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_/\_The Changers_/\_ (My 3rd roleplay..)
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| Supernerd | Date: Sunday, 2011-10-09, 1:16 AM | Message # 1 |
 A Hater/Friend of Equinox
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| Oh? So you think this is cool? To be a Change? No, its not, its a nightmare, a nightmare that i hope that never happens to anybody else....i only wished that my hope was true...Listen. Having these powers are a pain in the ass,the cops are after us,so are the TAPA, The Anti Power Association... having scientists wanting to know how we do such amazing powers that we do with our hands, or well, anything. Don't ask me how I got them, cause i don't know...I was just a kid just like you, a family...a home, but thats gone now. All i have are my guts, and instincts, to help me pass each minute, each hour, each day...if you see this message,and if you are one of me, read this message carefully. Never trust anyone you see...never trust any one of your own, not even me, y'see,they have spies, they use them..to plot there next strategy on us, on how to capture us, in case were somehow giving a "virus" to anyone..we already had to kill one of our own..lets just hope your not next. All I can say is...its a hard life to be me, a Changer.
(Sorry couldnt really think of anything good to call the people with powers...XD)
-Changer Character sheet-
Name:
Age:
Appearance:
Weapon(s)?(Dont have to have one):
Powers(Two please..no more than that.):
When were you a Changer?:
Bio:
Other: (Sorta for like giving a tip about how you can calm down your character or like foreshadowing)
-T.A.P.A Spy Character Sheet- (No more than two...)
Name:
Age:
Appearance:
Weapons(?):
Powers(Once again no more than two):
When were you a changer?:
When you were caught(Can be at birth...):
Bio:
Other: (same as the other other,)
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Reviews
~Equinox~
Story:3/5
It's got a story, but not a REAL story. It's hard to explain. There's a story from a unknown person's view, but not a plot for any long term story.
Grammar:4/5
It's got some good grammar, but just a FEW mistakes. A very few.
Character detail:4/5
Very nice character sheets and variety of character values. It's well done.
Plot Development:2.5/5
It's got a bit of a plot. Trying to put up with being a changeling. Not a massive or expansive plot though, so it's not a very good plot development, but it's got some possibilities.
Overall rating:3/5
Honestly, this is a pretty good RP. I don't plan on joining, but I must say if I had about 1 cell more in my brain to put up with making a CS, I would gladly join. Don't think this is a bad RP because I don't feel like joining, it's honestly really good. My laziness is just getting to me from work.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
Message edited by Supernerd - Sunday, 2011-10-09, 12:14 PM |
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| Evie | Date: Sunday, 2011-12-11, 7:37 PM | Message # 631 |
 RP'er Without A Life
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| Damn what was going on? Brisk left... wheres Cody and Alisa? I turn and see Issac on the ground and walk over to him. "Wake up!" nothing. I splashed water from my canteen in his face. Still nothing. I reach into my bag and find a special pill, an antidote for snake poison and force it down Issac's throat.
Shoot for the moon★ ☆ ✰
If you miss★ ☆ ✰
You'll still land among the stars★ ☆ ✰
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| Equinox | Date: Sunday, 2011-12-11, 8:08 PM | Message # 632 |
 Social warrior of the administration
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| Several knives went flying towards her.
~Glacial Malphite: The Shard of the Monolith~
"I hear rumors that the Shard of the Monolith is an unstoppable force. They aren't rumors."-Nausus, on the topic of Malphite's arrival.
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| Demon | Date: Sunday, 2011-12-11, 8:16 PM | Message # 633 |
 ※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
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| I had left Isaac with (Evie), so it was easier to move around. "Watch out!" I pushed Cody out of the way. I quickly morphed into a medium sized dragon and shielded us with my wings, the defensive scales recieving no damage from the knives.
ಠ_ಠ (づ ￣ ³￣)づ
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| Supernerd | Date: Sunday, 2011-12-11, 8:39 PM | Message # 634 |
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A Hater/Friend of Equinox
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| Cody-
I fell down from the force of her push. Slamming my head against a tree, and then darkness. (unconscious)
Isaac-
"Mmph..." I slowly opened my eyes, seeing virra, my eyes widened and I tryed to scramble to my feet. But I was still weak, falling over. "Fuck! I'll never get to T.A.P.A.! " I said, my eyes starting to water.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
Message edited by Supernerd - Sunday, 2011-12-11, 9:00 PM |
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| Kenzieroo | Date: Sunday, 2011-12-11, 8:41 PM | Message # 635 |
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From the Forest
Group: Moderators
Messages: 7524
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| (Still waiting.)
On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic
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| Equinox | Date: Sunday, 2011-12-11, 9:14 PM | Message # 636 |
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Social warrior of the administration
Group: Administrators
Messages: 7183
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| "Fucking nearly infinite knife trick is horrible." I say out loud, as I draw a rifle and look at it, loading it.
"This should pierce those pesky scales." I say, taking aim for the head of the dragon...
~Glacial Malphite: The Shard of the Monolith~
"I hear rumors that the Shard of the Monolith is an unstoppable force. They aren't rumors."-Nausus, on the topic of Malphite's arrival.
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| Zombo104 | Date: Sunday, 2011-12-11, 9:25 PM | Message # 637 |
 Famous RP'er
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| I saw all the commotion going on with Brisk and morphed into a purely metal dragon and quickly headed over to her. Before going I said to Silver "Hide or something..."
It's funny until someone gets hurt. Then it's just hilarious.
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| Kenzieroo | Date: Sunday, 2011-12-11, 9:50 PM | Message # 638 |
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From the Forest
Group: Moderators
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| ~Silver
"Why?!?"
On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic
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| Demon | Date: Sunday, 2011-12-11, 10:12 PM | Message # 639 |
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※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
Group: Administrators
Messages: 9627
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| I growled dangerously at the mysterious voice, and morphed into a large serpent.
ಠ_ಠ (づ ￣ ³￣)づ
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| Equinox | Date: Sunday, 2011-12-11, 10:20 PM | Message # 640 |
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Social warrior of the administration
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| "EAT LEAD FREAKS!" I roar, firing at the serpent's head.
~Glacial Malphite: The Shard of the Monolith~
"I hear rumors that the Shard of the Monolith is an unstoppable force. They aren't rumors."-Nausus, on the topic of Malphite's arrival.
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| Demon | Date: Sunday, 2011-12-11, 10:31 PM | Message # 641 |
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※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
Group: Administrators
Messages: 9627
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| "Ohohoho~" I laughed in a sing-song voice. I spat an ominous black liquid at the bullets, and they melted. "Looks like we have a hater" I chuckled.
ಠ_ಠ (づ ￣ ³￣)づ
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| Evie | Date: Sunday, 2011-12-11, 11:39 PM | Message # 642 |
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RP'er Without A Life
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| "Hows the shoulder?" I smirked at Issac.
Shoot for the moon★ ☆ ✰
If you miss★ ☆ ✰
You'll still land among the stars★ ☆ ✰
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| Supernerd | Date: Monday, 2011-12-12, 0:48 AM | Message # 643 |
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A Hater/Friend of Equinox
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| ((? What about isaac's shoulder?))
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Zombo104 | Date: Monday, 2011-12-12, 10:31 AM | Message # 644 |
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| I let out a mechanical sounding roar and spat red hot melted metal at the attacker. It turned solid almost instantly after it landed.
It's funny until someone gets hurt. Then it's just hilarious.
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| Kenzieroo | Date: Monday, 2011-12-12, 10:36 AM | Message # 645 |
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From the Forest
Group: Moderators
Messages: 7524
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| ~Silver
I fold my arms, hating this.
On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic
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