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_/\_The Changers_/\_ (My 3rd roleplay..)
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| Supernerd | Date: Sunday, 2011-10-09, 1:16 AM | Message # 1 |
 A Hater/Friend of Equinox
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| Oh? So you think this is cool? To be a Change? No, its not, its a nightmare, a nightmare that i hope that never happens to anybody else....i only wished that my hope was true...Listen. Having these powers are a pain in the ass,the cops are after us,so are the TAPA, The Anti Power Association... having scientists wanting to know how we do such amazing powers that we do with our hands, or well, anything. Don't ask me how I got them, cause i don't know...I was just a kid just like you, a family...a home, but thats gone now. All i have are my guts, and instincts, to help me pass each minute, each hour, each day...if you see this message,and if you are one of me, read this message carefully. Never trust anyone you see...never trust any one of your own, not even me, y'see,they have spies, they use them..to plot there next strategy on us, on how to capture us, in case were somehow giving a "virus" to anyone..we already had to kill one of our own..lets just hope your not next. All I can say is...its a hard life to be me, a Changer.
(Sorry couldnt really think of anything good to call the people with powers...XD)
-Changer Character sheet-
Name:
Age:
Appearance:
Weapon(s)?(Dont have to have one):
Powers(Two please..no more than that.):
When were you a Changer?:
Bio:
Other: (Sorta for like giving a tip about how you can calm down your character or like foreshadowing)
-T.A.P.A Spy Character Sheet- (No more than two...)
Name:
Age:
Appearance:
Weapons(?):
Powers(Once again no more than two):
When were you a changer?:
When you were caught(Can be at birth...):
Bio:
Other: (same as the other other,)
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Reviews
~Equinox~
Story:3/5
It's got a story, but not a REAL story. It's hard to explain. There's a story from a unknown person's view, but not a plot for any long term story.
Grammar:4/5
It's got some good grammar, but just a FEW mistakes. A very few.
Character detail:4/5
Very nice character sheets and variety of character values. It's well done.
Plot Development:2.5/5
It's got a bit of a plot. Trying to put up with being a changeling. Not a massive or expansive plot though, so it's not a very good plot development, but it's got some possibilities.
Overall rating:3/5
Honestly, this is a pretty good RP. I don't plan on joining, but I must say if I had about 1 cell more in my brain to put up with making a CS, I would gladly join. Don't think this is a bad RP because I don't feel like joining, it's honestly really good. My laziness is just getting to me from work.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
Message edited by Supernerd - Sunday, 2011-10-09, 12:14 PM |
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| Kenzieroo | Date: Sunday, 2011-12-18, 10:20 AM | Message # 781 |
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From the Forest
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| (It's not a riddle.)
On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic
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| Equinox | Date: Sunday, 2011-12-18, 12:08 PM | Message # 782 |
 Social warrior of the administration
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| (It's not a riddle, It's stanza thinking.)
~Glacial Malphite: The Shard of the Monolith~
"I hear rumors that the Shard of the Monolith is an unstoppable force. They aren't rumors."-Nausus, on the topic of Malphite's arrival.
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| Supernerd | Date: Sunday, 2011-12-18, 1:24 PM | Message # 783 |
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A Hater/Friend of Equinox
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Isaac still layed unconscious, a serious and annoyed look on his face, even when he was unconscious.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Evie | Date: Sunday, 2011-12-18, 3:43 PM | Message # 784 |
 RP'er Without A Life
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| I walked further and further from the cave not sure if I wanted to go back.
Shoot for the moon★ ☆ ✰
If you miss★ ☆ ✰
You'll still land among the stars★ ☆ ✰
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| Demon | Date: Sunday, 2011-12-18, 3:55 PM | Message # 785 |
 ※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
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| (But still, you're like, the master of riddles.
I never actually said that was a riddle.)
I watched Isaac. "He even looks pissed when he's asleep" I laughed.
ಠ_ಠ (づ ￣ ³￣)づ
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| Supernerd | Date: Sunday, 2011-12-18, 5:02 PM | Message # 786 |
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A Hater/Friend of Equinox
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| Cody-
I smiled weakly as I heard her laugh. "yeah...." I said sighing.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Demon | Date: Sunday, 2011-12-18, 5:06 PM | Message # 787 |
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※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
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| "I'm so bored now..." I groaned, banging my head on the cave wall behind me. (XD)
ಠ_ಠ (づ ￣ ³￣)づ
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| Supernerd | Date: Sunday, 2011-12-18, 5:27 PM | Message # 788 |
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A Hater/Friend of Equinox
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Messages: 3145
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| Cody-
"They'll be searching for us y'know....." I said quietly. "Know what we should do?.....Talk to the...Goverment...." I said, coughing.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Kenzieroo | Date: Sunday, 2011-12-18, 5:49 PM | Message # 789 |
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From the Forest
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| ~Silver
"Please be quieter I need to focus."
On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic
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| Demon | Date: Sunday, 2011-12-18, 7:43 PM | Message # 790 |
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※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
Group: Administrators
Messages: 9627
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| I sighed, and looked at Cody. "The government? They won't be much better than TAPA" I whispered.
ಠ_ಠ (づ ￣ ³￣)づ
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| Kenzieroo | Date: Sunday, 2011-12-18, 7:46 PM | Message # 791 |
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From the Forest
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| ~Silver
I continue to scratch away at the outer cover, avoiding the wires.
On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic
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| Kenzieroo | Date: Sunday, 2011-12-18, 8:55 PM | Message # 792 |
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From the Forest
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Messages: 7524
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| -Changer Character sheet-
Name: Cat
Age: 15
Appearance: http://animefreakssheaven.webs.com/photos....irl.jpg
Weapon(s)?(Dont have to have one): Two hidden daggers
Powers: Can do anything cat related (Their eye sigh, hearing, flexibility, and talking to them) , can shift into any feline
When were you a Changer?: At berth
Bio: she was born with cat ears and a tail, since she was born before her parents made it to the hospital they keeped her a secret, lying to their family about the baby. The lie worked until Cat turned 6 and the stitches started the loosen. Right now she's traveling as fast as she can, and shes mostly independent.
Other: She's quiet and independent, acting much like a real cat. Although if push comes to shove she saves her 'friends' she's light and her feet and quick with her mind, and not easily trapped.
On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic
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| Equinox | Date: Sunday, 2011-12-18, 9:52 PM | Message # 793 |
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Social warrior of the administration
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| I begin scanning through them.
I could kill the two that are busy.
I could kill the girl.
I could kill the TAPA agent.
I could pick off the one that went for water.
Oh, the choices.
~Glacial Malphite: The Shard of the Monolith~
"I hear rumors that the Shard of the Monolith is an unstoppable force. They aren't rumors."-Nausus, on the topic of Malphite's arrival.
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| Kenzieroo | Date: Sunday, 2011-12-18, 9:55 PM | Message # 794 |
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From the Forest
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| (Hm maybe if I get accepted I could ambush you in you ambush, that would be fun...)
On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic
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| Zombo104 | Date: Sunday, 2011-12-18, 10:02 PM | Message # 795 |
 Famous RP'er
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| "Wait stop... Virra is in danger! Brisk, remember Mr.Insane? I have a feeling he might be very very close."
It's funny until someone gets hurt. Then it's just hilarious.
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