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_/\_The Changers_/\_ (My 3rd roleplay..)
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| Supernerd | Date: Sunday, 2011-10-09, 1:16 AM | Message # 1 |
 A Hater/Friend of Equinox
Group: Special
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| Oh? So you think this is cool? To be a Change? No, its not, its a nightmare, a nightmare that i hope that never happens to anybody else....i only wished that my hope was true...Listen. Having these powers are a pain in the ass,the cops are after us,so are the TAPA, The Anti Power Association... having scientists wanting to know how we do such amazing powers that we do with our hands, or well, anything. Don't ask me how I got them, cause i don't know...I was just a kid just like you, a family...a home, but thats gone now. All i have are my guts, and instincts, to help me pass each minute, each hour, each day...if you see this message,and if you are one of me, read this message carefully. Never trust anyone you see...never trust any one of your own, not even me, y'see,they have spies, they use them..to plot there next strategy on us, on how to capture us, in case were somehow giving a "virus" to anyone..we already had to kill one of our own..lets just hope your not next. All I can say is...its a hard life to be me, a Changer.
(Sorry couldnt really think of anything good to call the people with powers...XD)
-Changer Character sheet-
Name:
Age:
Appearance:
Weapon(s)?(Dont have to have one):
Powers(Two please..no more than that.):
When were you a Changer?:
Bio:
Other: (Sorta for like giving a tip about how you can calm down your character or like foreshadowing)
-T.A.P.A Spy Character Sheet- (No more than two...)
Name:
Age:
Appearance:
Weapons(?):
Powers(Once again no more than two):
When were you a changer?:
When you were caught(Can be at birth...):
Bio:
Other: (same as the other other,)
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Reviews
~Equinox~
Story:3/5
It's got a story, but not a REAL story. It's hard to explain. There's a story from a unknown person's view, but not a plot for any long term story.
Grammar:4/5
It's got some good grammar, but just a FEW mistakes. A very few.
Character detail:4/5
Very nice character sheets and variety of character values. It's well done.
Plot Development:2.5/5
It's got a bit of a plot. Trying to put up with being a changeling. Not a massive or expansive plot though, so it's not a very good plot development, but it's got some possibilities.
Overall rating:3/5
Honestly, this is a pretty good RP. I don't plan on joining, but I must say if I had about 1 cell more in my brain to put up with making a CS, I would gladly join. Don't think this is a bad RP because I don't feel like joining, it's honestly really good. My laziness is just getting to me from work.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
Message edited by Supernerd - Sunday, 2011-10-09, 12:14 PM |
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| Equinox | Date: Tuesday, 2011-12-13, 7:44 PM | Message # 691 |
 Social warrior of the administration
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| "Find your friends, and hope he doesn't."
The man turns and walks off calmly, as if he hadn't a care.
~Glacial Malphite: The Shard of the Monolith~
"I hear rumors that the Shard of the Monolith is an unstoppable force. They aren't rumors."-Nausus, on the topic of Malphite's arrival.
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| Kenzieroo | Date: Tuesday, 2011-12-13, 7:46 PM | Message # 692 |
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From the Forest
Group: Moderators
Messages: 7524
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| ~Silver
I sigh, and try to heal my shoulder.
On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic
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| Supernerd | Date: Tuesday, 2011-12-13, 8:55 PM | Message # 693 |
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A Hater/Friend of Equinox
Group: Special
Messages: 3145
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| Cody-
I still lay on the ground, unconscious.
Isaac-
I stared at Virra. Getting up as I did. "I just can't get rid of you? Can't I? YOU'RE LIKE A CURSE!" I yelled at her. My voice echoing somewhat loudly around the forest.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Demon | Date: Tuesday, 2011-12-13, 9:35 PM | Message # 694 |
 ※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
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| I morphed human, and threw Cody over my shoulder. "Lets get going"
Then I heard Isaac yelling. "Hah. Stupid bastard gave away his hiding place" I ran, towards the sound, eventually reaching the other two.
ಠ_ಠ (づ ￣ ³￣)づ
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| Kenzieroo | Date: Tuesday, 2011-12-13, 9:41 PM | Message # 695 |
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From the Forest
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| ~Silver
I follow... What was her name again, Brisk? Yea thats it.
On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic
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| Supernerd | Date: Tuesday, 2011-12-13, 10:28 PM | Message # 696 |
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A Hater/Friend of Equinox
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| Issac's back was faced towards Brisk.
Isaac-
I clenched my fists. "AND YOU JUST KEEP COMING BACK! LIKE THOSE RETCHED MOSQUITOS! MAKING THAT STUPID LITTLE NOISE IN YOUR EAR!" I screamed.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Kenzieroo | Date: Tuesday, 2011-12-13, 10:40 PM | Message # 697 |
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From the Forest
Group: Moderators
Messages: 7524
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| ~Silver
I sigh, this was getting really strange.
On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic
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| Zombo104 | Date: Wednesday, 2011-12-14, 0:30 AM | Message # 698 |
 Famous RP'er
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| I chuckled as I saw and heard Isaac. I was actually starting to get used to this.
It's funny until someone gets hurt. Then it's just hilarious.
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| Kenzieroo | Date: Wednesday, 2011-12-14, 10:14 AM | Message # 699 |
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From the Forest
Group: Moderators
Messages: 7524
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| ~Silver
I shift the weight on my feet, not knowing what to do or say.
On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic
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| Evie | Date: Wednesday, 2011-12-14, 10:45 AM | Message # 700 |
 RP'er Without A Life
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| "You know me perfectly." I smirked at Issac.
Shoot for the moon★ ☆ ✰
If you miss★ ☆ ✰
You'll still land among the stars★ ☆ ✰
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| Kenzieroo | Date: Wednesday, 2011-12-14, 10:50 AM | Message # 701 |
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From the Forest
Group: Moderators
Messages: 7524
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| ~Silver
I sigh, then did the only thing I could think of. I pull out my Picolo, so as not to disturb them I just finger a little bit, trying to remember a tune.
On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic
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| Demon | Date: Wednesday, 2011-12-14, 2:51 PM | Message # 702 |
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※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
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Messages: 9627
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| I rolled my eyes. "Look, kid, you brought this on yourself, so don't go blaming us."
ಠ_ಠ (づ ￣ ³￣)づ
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| Supernerd | Date: Wednesday, 2011-12-14, 10:41 PM | Message # 703 |
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A Hater/Friend of Equinox
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| Isaac-
I flinched. Shutting up, my shoulders raised and I gritted my teeth. "Great....." I turned around, the anger disappeared...followed by fear, annoyance, and ignorance. "Fuck, you." I turned and ran, ignoring the pain in my shoulder that just started to come to me.
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Cody continued to be unconscious.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Demon | Date: Thursday, 2011-12-15, 3:06 PM | Message # 704 |
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※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
Group: Administrators
Messages: 9627
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| I growled, morphed into a wolf, and bit his leg gently. "Stay"
I morphed human, and slung him over my shoulder, like Cody.
ಠ_ಠ (づ ￣ ³￣)づ
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| Evie | Date: Thursday, 2011-12-15, 6:39 PM | Message # 705 |
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RP'er Without A Life
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Messages: 2382
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| I of course could run way faster then him so easily I catch up and trip him. "So you try to kill me twice and now you think I'm just going to let that go? Ya right." I told him.
Shoot for the moon★ ☆ ✰
If you miss★ ☆ ✰
You'll still land among the stars★ ☆ ✰
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