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_/\_The Changers_/\_ (My 3rd roleplay..)
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| Supernerd | Date: Sunday, 2011-10-09, 1:16 AM | Message # 1 |
 A Hater/Friend of Equinox
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| Oh? So you think this is cool? To be a Change? No, its not, its a nightmare, a nightmare that i hope that never happens to anybody else....i only wished that my hope was true...Listen. Having these powers are a pain in the ass,the cops are after us,so are the TAPA, The Anti Power Association... having scientists wanting to know how we do such amazing powers that we do with our hands, or well, anything. Don't ask me how I got them, cause i don't know...I was just a kid just like you, a family...a home, but thats gone now. All i have are my guts, and instincts, to help me pass each minute, each hour, each day...if you see this message,and if you are one of me, read this message carefully. Never trust anyone you see...never trust any one of your own, not even me, y'see,they have spies, they use them..to plot there next strategy on us, on how to capture us, in case were somehow giving a "virus" to anyone..we already had to kill one of our own..lets just hope your not next. All I can say is...its a hard life to be me, a Changer.
(Sorry couldnt really think of anything good to call the people with powers...XD)
-Changer Character sheet-
Name:
Age:
Appearance:
Weapon(s)?(Dont have to have one):
Powers(Two please..no more than that.):
When were you a Changer?:
Bio:
Other: (Sorta for like giving a tip about how you can calm down your character or like foreshadowing)
-T.A.P.A Spy Character Sheet- (No more than two...)
Name:
Age:
Appearance:
Weapons(?):
Powers(Once again no more than two):
When were you a changer?:
When you were caught(Can be at birth...):
Bio:
Other: (same as the other other,)
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Reviews
~Equinox~
Story:3/5
It's got a story, but not a REAL story. It's hard to explain. There's a story from a unknown person's view, but not a plot for any long term story.
Grammar:4/5
It's got some good grammar, but just a FEW mistakes. A very few.
Character detail:4/5
Very nice character sheets and variety of character values. It's well done.
Plot Development:2.5/5
It's got a bit of a plot. Trying to put up with being a changeling. Not a massive or expansive plot though, so it's not a very good plot development, but it's got some possibilities.
Overall rating:3/5
Honestly, this is a pretty good RP. I don't plan on joining, but I must say if I had about 1 cell more in my brain to put up with making a CS, I would gladly join. Don't think this is a bad RP because I don't feel like joining, it's honestly really good. My laziness is just getting to me from work.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
Message edited by Supernerd - Sunday, 2011-10-09, 12:14 PM |
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| Zombo104 | Date: Thursday, 2011-12-22, 4:16 PM | Message # 841 |
 Famous RP'er
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| "But now the question is, which one will cut it's power?"
It's funny until someone gets hurt. Then it's just hilarious.
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| Kenzieroo | Date: Thursday, 2011-12-22, 4:21 PM | Message # 842 |
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From the Forest
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| ~Silver
"Once I get pasted that, this will be easy." I traced the wire that lead into her back the other direction....
On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic
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| Supernerd | Date: Thursday, 2011-12-22, 7:23 PM | Message # 843 |
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A Hater/Friend of Equinox
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| Isaac-
I screamed in pain as I was on the ground laying there, I had not noticed the man in black as I lay there, cursing as I had gripped my leg, there were deep gashes in his leg, from the teeth marks, my back was facing the otherway of the man and Brisk.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Kenzieroo | Date: Thursday, 2011-12-22, 7:34 PM | Message # 844 |
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From the Forest
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| ~Cat
I start slowly walking down following the river. I raise my arms to stretch and yawns again. How long was a sleeping? I shrug it off. Bored out of my mind.
On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic
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| Equinox | Date: Thursday, 2011-12-22, 8:03 PM | Message # 845 |
 Social warrior of the administration
Group: Administrators
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| (You didn't invent German, I'll speak how I Oi Ko want.)
~Glacial Malphite: The Shard of the Monolith~
"I hear rumors that the Shard of the Monolith is an unstoppable force. They aren't rumors."-Nausus, on the topic of Malphite's arrival.
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| Kenzieroo | Date: Thursday, 2011-12-22, 8:05 PM | Message # 846 |
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From the Forest
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| (I was joking.)
On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic
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| Evie | Date: Thursday, 2011-12-22, 9:18 PM | Message # 847 |
 RP'er Without A Life
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Messages: 2382
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| I bent down and gave Issac a pain killer pill. "Here, and I'm sorry." I don't know why I gave him the pill but for some reason I just felt like it was the right thing to do.
Shoot for the moon★ ☆ ✰
If you miss★ ☆ ✰
You'll still land among the stars★ ☆ ✰
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| Kenzieroo | Date: Thursday, 2011-12-22, 9:22 PM | Message # 848 |
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From the Forest
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| (IDK what else to do with Cat, guess I'll just have to wait)
On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic
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| Evie | Date: Thursday, 2011-12-22, 9:29 PM | Message # 849 |
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RP'er Without A Life
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| (Just run into us? Were by a lake,the river could lead to the lake.)
Shoot for the moon★ ☆ ✰
If you miss★ ☆ ✰
You'll still land among the stars★ ☆ ✰
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| Kenzieroo | Date: Thursday, 2011-12-22, 9:30 PM | Message # 850 |
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From the Forest
Group: Moderators
Messages: 7524
Status: Offline
| (Whats going on again?)
On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic
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| Demon | Date: Friday, 2011-12-23, 9:17 AM | Message # 851 |
 ※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
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| I raised an eyebrow at her. "Well, that would kill him. He has some useful information" I grinned at the man in black.
ಠ_ಠ (づ ￣ ³￣)づ
um
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| lOVERpIG | Date: Friday, 2011-12-23, 10:16 AM | Message # 852 |
 Beginning RP'er
Group: Users
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| (GGGG)
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| Kenzieroo | Date: Friday, 2011-12-23, 11:21 AM | Message # 853 |
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From the Forest
Group: Moderators
Messages: 7524
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| ~Cat
I stop in my tracks as I started to hear human voices. I trryed to make them out it wasn't all that hard.
On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic
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| ZebraLover | Date: Friday, 2011-12-23, 11:36 AM | Message # 854 |
 Better RP'er
Group: Blocked
Messages: 140
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| (I'll sign up later!)
~ZebraLover~
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| Supernerd | Date: Friday, 2011-12-23, 1:47 PM | Message # 855 |
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A Hater/Friend of Equinox
Group: Special
Messages: 3145
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| (Waiting for Equi, also Evie, Painkiller?.....Really?)
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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