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_/\_The Changers_/\_ (My 3rd roleplay..)
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| Supernerd | Date: Sunday, 2011-10-09, 1:16 AM | Message # 1 |
 A Hater/Friend of Equinox
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| Oh? So you think this is cool? To be a Change? No, its not, its a nightmare, a nightmare that i hope that never happens to anybody else....i only wished that my hope was true...Listen. Having these powers are a pain in the ass,the cops are after us,so are the TAPA, The Anti Power Association... having scientists wanting to know how we do such amazing powers that we do with our hands, or well, anything. Don't ask me how I got them, cause i don't know...I was just a kid just like you, a family...a home, but thats gone now. All i have are my guts, and instincts, to help me pass each minute, each hour, each day...if you see this message,and if you are one of me, read this message carefully. Never trust anyone you see...never trust any one of your own, not even me, y'see,they have spies, they use them..to plot there next strategy on us, on how to capture us, in case were somehow giving a "virus" to anyone..we already had to kill one of our own..lets just hope your not next. All I can say is...its a hard life to be me, a Changer.
(Sorry couldnt really think of anything good to call the people with powers...XD)
-Changer Character sheet-
Name:
Age:
Appearance:
Weapon(s)?(Dont have to have one):
Powers(Two please..no more than that.):
When were you a Changer?:
Bio:
Other: (Sorta for like giving a tip about how you can calm down your character or like foreshadowing)
-T.A.P.A Spy Character Sheet- (No more than two...)
Name:
Age:
Appearance:
Weapons(?):
Powers(Once again no more than two):
When were you a changer?:
When you were caught(Can be at birth...):
Bio:
Other: (same as the other other,)
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Reviews
~Equinox~
Story:3/5
It's got a story, but not a REAL story. It's hard to explain. There's a story from a unknown person's view, but not a plot for any long term story.
Grammar:4/5
It's got some good grammar, but just a FEW mistakes. A very few.
Character detail:4/5
Very nice character sheets and variety of character values. It's well done.
Plot Development:2.5/5
It's got a bit of a plot. Trying to put up with being a changeling. Not a massive or expansive plot though, so it's not a very good plot development, but it's got some possibilities.
Overall rating:3/5
Honestly, this is a pretty good RP. I don't plan on joining, but I must say if I had about 1 cell more in my brain to put up with making a CS, I would gladly join. Don't think this is a bad RP because I don't feel like joining, it's honestly really good. My laziness is just getting to me from work.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
Message edited by Supernerd - Sunday, 2011-10-09, 12:14 PM |
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| Zombo104 | Date: Monday, 2011-12-12, 10:38 AM | Message # 646 |
 Famous RP'er
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| I glanced over at Silver hoping the attacker wouldn't look her way.
It's funny until someone gets hurt. Then it's just hilarious.
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| Kenzieroo | Date: Monday, 2011-12-12, 10:43 AM | Message # 647 |
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From the Forest
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| ~Silver
I was half hidden in the bushes, two weeks out of the house and I'm still told to hide.
On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic
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| Zombo104 | Date: Monday, 2011-12-12, 10:49 AM | Message # 648 |
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| I tried to put a thought in her head but just as a suggestion If you have a power that can bring this guy down or help, now would be the time to use it
It's funny until someone gets hurt. Then it's just hilarious.
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| Kenzieroo | Date: Monday, 2011-12-12, 10:54 AM | Message # 649 |
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From the Forest
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| ~Silver
Not knowing if she could hear me talk back wasn't sure if I should talk on my head, did anyway.
He seems mentally insane, I could distract him for you. I got up for the bush, fixing the last details in my head.
On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic
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| Zombo104 | Date: Monday, 2011-12-12, 11:05 AM | Message # 650 |
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| I partially panicked at that suggestion and also because I was surprised to hear her respond cause I thought I could only plant thoughts in others heads. I lost my transformation and stumbled on the ground. " Shoot..."
It's funny until someone gets hurt. Then it's just hilarious.
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| Evie | Date: Monday, 2011-12-12, 11:15 AM | Message # 651 |
 RP'er Without A Life
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| (read back to just after you were bitten.)
Shoot for the moon★ ☆ ✰
If you miss★ ☆ ✰
You'll still land among the stars★ ☆ ✰
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| Demon | Date: Monday, 2011-12-12, 3:02 PM | Message # 652 |
 ※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
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| I growled, and nodded in thanks at Alisa.
ಠ_ಠ (づ ￣ ³￣)づ
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| Equinox | Date: Monday, 2011-12-12, 3:57 PM | Message # 653 |
 Social warrior of the administration
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| I began scanning around at the now three people.
"Looks like I've got more company."
I pulled out a red marble.
"I always hated company."
I hurl the red marble on the ground near them, and it begins flashing.
~Glacial Malphite: The Shard of the Monolith~
"I hear rumors that the Shard of the Monolith is an unstoppable force. They aren't rumors."-Nausus, on the topic of Malphite's arrival.
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| Kenzieroo | Date: Monday, 2011-12-12, 5:49 PM | Message # 654 |
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From the Forest
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| ~Silver
I smile, Ok, I'm going to look and sound like him, hope this works. I quickly shift into the attackers appearance. Weird, hadn't been a boy in years... Now to distract him.
On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic
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| Demon | Date: Monday, 2011-12-12, 5:49 PM | Message # 655 |
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※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
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| "I don't want to know what the fuck that is..." I growled. I morphed into a metal dragon, like Alisa, and shielded the others with my wings
ಠ_ಠ (づ ￣ ³￣)づ
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| Kenzieroo | Date: Monday, 2011-12-12, 6:00 PM | Message # 656 |
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From the Forest
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| (What?)
On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic
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| Zombo104 | Date: Monday, 2011-12-12, 7:56 PM | Message # 657 |
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| I quickly scrambled back to my feet and morphed back into the metal dragon I had been.
It's funny until someone gets hurt. Then it's just hilarious.
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| Equinox | Date: Monday, 2011-12-12, 8:02 PM | Message # 658 |
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Social warrior of the administration
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| It explodes simply, as I pull out a couple of flat circles, one between each two fingers, in each hand.
~Glacial Malphite: The Shard of the Monolith~
"I hear rumors that the Shard of the Monolith is an unstoppable force. They aren't rumors."-Nausus, on the topic of Malphite's arrival.
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| Zombo104 | Date: Monday, 2011-12-12, 8:03 PM | Message # 659 |
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| "That, doesn't look too friendly.." I blew more liquid metal forming a barrier between us and our attacker.
It's funny until someone gets hurt. Then it's just hilarious.
Message edited by Zombo104 - Monday, 2011-12-12, 8:04 PM |
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| Kenzieroo | Date: Monday, 2011-12-12, 8:08 PM | Message # 660 |
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From the Forest
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| ~Silver
"Hey, me!" I yell at the attack on the top branch of a tree, his voice and all.
On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic
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