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_/\_The Changers_/\_ (My 3rd roleplay..)
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| Supernerd | Date: Sunday, 2011-10-09, 1:16 AM | Message # 1 |
 A Hater/Friend of Equinox
Group: Special
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| Oh? So you think this is cool? To be a Change? No, its not, its a nightmare, a nightmare that i hope that never happens to anybody else....i only wished that my hope was true...Listen. Having these powers are a pain in the ass,the cops are after us,so are the TAPA, The Anti Power Association... having scientists wanting to know how we do such amazing powers that we do with our hands, or well, anything. Don't ask me how I got them, cause i don't know...I was just a kid just like you, a family...a home, but thats gone now. All i have are my guts, and instincts, to help me pass each minute, each hour, each day...if you see this message,and if you are one of me, read this message carefully. Never trust anyone you see...never trust any one of your own, not even me, y'see,they have spies, they use them..to plot there next strategy on us, on how to capture us, in case were somehow giving a "virus" to anyone..we already had to kill one of our own..lets just hope your not next. All I can say is...its a hard life to be me, a Changer.
(Sorry couldnt really think of anything good to call the people with powers...XD)
-Changer Character sheet-
Name:
Age:
Appearance:
Weapon(s)?(Dont have to have one):
Powers(Two please..no more than that.):
When were you a Changer?:
Bio:
Other: (Sorta for like giving a tip about how you can calm down your character or like foreshadowing)
-T.A.P.A Spy Character Sheet- (No more than two...)
Name:
Age:
Appearance:
Weapons(?):
Powers(Once again no more than two):
When were you a changer?:
When you were caught(Can be at birth...):
Bio:
Other: (same as the other other,)
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Reviews
~Equinox~
Story:3/5
It's got a story, but not a REAL story. It's hard to explain. There's a story from a unknown person's view, but not a plot for any long term story.
Grammar:4/5
It's got some good grammar, but just a FEW mistakes. A very few.
Character detail:4/5
Very nice character sheets and variety of character values. It's well done.
Plot Development:2.5/5
It's got a bit of a plot. Trying to put up with being a changeling. Not a massive or expansive plot though, so it's not a very good plot development, but it's got some possibilities.
Overall rating:3/5
Honestly, this is a pretty good RP. I don't plan on joining, but I must say if I had about 1 cell more in my brain to put up with making a CS, I would gladly join. Don't think this is a bad RP because I don't feel like joining, it's honestly really good. My laziness is just getting to me from work.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
Message edited by Supernerd - Sunday, 2011-10-09, 12:14 PM |
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| Kenzieroo | Date: Saturday, 2011-12-17, 12:36 PM | Message # 751 |
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From the Forest
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| ~Silver
I felt compelled to say something but I didn't.
On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic
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| Evie | Date: Saturday, 2011-12-17, 12:48 PM | Message # 752 |
 RP'er Without A Life
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| "I hate Issac so much." I complained
Shoot for the moon★ ☆ ✰
If you miss★ ☆ ✰
You'll still land among the stars★ ☆ ✰
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| Demon | Date: Saturday, 2011-12-17, 3:01 PM | Message # 753 |
 ※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
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Messages: 9627
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| "Oh, but it's fun to mess with him. As much as I want to kill him, which I will someday do, he still has some useful info"
ಠ_ಠ (づ ￣ ³￣)づ
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| Kenzieroo | Date: Saturday, 2011-12-17, 3:06 PM | Message # 754 |
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From the Forest
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| ~Silver
I sigh, trying to device a plan to get the collar off.
On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic
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| Zombo104 | Date: Saturday, 2011-12-17, 3:26 PM | Message # 755 |
 Famous RP'er
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| I sigh and then start fiddling with the back of it trying to find a latch or something.
It's funny until someone gets hurt. Then it's just hilarious.
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| Kenzieroo | Date: Saturday, 2011-12-17, 3:30 PM | Message # 756 |
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From the Forest
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| ~Silver
"As long as I avoid wires I should be able to losen it do you can pull it off."
On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic
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| Zombo104 | Date: Saturday, 2011-12-17, 3:40 PM | Message # 757 |
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Famous RP'er
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| "Yeah, but, who knows how many wires there are in this thing."
It's funny until someone gets hurt. Then it's just hilarious.
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| Kenzieroo | Date: Saturday, 2011-12-17, 3:45 PM | Message # 758 |
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From the Forest
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Messages: 7524
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| ~Silver
I shrug, "It might help if I had rubber."
On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic
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| Evie | Date: Saturday, 2011-12-17, 4:33 PM | Message # 759 |
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RP'er Without A Life
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Messages: 2382
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| "Theres a needle in the back of the necklace that goes into her spinal cord. If you make the wrong move you could paralyze her." I told them after examining the necklace.
Shoot for the moon★ ☆ ✰
If you miss★ ☆ ✰
You'll still land among the stars★ ☆ ✰
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| Supernerd | Date: Saturday, 2011-12-17, 4:37 PM | Message # 760 |
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A Hater/Friend of Equinox
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| Cody-
I slowly took the water from Brisk, and drank it fast, water dribbling down the side of my cheek and I burst out coughing again. Gasping between coughs for air.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Kenzieroo | Date: Saturday, 2011-12-17, 4:40 PM | Message # 761 |
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From the Forest
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| ~Silver
I nod, "I know and I have a plan."
On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic
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| Demon | Date: Saturday, 2011-12-17, 6:20 PM | Message # 762 |
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※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
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| "Take it easy" I laughed at Cody. Then I turned to the others. "Be careful with that collar..."
ಠ_ಠ (づ ￣ ³￣)づ
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| Kenzieroo | Date: Saturday, 2011-12-17, 6:34 PM | Message # 763 |
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From the Forest
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Messages: 7524
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| ~Silver
"I got it, if I think I'm about to mess up I'll stop." I sigh, pulling out my pocket knife, so wish I had plastic gloves.
On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic
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| Demon | Date: Saturday, 2011-12-17, 9:23 PM | Message # 764 |
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※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
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Messages: 9627
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| I laughed and nodded.
ಠ_ಠ (づ ￣ ³￣)づ
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| Kenzieroo | Date: Saturday, 2011-12-17, 9:39 PM | Message # 765 |
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From the Forest
Group: Moderators
Messages: 7524
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| ~Silver
"'Kay please be quiet I need to concentrate." I was breathing hard as I started cutting the edges of the collar.
On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic
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