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_/\_The Changers_/\_ (My 3rd roleplay..)
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| Supernerd | Date: Sunday, 2011-10-09, 1:16 AM | Message # 1 |
 A Hater/Friend of Equinox
Group: Special
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| Oh? So you think this is cool? To be a Change? No, its not, its a nightmare, a nightmare that i hope that never happens to anybody else....i only wished that my hope was true...Listen. Having these powers are a pain in the ass,the cops are after us,so are the TAPA, The Anti Power Association... having scientists wanting to know how we do such amazing powers that we do with our hands, or well, anything. Don't ask me how I got them, cause i don't know...I was just a kid just like you, a family...a home, but thats gone now. All i have are my guts, and instincts, to help me pass each minute, each hour, each day...if you see this message,and if you are one of me, read this message carefully. Never trust anyone you see...never trust any one of your own, not even me, y'see,they have spies, they use them..to plot there next strategy on us, on how to capture us, in case were somehow giving a "virus" to anyone..we already had to kill one of our own..lets just hope your not next. All I can say is...its a hard life to be me, a Changer.
(Sorry couldnt really think of anything good to call the people with powers...XD)
-Changer Character sheet-
Name:
Age:
Appearance:
Weapon(s)?(Dont have to have one):
Powers(Two please..no more than that.):
When were you a Changer?:
Bio:
Other: (Sorta for like giving a tip about how you can calm down your character or like foreshadowing)
-T.A.P.A Spy Character Sheet- (No more than two...)
Name:
Age:
Appearance:
Weapons(?):
Powers(Once again no more than two):
When were you a changer?:
When you were caught(Can be at birth...):
Bio:
Other: (same as the other other,)
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Reviews
~Equinox~
Story:3/5
It's got a story, but not a REAL story. It's hard to explain. There's a story from a unknown person's view, but not a plot for any long term story.
Grammar:4/5
It's got some good grammar, but just a FEW mistakes. A very few.
Character detail:4/5
Very nice character sheets and variety of character values. It's well done.
Plot Development:2.5/5
It's got a bit of a plot. Trying to put up with being a changeling. Not a massive or expansive plot though, so it's not a very good plot development, but it's got some possibilities.
Overall rating:3/5
Honestly, this is a pretty good RP. I don't plan on joining, but I must say if I had about 1 cell more in my brain to put up with making a CS, I would gladly join. Don't think this is a bad RP because I don't feel like joining, it's honestly really good. My laziness is just getting to me from work.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
Message edited by Supernerd - Sunday, 2011-10-09, 12:14 PM |
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| Demon | Date: Wednesday, 2011-12-21, 12:42 PM | Message # 826 |
 ※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
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Messages: 9627
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| I froze, and turned around. I growled. "He has done the same to us"
ಠ_ಠ (づ ￣ ³￣)づ
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| Kenzieroo | Date: Wednesday, 2011-12-21, 12:47 PM | Message # 827 |
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From the Forest
Group: Moderators
Messages: 7524
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| ~Silver
"I think we should stay put, I almost got the collar off."
~Cat
Laying about in the trees I lazily lift my head. I heard the sounds of other animals doing their think, yawning I sit up in the branch I was sleeping on. I move the banges from my face fix my hat then yawn again. Jumping down from the tree I land lightly on my feet, now where should I go?
On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic
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| Evie | Date: Wednesday, 2011-12-21, 2:29 PM | Message # 828 |
 RP'er Without A Life
Group: Checked
Messages: 2382
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| A ball of fire appeared in the hand behind my back. "Its called Justice." I said to the man in the black suit. "And this boy is very dangerous when hes on the loose."
Shoot for the moon★ ☆ ✰
If you miss★ ☆ ✰
You'll still land among the stars★ ☆ ✰
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| Zombo104 | Date: Wednesday, 2011-12-21, 5:36 PM | Message # 829 |
 Famous RP'er
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Messages: 831
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| "Ok but try to hurry but with getting the collar off I have a bad feeling about something but I don't know what..."
It's funny until someone gets hurt. Then it's just hilarious.
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| Kenzieroo | Date: Wednesday, 2011-12-21, 5:52 PM | Message # 830 |
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From the Forest
Group: Moderators
Messages: 7524
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| ~Silver
"I know," I continued and inch by inch I uncovered the wire. I was getting more and more nervous.
On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic
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| Evie | Date: Thursday, 2011-12-22, 2:46 AM | Message # 831 |
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RP'er Without A Life
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Messages: 2382
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| "Why dose it matter to you anyway?" I question the strange man.
Shoot for the moon★ ☆ ✰
If you miss★ ☆ ✰
You'll still land among the stars★ ☆ ✰
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| Equinox | Date: Thursday, 2011-12-22, 10:27 AM | Message # 832 |
 Social warrior of the administration
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Messages: 7183
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| "Because, I don't agree with the way you are doing it. Why not simply do as the Romans, and beat them senseless, and hang them by their feet?"
~Glacial Malphite: The Shard of the Monolith~
"I hear rumors that the Shard of the Monolith is an unstoppable force. They aren't rumors."-Nausus, on the topic of Malphite's arrival.
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| Kenzieroo | Date: Thursday, 2011-12-22, 11:36 AM | Message # 833 |
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From the Forest
Group: Moderators
Messages: 7524
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| ~Silver
"God, now the worst part, having to cut wire.."
On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic
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| Teddy | Date: Thursday, 2011-12-22, 12:35 PM | Message # 834 |
 Starting RP'er
Group: Blocked
Messages: 48
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| (Hi)
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| Kenzieroo | Date: Thursday, 2011-12-22, 12:43 PM | Message # 835 |
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From the Forest
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Messages: 7524
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| (Hallo.)
On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic
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| Equinox | Date: Thursday, 2011-12-22, 2:23 PM | Message # 836 |
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Social warrior of the administration
Group: Administrators
Messages: 7183
Status: Offline
| (Guten Tag.)
~Glacial Malphite: The Shard of the Monolith~
"I hear rumors that the Shard of the Monolith is an unstoppable force. They aren't rumors."-Nausus, on the topic of Malphite's arrival.
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| Kenzieroo | Date: Thursday, 2011-12-22, 2:38 PM | Message # 837 |
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From the Forest
Group: Moderators
Messages: 7524
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| ( Hey, don't be stealing my words.)
On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic
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| Zombo104 | Date: Thursday, 2011-12-22, 3:44 PM | Message # 838 |
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Famous RP'er
Group: Checked
Messages: 831
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| "Okay then, I guess we can only hope that you don't cut the wrong one...."
It's funny until someone gets hurt. Then it's just hilarious.
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| Evie | Date: Thursday, 2011-12-22, 4:00 PM | Message # 839 |
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RP'er Without A Life
Group: Checked
Messages: 2382
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| I looked down at Issac pretty sure he just heard what that man had said. "We like to be creative, not use already used methods." I told him.
Shoot for the moon★ ☆ ✰
If you miss★ ☆ ✰
You'll still land among the stars★ ☆ ✰
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| Kenzieroo | Date: Thursday, 2011-12-22, 4:13 PM | Message # 840 |
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From the Forest
Group: Moderators
Messages: 7524
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| ~Silver
"The one going into your back seems like it sends a signal when something goes wrong, so If I cut of it's power then I should be able to get it off."
On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic
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