch to the face towards Teddy! Thanks! Signed, The Bitch.)

Some say its nice to have good signatures....

Well.

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There you have it.

Date: Friday, 2011-12-23, 10:14 PM | Message # 879

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(she already noticed)

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(trust me shes my half sister)

~ZebraLover~

Date: Friday, 2011-12-23, 10:29 PM | Message # 880

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(It's not exactly Zebras falt her sisters saw the site wanted to join and they always get their way, so ya.)

On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic

Date: Friday, 2011-12-23, 10:32 PM | Message # 881

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(Kenzie is right........)

~ZebraLover~

Date: Friday, 2011-12-23, 10:35 PM | Message # 882

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(Ok let's drop this.)

On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic

Date: Friday, 2011-12-23, 10:37 PM | Message # 883

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(SPAM:OFF||||||| ROLEPLAYING:ON)

Some say its nice to have good signatures....

Well.

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There you have it.

Date: Friday, 2011-12-23, 10:38 PM | Message # 884

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(Ohh, lord help me she is crying now and is saying "Im so sorry i did not mean to i swear, i jus want to pretect my sis from mean people like kenzie" she is saying that and will not SHUTUP!! help me lord save meeeeee!!!!!!!)

~ZebraLover~