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_/\_The Changers_/\_ (My 3rd roleplay..)
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| Supernerd | Date: Sunday, 2011-10-09, 1:16 AM | Message # 1 |
 A Hater/Friend of Equinox
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| Oh? So you think this is cool? To be a Change? No, its not, its a nightmare, a nightmare that i hope that never happens to anybody else....i only wished that my hope was true...Listen. Having these powers are a pain in the ass,the cops are after us,so are the TAPA, The Anti Power Association... having scientists wanting to know how we do such amazing powers that we do with our hands, or well, anything. Don't ask me how I got them, cause i don't know...I was just a kid just like you, a family...a home, but thats gone now. All i have are my guts, and instincts, to help me pass each minute, each hour, each day...if you see this message,and if you are one of me, read this message carefully. Never trust anyone you see...never trust any one of your own, not even me, y'see,they have spies, they use them..to plot there next strategy on us, on how to capture us, in case were somehow giving a "virus" to anyone..we already had to kill one of our own..lets just hope your not next. All I can say is...its a hard life to be me, a Changer.
(Sorry couldnt really think of anything good to call the people with powers...XD)
-Changer Character sheet-
Name:
Age:
Appearance:
Weapon(s)?(Dont have to have one):
Powers(Two please..no more than that.):
When were you a Changer?:
Bio:
Other: (Sorta for like giving a tip about how you can calm down your character or like foreshadowing)
-T.A.P.A Spy Character Sheet- (No more than two...)
Name:
Age:
Appearance:
Weapons(?):
Powers(Once again no more than two):
When were you a changer?:
When you were caught(Can be at birth...):
Bio:
Other: (same as the other other,)
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Reviews
~Equinox~
Story:3/5
It's got a story, but not a REAL story. It's hard to explain. There's a story from a unknown person's view, but not a plot for any long term story.
Grammar:4/5
It's got some good grammar, but just a FEW mistakes. A very few.
Character detail:4/5
Very nice character sheets and variety of character values. It's well done.
Plot Development:2.5/5
It's got a bit of a plot. Trying to put up with being a changeling. Not a massive or expansive plot though, so it's not a very good plot development, but it's got some possibilities.
Overall rating:3/5
Honestly, this is a pretty good RP. I don't plan on joining, but I must say if I had about 1 cell more in my brain to put up with making a CS, I would gladly join. Don't think this is a bad RP because I don't feel like joining, it's honestly really good. My laziness is just getting to me from work.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
Message edited by Supernerd - Sunday, 2011-10-09, 12:14 PM |
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| Kenzieroo | Date: Monday, 2011-12-12, 9:18 PM | Message # 661 |
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From the Forest
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| ~Silver
At the last second I jump down from a tree, "Suicide is never a good idea, you know that."
On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic
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| Equinox | Date: Monday, 2011-12-12, 9:20 PM | Message # 662 |
 Social warrior of the administration
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| They spin around and come back to me, allowing me to catch them and prep them again.
"Fuck this."
I throw down a gray marble, and begin to run the opposite way.
~Glacial Malphite: The Shard of the Monolith~
"I hear rumors that the Shard of the Monolith is an unstoppable force. They aren't rumors."-Nausus, on the topic of Malphite's arrival.
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| Kenzieroo | Date: Monday, 2011-12-12, 9:22 PM | Message # 663 |
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From the Forest
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| ~Silver
"Whatever," I mummble quietly to myself.
On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic
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| Evie | Date: Tuesday, 2011-12-13, 0:29 AM | Message # 664 |
 RP'er Without A Life
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Messages: 2382
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| I Pointed to the red burnt hand print on Issac's shoulder.
Shoot for the moon★ ☆ ✰
If you miss★ ☆ ✰
You'll still land among the stars★ ☆ ✰
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| Kenzieroo | Date: Tuesday, 2011-12-13, 9:46 AM | Message # 665 |
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From the Forest
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Messages: 7524
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| ~Silver
My apearance changes back, I blink a second. "Better." my voice cracks a bit.
On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic
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| Equinox | Date: Tuesday, 2011-12-13, 10:18 AM | Message # 666 |
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Social warrior of the administration
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| As she changes back, the gray marble explodes, metal shards flying through the air with a combination of bullets raining down.
~Glacial Malphite: The Shard of the Monolith~
"I hear rumors that the Shard of the Monolith is an unstoppable force. They aren't rumors."-Nausus, on the topic of Malphite's arrival.
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| Kenzieroo | Date: Tuesday, 2011-12-13, 10:24 AM | Message # 667 |
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From the Forest
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| ~Silver
"Crap," and I did the only thing a could I pull my bag above my head. Not that it did much.
On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic
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| Zombo104 | Date: Tuesday, 2011-12-13, 10:28 AM | Message # 668 |
 Famous RP'er
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| I shoot quick barrier of liquid metal over her and it absorbs most of the bullets.
It's funny until someone gets hurt. Then it's just hilarious.
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| Kenzieroo | Date: Tuesday, 2011-12-13, 10:31 AM | Message # 669 |
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From the Forest
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| ~Silver
I sigh, "Thanks, owch," that's when my healing began the bullets started getting pushed out and the skin was healing, it felt like death. Or I think it does, havnt did yet...
On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic
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| Zombo104 | Date: Tuesday, 2011-12-13, 10:39 AM | Message # 670 |
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| I shifted back into a human and looked around for Cody, I found him lying unconscious at the base of a tree. Then I looked back at Silver, "You alright?"
It's funny until someone gets hurt. Then it's just hilarious.
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| Kenzieroo | Date: Tuesday, 2011-12-13, 10:42 AM | Message # 671 |
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From the Forest
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| ~Silver
All of the bullets but one got out, it was stuck in my shoulder. "No."
On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic
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| Zombo104 | Date: Tuesday, 2011-12-13, 10:49 AM | Message # 672 |
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| I walked over to her and saw the bullets on the ground. "One still stuck in you?" I ask looking at her bleeding shoulder.
It's funny until someone gets hurt. Then it's just hilarious.
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| Kenzieroo | Date: Tuesday, 2011-12-13, 10:54 AM | Message # 673 |
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From the Forest
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| ~Silver
"I can wait for more energy or heal over the bullet, not good options"
On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic
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| Zombo104 | Date: Tuesday, 2011-12-13, 10:56 AM | Message # 674 |
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| "Or.... Do you trust me enough to try to get it out? Or do you think its too deep?"
It's funny until someone gets hurt. Then it's just hilarious.
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| Kenzieroo | Date: Tuesday, 2011-12-13, 10:57 AM | Message # 675 |
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From the Forest
Group: Moderators
Messages: 7524
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| ~Silver
"To deep," I pause, "I should be fine to wait. If I rap it."
On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic
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