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_/\_The Changers_/\_ (My 3rd roleplay..)
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| Supernerd | Date: Sunday, 2011-10-09, 1:16 AM | Message # 1 |
 A Hater/Friend of Equinox
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| Oh? So you think this is cool? To be a Change? No, its not, its a nightmare, a nightmare that i hope that never happens to anybody else....i only wished that my hope was true...Listen. Having these powers are a pain in the ass,the cops are after us,so are the TAPA, The Anti Power Association... having scientists wanting to know how we do such amazing powers that we do with our hands, or well, anything. Don't ask me how I got them, cause i don't know...I was just a kid just like you, a family...a home, but thats gone now. All i have are my guts, and instincts, to help me pass each minute, each hour, each day...if you see this message,and if you are one of me, read this message carefully. Never trust anyone you see...never trust any one of your own, not even me, y'see,they have spies, they use them..to plot there next strategy on us, on how to capture us, in case were somehow giving a "virus" to anyone..we already had to kill one of our own..lets just hope your not next. All I can say is...its a hard life to be me, a Changer.
(Sorry couldnt really think of anything good to call the people with powers...XD)
-Changer Character sheet-
Name:
Age:
Appearance:
Weapon(s)?(Dont have to have one):
Powers(Two please..no more than that.):
When were you a Changer?:
Bio:
Other: (Sorta for like giving a tip about how you can calm down your character or like foreshadowing)
-T.A.P.A Spy Character Sheet- (No more than two...)
Name:
Age:
Appearance:
Weapons(?):
Powers(Once again no more than two):
When were you a changer?:
When you were caught(Can be at birth...):
Bio:
Other: (same as the other other,)
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Reviews
~Equinox~
Story:3/5
It's got a story, but not a REAL story. It's hard to explain. There's a story from a unknown person's view, but not a plot for any long term story.
Grammar:4/5
It's got some good grammar, but just a FEW mistakes. A very few.
Character detail:4/5
Very nice character sheets and variety of character values. It's well done.
Plot Development:2.5/5
It's got a bit of a plot. Trying to put up with being a changeling. Not a massive or expansive plot though, so it's not a very good plot development, but it's got some possibilities.
Overall rating:3/5
Honestly, this is a pretty good RP. I don't plan on joining, but I must say if I had about 1 cell more in my brain to put up with making a CS, I would gladly join. Don't think this is a bad RP because I don't feel like joining, it's honestly really good. My laziness is just getting to me from work.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
Message edited by Supernerd - Sunday, 2011-10-09, 12:14 PM |
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| Kenzieroo | Date: Friday, 2011-12-16, 8:22 PM | Message # 736 |
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From the Forest
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| ~Silver
In my frustration I toss the Piccolo, it slide across the cave. I sigh, probably scraped it..
On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic
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| Zombo104 | Date: Friday, 2011-12-16, 9:14 PM | Message # 737 |
 Famous RP'er
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| I walked into the cave grabbing at the collar trying to yank it off.
It's funny until someone gets hurt. Then it's just hilarious.
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| Kenzieroo | Date: Friday, 2011-12-16, 9:18 PM | Message # 738 |
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From the Forest
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| ~Silver
"Want help with that?"
On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic
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| Zombo104 | Date: Friday, 2011-12-16, 9:35 PM | Message # 739 |
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| "Yes, please." I looked over at Isaac hoping he was still unconscious. I whispered to Silver, "If the TAPA finds us and I still have this collar on then they will be able to use me as a weapon."
It's funny until someone gets hurt. Then it's just hilarious.
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| Kenzieroo | Date: Friday, 2011-12-16, 9:42 PM | Message # 740 |
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From the Forest
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| ~Silver
I pull out my pocket knife and nod, "I don't know much about that stuff, I'll take your word for it."
On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic
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| Demon | Date: Friday, 2011-12-16, 9:52 PM | Message # 741 |
 ※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
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| "Sure." I dug though my pack for a water bottle. Eventually, I pulled one out and handed it to him.
ಠ_ಠ (づ ￣ ³￣)づ
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| Evie | Date: Friday, 2011-12-16, 9:52 PM | Message # 742 |
 RP'er Without A Life
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| "Issac won't know.The model is too new. Good thing Cody has snapped back to reality though."
Shoot for the moon★ ☆ ✰
If you miss★ ☆ ✰
You'll still land among the stars★ ☆ ✰
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| Kenzieroo | Date: Friday, 2011-12-16, 9:57 PM | Message # 743 |
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From the Forest
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| ~Silver
I sigh, "I wish I knew what you where talking about. I've been living in my house all my life and I don't understand anything."
On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic
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| Evie | Date: Friday, 2011-12-16, 11:11 PM | Message # 744 |
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RP'er Without A Life
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| "The main thing you need to know is that TAPA are the bad guys." I told her then looked over at Cody and smiled, "Well most of them anyway."
Shoot for the moon★ ☆ ✰
If you miss★ ☆ ✰
You'll still land among the stars★ ☆ ✰
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| Kenzieroo | Date: Friday, 2011-12-16, 11:18 PM | Message # 745 |
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From the Forest
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| ~Silver
I shrug, "I got that much, after years alone in my home I found ways to snoop undetected."
On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic
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| Zombo104 | Date: Friday, 2011-12-16, 11:45 PM | Message # 746 |
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| "The scientist said I would have a fun time trying to get it off"
It's funny until someone gets hurt. Then it's just hilarious.
Message edited by Zombo104 - Friday, 2011-12-16, 11:53 PM |
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| Kenzieroo | Date: Friday, 2011-12-16, 11:49 PM | Message # 747 |
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From the Forest
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| ~Silver
"Full of electricity I'm sure."
On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic
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| Demon | Date: Saturday, 2011-12-17, 8:22 AM | Message # 748 |
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※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
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| I sighed, and sat down. "And Isaac is our little hostage." I laughed. "The poor guy screwed up his own life when he decided to mess with me"
ಠ_ಠ (づ ￣ ³￣)づ
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| Kenzieroo | Date: Saturday, 2011-12-17, 10:51 AM | Message # 749 |
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From the Forest
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Messages: 7524
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| ~Silver
I stiffle a laugh and examine the collar."
On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic
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| Evie | Date: Saturday, 2011-12-17, 12:34 PM | Message # 750 |
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RP'er Without A Life
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| "Can't I just kill him?"
Shoot for the moon★ ☆ ✰
If you miss★ ☆ ✰
You'll still land among the stars★ ☆ ✰
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