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_/\_The Changers_/\_ (My 3rd roleplay..)
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| Supernerd | Date: Sunday, 2011-10-09, 1:16 AM | Message # 1 |
 A Hater/Friend of Equinox
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| Oh? So you think this is cool? To be a Change? No, its not, its a nightmare, a nightmare that i hope that never happens to anybody else....i only wished that my hope was true...Listen. Having these powers are a pain in the ass,the cops are after us,so are the TAPA, The Anti Power Association... having scientists wanting to know how we do such amazing powers that we do with our hands, or well, anything. Don't ask me how I got them, cause i don't know...I was just a kid just like you, a family...a home, but thats gone now. All i have are my guts, and instincts, to help me pass each minute, each hour, each day...if you see this message,and if you are one of me, read this message carefully. Never trust anyone you see...never trust any one of your own, not even me, y'see,they have spies, they use them..to plot there next strategy on us, on how to capture us, in case were somehow giving a "virus" to anyone..we already had to kill one of our own..lets just hope your not next. All I can say is...its a hard life to be me, a Changer.
(Sorry couldnt really think of anything good to call the people with powers...XD)
-Changer Character sheet-
Name:
Age:
Appearance:
Weapon(s)?(Dont have to have one):
Powers(Two please..no more than that.):
When were you a Changer?:
Bio:
Other: (Sorta for like giving a tip about how you can calm down your character or like foreshadowing)
-T.A.P.A Spy Character Sheet- (No more than two...)
Name:
Age:
Appearance:
Weapons(?):
Powers(Once again no more than two):
When were you a changer?:
When you were caught(Can be at birth...):
Bio:
Other: (same as the other other,)
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Reviews
~Equinox~
Story:3/5
It's got a story, but not a REAL story. It's hard to explain. There's a story from a unknown person's view, but not a plot for any long term story.
Grammar:4/5
It's got some good grammar, but just a FEW mistakes. A very few.
Character detail:4/5
Very nice character sheets and variety of character values. It's well done.
Plot Development:2.5/5
It's got a bit of a plot. Trying to put up with being a changeling. Not a massive or expansive plot though, so it's not a very good plot development, but it's got some possibilities.
Overall rating:3/5
Honestly, this is a pretty good RP. I don't plan on joining, but I must say if I had about 1 cell more in my brain to put up with making a CS, I would gladly join. Don't think this is a bad RP because I don't feel like joining, it's honestly really good. My laziness is just getting to me from work.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
Message edited by Supernerd - Sunday, 2011-10-09, 12:14 PM |
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| Kenzieroo | Date: Sunday, 2011-12-18, 10:13 PM | Message # 796 |
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From the Forest
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| ~Silver
"Calm, we could handle him once we can do it again," and I continue trying to remove the collar.
On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic
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| Supernerd | Date: Sunday, 2011-12-18, 10:47 PM | Message # 797 |
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A Hater/Friend of Equinox
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Messages: 3145
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| Cody-
"But the government.....can change the rules.....rid of T.A.P.A...."I said slowly and quietly, falling asleep.
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Isaac shifted slowly, still unconscious though.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Kenzieroo | Date: Sunday, 2011-12-18, 10:48 PM | Message # 798 |
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From the Forest
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| (Am I accepted?)
On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic
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| Supernerd | Date: Monday, 2011-12-19, 0:56 AM | Message # 799 |
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A Hater/Friend of Equinox
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Messages: 3145
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| (Yeah, just dont INTERFERE with Equi's plans...it will create some better 'action' later on.)
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Evie | Date: Monday, 2011-12-19, 1:03 AM | Message # 800 |
 RP'er Without A Life
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| When I reached the lake I could sense something. Maybe it was danger. This time I was prepared.
Shoot for the moon★ ☆ ✰
If you miss★ ☆ ✰
You'll still land among the stars★ ☆ ✰
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| Kenzieroo | Date: Monday, 2011-12-19, 9:46 AM | Message # 801 |
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From the Forest
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| ( XP Poop you.)
On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic
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| Equinox | Date: Monday, 2011-12-19, 10:05 AM | Message # 802 |
 Social warrior of the administration
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| There was a rustling from a tree, nearby.
~Glacial Malphite: The Shard of the Monolith~
"I hear rumors that the Shard of the Monolith is an unstoppable force. They aren't rumors."-Nausus, on the topic of Malphite's arrival.
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| Supernerd | Date: Monday, 2011-12-19, 12:25 PM | Message # 803 |
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A Hater/Friend of Equinox
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| (Evie, Equi's is near you, your character hearing it....just in case. XD)
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
Message edited by Supernerd - Monday, 2011-12-19, 12:26 PM |
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| Demon | Date: Monday, 2011-12-19, 3:32 PM | Message # 804 |
 ※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
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| (Well I'm gonna have Brisk join the battle, cuz she's bored o3o)
I stood up. "I'm gonna check on Virra.." I walked off.
ಠ_ಠ (づ ￣ ³￣)づ
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| Supernerd | Date: Monday, 2011-12-19, 3:47 PM | Message # 805 |
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A Hater/Friend of Equinox
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Messages: 3145
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| Isaac-
"Mph...." I opened my eyes, slowly. Looking around at my surrondings but not moving my head. How to get out of here......how? How will I be able to?
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Evie | Date: Monday, 2011-12-19, 5:31 PM | Message # 806 |
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RP'er Without A Life
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| "I know you're there." I said into the trees. "And I'm not scared of you."
Shoot for the moon★ ☆ ✰
If you miss★ ☆ ✰
You'll still land among the stars★ ☆ ✰
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| Demon | Date: Monday, 2011-12-19, 5:39 PM | Message # 807 |
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※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
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| I found myself next to Virra. "Trouble, eh?"
ಠ_ಠ (づ ￣ ³￣)づ
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| Evie | Date: Monday, 2011-12-19, 5:39 PM | Message # 808 |
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RP'er Without A Life
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| "No, just an unwanted guest."
Shoot for the moon★ ☆ ✰
If you miss★ ☆ ✰
You'll still land among the stars★ ☆ ✰
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| Kenzieroo | Date: Monday, 2011-12-19, 5:59 PM | Message # 809 |
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From the Forest
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| ~Silver
I finnaly got two inches of wire uncovered and it seemed the complication of the collar wasn't nearly as bad as I thought it would be, but I didn't let that cloud my judgement.
On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic
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| Demon | Date: Monday, 2011-12-19, 7:41 PM | Message # 810 |
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※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
Group: Administrators
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| "Well, let me assist you" I grinned.
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