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_/\_The Changers_/\_ (My 3rd roleplay..)
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| Supernerd | Date: Sunday, 2011-10-09, 1:16 AM | Message # 1 |
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| Oh? So you think this is cool? To be a Change? No, its not, its a nightmare, a nightmare that i hope that never happens to anybody else....i only wished that my hope was true...Listen. Having these powers are a pain in the ass,the cops are after us,so are the TAPA, The Anti Power Association... having scientists wanting to know how we do such amazing powers that we do with our hands, or well, anything. Don't ask me how I got them, cause i don't know...I was just a kid just like you, a family...a home, but thats gone now. All i have are my guts, and instincts, to help me pass each minute, each hour, each day...if you see this message,and if you are one of me, read this message carefully. Never trust anyone you see...never trust any one of your own, not even me, y'see,they have spies, they use them..to plot there next strategy on us, on how to capture us, in case were somehow giving a "virus" to anyone..we already had to kill one of our own..lets just hope your not next. All I can say is...its a hard life to be me, a Changer.
(Sorry couldnt really think of anything good to call the people with powers...XD)
-Changer Character sheet-
Name:
Age:
Appearance:
Weapon(s)?(Dont have to have one):
Powers(Two please..no more than that.):
When were you a Changer?:
Bio:
Other: (Sorta for like giving a tip about how you can calm down your character or like foreshadowing)
-T.A.P.A Spy Character Sheet- (No more than two...)
Name:
Age:
Appearance:
Weapons(?):
Powers(Once again no more than two):
When were you a changer?:
When you were caught(Can be at birth...):
Bio:
Other: (same as the other other,)
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Reviews
~Equinox~
Story:3/5
It's got a story, but not a REAL story. It's hard to explain. There's a story from a unknown person's view, but not a plot for any long term story.
Grammar:4/5
It's got some good grammar, but just a FEW mistakes. A very few.
Character detail:4/5
Very nice character sheets and variety of character values. It's well done.
Plot Development:2.5/5
It's got a bit of a plot. Trying to put up with being a changeling. Not a massive or expansive plot though, so it's not a very good plot development, but it's got some possibilities.
Overall rating:3/5
Honestly, this is a pretty good RP. I don't plan on joining, but I must say if I had about 1 cell more in my brain to put up with making a CS, I would gladly join. Don't think this is a bad RP because I don't feel like joining, it's honestly really good. My laziness is just getting to me from work.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
Message edited by Supernerd - Sunday, 2011-10-09, 12:14 PM |
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| Zombo104 | Date: Sunday, 2011-12-11, 2:26 PM | Message # 616 |
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| "Okay I think I can trust you." I morphed back into a human.
It's funny until someone gets hurt. Then it's just hilarious.
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| Demon | Date: Sunday, 2011-12-11, 2:30 PM | Message # 617 |
 ※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
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| A feral snarl ripped past my lips as (Equis) red mist started pouring out around me. It was strange, since the mist wasnt coming from me. I snarled again. An enemy.
ಠ_ಠ (づ ￣ ³￣)づ
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| Zombo104 | Date: Sunday, 2011-12-11, 2:32 PM | Message # 618 |
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| I heard Brisk's snarl. "Brisk!!!" I shouted into the forest.
It's funny until someone gets hurt. Then it's just hilarious.
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| Demon | Date: Sunday, 2011-12-11, 2:33 PM | Message # 619 |
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※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
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| I howled as an answer, not speaking. I didnt want the enemy to know I was a changer.
ಠ_ಠ (づ ￣ ³￣)づ
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| Kenzieroo | Date: Sunday, 2011-12-11, 2:36 PM | Message # 620 |
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From the Forest
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| ~Silver
"Brisk is a Changer, I'm guessing?"
On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic
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| Zombo104 | Date: Sunday, 2011-12-11, 2:43 PM | Message # 621 |
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| "Erm.... Ya"
It's funny until someone gets hurt. Then it's just hilarious.
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| Kenzieroo | Date: Sunday, 2011-12-11, 2:45 PM | Message # 622 |
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| ~Silver
I shift into her apearance, "Lets split up, if I find her she wont attack me."
On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic
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| Supernerd | Date: Sunday, 2011-12-11, 3:01 PM | Message # 623 |
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| |Cody-
I stared at the two, watching them from a difference
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Zombo104 | Date: Sunday, 2011-12-11, 3:09 PM | Message # 624 |
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| "Okay but I gotta take him with me." I said pointing at Cody.
It's funny until someone gets hurt. Then it's just hilarious.
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| Supernerd | Date: Sunday, 2011-12-11, 3:22 PM | Message # 625 |
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| Cody-
I stared at her, was I the hostage?...I thought over it for a moment. My god, I was! I turned and sprinted the opposite direction. (In order for Cody to remember everything, he's gotta see Brisk in HUMAN form. Cause he likes her....alot. XD)
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Kenzieroo | Date: Sunday, 2011-12-11, 3:28 PM | Message # 626 |
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| ~silver
"Um..."
On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic
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| Demon | Date: Sunday, 2011-12-11, 3:39 PM | Message # 627 |
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※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
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| "Ah, shit. This isnt working.... Damnit, COME ON OUT ALREADY!" I roared angrily at the hidden enemy. I morphed into my human form, Isaac still over my shoulder. I started to run, and eventually bumped into someone. (Cody)
ಠ_ಠ (づ ￣ ³￣)づ
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| Equinox | Date: Sunday, 2011-12-11, 4:33 PM | Message # 628 |
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| A bullet narrowly misses Brisk's foot, as a slight Shit sounded from the air.
~Glacial Malphite: The Shard of the Monolith~
"I hear rumors that the Shard of the Monolith is an unstoppable force. They aren't rumors."-Nausus, on the topic of Malphite's arrival.
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| Demon | Date: Sunday, 2011-12-11, 4:36 PM | Message # 629 |
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※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
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| I froze, and looked down, seeing a bullet fly past my foot. I growled. My senses were advanced, due to shapeshifting alot. My ear twitched as I heard a faint voice say "Shit"
I growled, and turned around.
ಠ_ಠ (づ ￣ ³￣)づ
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| Kenzieroo | Date: Sunday, 2011-12-11, 5:16 PM | Message # 630 |
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| (I'm ganna wait for Zombo.)
On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic
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