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_/\_The Changers_/\_ (My 3rd roleplay..)
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| Supernerd | Date: Sunday, 2011-10-09, 1:16 AM | Message # 1 |
 A Hater/Friend of Equinox
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| Oh? So you think this is cool? To be a Change? No, its not, its a nightmare, a nightmare that i hope that never happens to anybody else....i only wished that my hope was true...Listen. Having these powers are a pain in the ass,the cops are after us,so are the TAPA, The Anti Power Association... having scientists wanting to know how we do such amazing powers that we do with our hands, or well, anything. Don't ask me how I got them, cause i don't know...I was just a kid just like you, a family...a home, but thats gone now. All i have are my guts, and instincts, to help me pass each minute, each hour, each day...if you see this message,and if you are one of me, read this message carefully. Never trust anyone you see...never trust any one of your own, not even me, y'see,they have spies, they use them..to plot there next strategy on us, on how to capture us, in case were somehow giving a "virus" to anyone..we already had to kill one of our own..lets just hope your not next. All I can say is...its a hard life to be me, a Changer.
(Sorry couldnt really think of anything good to call the people with powers...XD)
-Changer Character sheet-
Name:
Age:
Appearance:
Weapon(s)?(Dont have to have one):
Powers(Two please..no more than that.):
When were you a Changer?:
Bio:
Other: (Sorta for like giving a tip about how you can calm down your character or like foreshadowing)
-T.A.P.A Spy Character Sheet- (No more than two...)
Name:
Age:
Appearance:
Weapons(?):
Powers(Once again no more than two):
When were you a changer?:
When you were caught(Can be at birth...):
Bio:
Other: (same as the other other,)
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Reviews
~Equinox~
Story:3/5
It's got a story, but not a REAL story. It's hard to explain. There's a story from a unknown person's view, but not a plot for any long term story.
Grammar:4/5
It's got some good grammar, but just a FEW mistakes. A very few.
Character detail:4/5
Very nice character sheets and variety of character values. It's well done.
Plot Development:2.5/5
It's got a bit of a plot. Trying to put up with being a changeling. Not a massive or expansive plot though, so it's not a very good plot development, but it's got some possibilities.
Overall rating:3/5
Honestly, this is a pretty good RP. I don't plan on joining, but I must say if I had about 1 cell more in my brain to put up with making a CS, I would gladly join. Don't think this is a bad RP because I don't feel like joining, it's honestly really good. My laziness is just getting to me from work.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
Message edited by Supernerd - Sunday, 2011-10-09, 12:14 PM |
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| Supernerd | Date: Saturday, 2011-12-17, 11:19 PM | Message # 766 |
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A Hater/Friend of Equinox
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| Cody-
I leaned up into a sitting up position...I was getting stronger, I wiped my mouth with my arm and slightly blushed at Brisk, when she laughed, it was the most loveliest sound ive heard.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
Message edited by Supernerd - Saturday, 2011-12-17, 11:19 PM |
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| Kenzieroo | Date: Sunday, 2011-12-18, 0:57 AM | Message # 767 |
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From the Forest
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| ~Silver
I bit my lower lip, slowly cutting the edges. My hands and face firing up red hot.
On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic
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| Zombo104 | Date: Sunday, 2011-12-18, 1:33 AM | Message # 768 |
 Famous RP'er
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| I was trembling scared. I tried to calm myself down by focusing on Brisk and Cody.
It's funny until someone gets hurt. Then it's just hilarious.
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| Kenzieroo | Date: Sunday, 2011-12-18, 1:39 AM | Message # 769 |
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From the Forest
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| ~Silver
My hand starts the shack do I pull it away, for a second I take a look. I'd managed to reveal a few of the wires, but they where still coated in plastic.
On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic
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| Zombo104 | Date: Sunday, 2011-12-18, 1:40 AM | Message # 770 |
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| "Hows the progress? Slow I'm guessing."
It's funny until someone gets hurt. Then it's just hilarious.
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| Kenzieroo | Date: Sunday, 2011-12-18, 1:50 AM | Message # 771 |
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From the Forest
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| ~Silver
I nod, "I don't want to mess this up."
On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic
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| Zombo104 | Date: Sunday, 2011-12-18, 1:59 AM | Message # 772 |
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Famous RP'er
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| "Ya, that would be bad... "
It's funny until someone gets hurt. Then it's just hilarious.
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| Kenzieroo | Date: Sunday, 2011-12-18, 2:05 AM | Message # 773 |
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From the Forest
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| ~Silver
I pull up the knife again scraping the outsides.
On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic
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| Evie | Date: Sunday, 2011-12-18, 2:13 AM | Message # 774 |
 RP'er Without A Life
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| "I'm going to get some water from a stream or something." I told them and left to refill my canteen.
Shoot for the moon★ ☆ ✰
If you miss★ ☆ ✰
You'll still land among the stars★ ☆ ✰
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| Kenzieroo | Date: Sunday, 2011-12-18, 2:43 AM | Message # 775 |
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From the Forest
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| ~Silver
I felt as if I was trying to stop a bomb, and I wouldn't be suprised if this did explode.
On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic
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| Demon | Date: Sunday, 2011-12-18, 7:27 AM | Message # 776 |
 ※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
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| I smiled at Cody, then turned to Silver and Alisa. "Is it almost off?"
ಠ_ಠ (づ ￣ ³￣)づ
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| Kenzieroo | Date: Sunday, 2011-12-18, 8:46 AM | Message # 777 |
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From the Forest
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| ~Silver
"No."
On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic
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| Equinox | Date: Sunday, 2011-12-18, 10:01 AM | Message # 778 |
 Social warrior of the administration
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| One has left.
Two are occupied.
One is incapacitated.
Now is the time.
The time to strike.
The time to kill.
The time to win.
~Glacial Malphite: The Shard of the Monolith~
"I hear rumors that the Shard of the Monolith is an unstoppable force. They aren't rumors."-Nausus, on the topic of Malphite's arrival.
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| Kenzieroo | Date: Sunday, 2011-12-18, 10:04 AM | Message # 779 |
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From the Forest
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| ( :/ )
On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic
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| Demon | Date: Sunday, 2011-12-18, 10:17 AM | Message # 780 |
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※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
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| (Jeeze, Equi, you must be the master of riddles or something @_@)
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