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_/\_The Changers_/\_ (My 3rd roleplay..)
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| Supernerd | Date: Sunday, 2011-10-09, 1:16 AM | Message # 1 |
 A Hater/Friend of Equinox
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| Oh? So you think this is cool? To be a Change? No, its not, its a nightmare, a nightmare that i hope that never happens to anybody else....i only wished that my hope was true...Listen. Having these powers are a pain in the ass,the cops are after us,so are the TAPA, The Anti Power Association... having scientists wanting to know how we do such amazing powers that we do with our hands, or well, anything. Don't ask me how I got them, cause i don't know...I was just a kid just like you, a family...a home, but thats gone now. All i have are my guts, and instincts, to help me pass each minute, each hour, each day...if you see this message,and if you are one of me, read this message carefully. Never trust anyone you see...never trust any one of your own, not even me, y'see,they have spies, they use them..to plot there next strategy on us, on how to capture us, in case were somehow giving a "virus" to anyone..we already had to kill one of our own..lets just hope your not next. All I can say is...its a hard life to be me, a Changer.
(Sorry couldnt really think of anything good to call the people with powers...XD)
-Changer Character sheet-
Name:
Age:
Appearance:
Weapon(s)?(Dont have to have one):
Powers(Two please..no more than that.):
When were you a Changer?:
Bio:
Other: (Sorta for like giving a tip about how you can calm down your character or like foreshadowing)
-T.A.P.A Spy Character Sheet- (No more than two...)
Name:
Age:
Appearance:
Weapons(?):
Powers(Once again no more than two):
When were you a changer?:
When you were caught(Can be at birth...):
Bio:
Other: (same as the other other,)
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Reviews
~Equinox~
Story:3/5
It's got a story, but not a REAL story. It's hard to explain. There's a story from a unknown person's view, but not a plot for any long term story.
Grammar:4/5
It's got some good grammar, but just a FEW mistakes. A very few.
Character detail:4/5
Very nice character sheets and variety of character values. It's well done.
Plot Development:2.5/5
It's got a bit of a plot. Trying to put up with being a changeling. Not a massive or expansive plot though, so it's not a very good plot development, but it's got some possibilities.
Overall rating:3/5
Honestly, this is a pretty good RP. I don't plan on joining, but I must say if I had about 1 cell more in my brain to put up with making a CS, I would gladly join. Don't think this is a bad RP because I don't feel like joining, it's honestly really good. My laziness is just getting to me from work.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
Message edited by Supernerd - Sunday, 2011-10-09, 12:14 PM |
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| Supernerd | Date: Thursday, 2011-12-15, 7:44 PM | Message # 706 |
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A Hater/Friend of Equinox
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| Isaac-
My eyes widened as she appeared from nowhere. "AH!!!" I pulleed back in surprise, so quickly that I fell on the ground. "FUCK!"
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Demon | Date: Thursday, 2011-12-15, 7:55 PM | Message # 707 |
 ※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
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| I slung Isaac over my shoulder, along with Cody.
ಠ_ಠ (づ ￣ ³￣)づ
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| Zombo104 | Date: Thursday, 2011-12-15, 8:32 PM | Message # 708 |
 Famous RP'er
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| I caught up with Brisk and Virra and saw Brisk now had Cody and Isaac over her shoulders. Thats when I remembered that if Isaac is a TAPA then her could control me Please don't let him see the collar, please don't let him see the collar, please don't let him see the collar.
It's funny until someone gets hurt. Then it's just hilarious.
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| Kenzieroo | Date: Thursday, 2011-12-15, 8:34 PM | Message # 709 |
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From the Forest
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| ~Silver
I follow all of them, having nothing better to do.
On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic
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| Supernerd | Date: Thursday, 2011-12-15, 9:17 PM | Message # 710 |
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A Hater/Friend of Equinox
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Messages: 3145
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| Isaac-
I cursed, squirming. "LET GO OF ME!!!!" I screamed,. I glanced, seeing a collar?...psh, emo much. (he doesnt know about the designs, since theyre since they're new.)
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Evie | Date: Friday, 2011-12-16, 0:36 AM | Message # 711 |
 RP'er Without A Life
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| "Ugh lets just shut this kid up already, throw him off a cliff or something." I said to the others.
Shoot for the moon★ ☆ ✰
If you miss★ ☆ ✰
You'll still land among the stars★ ☆ ✰
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| Zombo104 | Date: Friday, 2011-12-16, 1:41 AM | Message # 712 |
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Famous RP'er
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| Hmm, I wonder.... He hasn't been in contact with the TAPA for a while now so hopefully he doesn't know. "Throwing him off a cliff would be an unwise decision."
It's funny until someone gets hurt. Then it's just hilarious.
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| Kenzieroo | Date: Friday, 2011-12-16, 10:03 AM | Message # 713 |
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From the Forest
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| ~Silver
I sigh, Why am I doing this again? Because I've been stuck for two weeks with NOTHING to do I thought, What's worse is all this time alone I realized how much I hate the Picolo and now I miss my Baritone Saxaphone but its WAY to big to bring with me.
On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic
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| Demon | Date: Friday, 2011-12-16, 4:19 PM | Message # 714 |
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※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
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| I growled and punched the back of his head. "That should shut him up"
ಠ_ಠ (づ ￣ ³￣)づ
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| Supernerd | Date: Friday, 2011-12-16, 6:15 PM | Message # 715 |
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| Isaac-
"I SWEAR TO GOD! LET ME GO MOTHE-" Crack! Isaac then hung limp on Brisks shoulders.
Cody-
"Mpph...." I mumbled, slowly opening my eyes a crack...I felt weak, all I saw was green and brown blurs, ocassionally with different colors....
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Demon | Date: Friday, 2011-12-16, 6:45 PM | Message # 716 |
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※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
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| I laughed abit, then stopped when we got to the mouth of a cave. "This will do, for now." I gently dropped Cody down, but let Isaac fall off my shoulder with a loud thud. (LOL)
ಠ_ಠ (づ ￣ ³￣)づ
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| Supernerd | Date: Friday, 2011-12-16, 6:52 PM | Message # 717 |
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| Cody-
I breathed more smoothly, my eyes were still slightly open, yet I felt so drained...somehow. I felt sick, dizzy.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Evie | Date: Friday, 2011-12-16, 6:58 PM | Message # 718 |
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RP'er Without A Life
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| (ever noticed how much we love caves?LOL)
I walked into the still mad at Issac.
Shoot for the moon★ ☆ ✰
If you miss★ ☆ ✰
You'll still land among the stars★ ☆ ✰
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| Demon | Date: Friday, 2011-12-16, 7:00 PM | Message # 719 |
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※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
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| (Caves be meh best friend o3o)
I looked at Isaac, then Cody, then the group. "Everyone okay?"
ಠ_ಠ (づ ￣ ³￣)づ
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| Supernerd | Date: Friday, 2011-12-16, 7:03 PM | Message # 720 |
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A Hater/Friend of Equinox
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Messages: 3145
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| Cody-
I heard muffled voices...."Grrrffter" I gurgled, god i felt so nautious...
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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