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_/\_The Changers_/\_ (My 3rd roleplay..)
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| Supernerd | Date: Sunday, 2011-10-09, 1:16 AM | Message # 1 |
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| Oh? So you think this is cool? To be a Change? No, its not, its a nightmare, a nightmare that i hope that never happens to anybody else....i only wished that my hope was true...Listen. Having these powers are a pain in the ass,the cops are after us,so are the TAPA, The Anti Power Association... having scientists wanting to know how we do such amazing powers that we do with our hands, or well, anything. Don't ask me how I got them, cause i don't know...I was just a kid just like you, a family...a home, but thats gone now. All i have are my guts, and instincts, to help me pass each minute, each hour, each day...if you see this message,and if you are one of me, read this message carefully. Never trust anyone you see...never trust any one of your own, not even me, y'see,they have spies, they use them..to plot there next strategy on us, on how to capture us, in case were somehow giving a "virus" to anyone..we already had to kill one of our own..lets just hope your not next. All I can say is...its a hard life to be me, a Changer.
(Sorry couldnt really think of anything good to call the people with powers...XD)
-Changer Character sheet-
Name:
Age:
Appearance:
Weapon(s)?(Dont have to have one):
Powers(Two please..no more than that.):
When were you a Changer?:
Bio:
Other: (Sorta for like giving a tip about how you can calm down your character or like foreshadowing)
-T.A.P.A Spy Character Sheet- (No more than two...)
Name:
Age:
Appearance:
Weapons(?):
Powers(Once again no more than two):
When were you a changer?:
When you were caught(Can be at birth...):
Bio:
Other: (same as the other other,)
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Reviews
~Equinox~
Story:3/5
It's got a story, but not a REAL story. It's hard to explain. There's a story from a unknown person's view, but not a plot for any long term story.
Grammar:4/5
It's got some good grammar, but just a FEW mistakes. A very few.
Character detail:4/5
Very nice character sheets and variety of character values. It's well done.
Plot Development:2.5/5
It's got a bit of a plot. Trying to put up with being a changeling. Not a massive or expansive plot though, so it's not a very good plot development, but it's got some possibilities.
Overall rating:3/5
Honestly, this is a pretty good RP. I don't plan on joining, but I must say if I had about 1 cell more in my brain to put up with making a CS, I would gladly join. Don't think this is a bad RP because I don't feel like joining, it's honestly really good. My laziness is just getting to me from work.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
Message edited by Supernerd - Sunday, 2011-10-09, 12:14 PM |
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| Demon | Date: Saturday, 2011-12-10, 3:54 PM | Message # 586 |
 ※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
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| "The other girl we were with"
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| Kenzieroo | Date: Saturday, 2011-12-10, 3:56 PM | Message # 587 |
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From the Forest
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| ~Silver
I put away the Picolo trying to figure out what was going on.
On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic
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| Evie | Date: Saturday, 2011-12-10, 3:57 PM | Message # 588 |
 RP'er Without A Life
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| I felt light headed and strange. "Sorry I think I might just need to sit down."
Shoot for the moon★ ☆ ✰
If you miss★ ☆ ✰
You'll still land among the stars★ ☆ ✰
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| Demon | Date: Saturday, 2011-12-10, 5:22 PM | Message # 589 |
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| "Well I'm gonna look for Chloe. Csan you stay here?"
Before she could answer, I ran off into the woods. Without knowing, I had ran past the flute girl.
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| Kenzieroo | Date: Saturday, 2011-12-10, 5:28 PM | Message # 590 |
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From the Forest
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| ~Silver
Quick I saw something pass me, what the heck.
On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic
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| Demon | Date: Saturday, 2011-12-10, 5:29 PM | Message # 591 |
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| I shrugged off the image of the girl with the flute, stopped, and sniffed the air for a whiff of Chloe. I caught her scent, along with Cody. And another unfarmiliar scent lingered nearby. (Equi)
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| Kenzieroo | Date: Saturday, 2011-12-10, 5:37 PM | Message # 592 |
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From the Forest
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| ~Silver
I sigh, now what. I decide to go the direction the person that past me.
On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic
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| Demon | Date: Saturday, 2011-12-10, 5:38 PM | Message # 593 |
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| (Im in wolf form)
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| Kenzieroo | Date: Saturday, 2011-12-10, 5:46 PM | Message # 594 |
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From the Forest
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| (ai didn't seem you well I'm guessing your human.)
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| Demon | Date: Saturday, 2011-12-10, 5:48 PM | Message # 595 |
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| (k)
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| Zombo104 | Date: Saturday, 2011-12-10, 5:54 PM | Message # 596 |
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| (Erm Demon, Chloe is the character for Super Humans. This one my char name is Alisa lol)
It's funny until someone gets hurt. Then it's just hilarious.
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| Kenzieroo | Date: Saturday, 2011-12-10, 5:55 PM | Message # 597 |
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From the Forest
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| ~Silver
I started walking, knowing I'd never get caught up with them."
On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic
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| Demon | Date: Saturday, 2011-12-10, 6:00 PM | Message # 598 |
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| (Oops >_<)
I stopped, and sniffed. Then I heard footsteps behind me. "HEllo?" I called out,.
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| Supernerd | Date: Saturday, 2011-12-10, 6:24 PM | Message # 599 |
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| Cody-
As I was on the ground I felt very shaky, weak. From the fear of heights...I was trembling all over. "Whos....Brisk?" Whoever it was, I had no intentions to meet it, I wanted to get out of here.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Zombo104 | Date: Saturday, 2011-12-10, 6:59 PM | Message # 600 |
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| "Brisk was in a cave with me Isaac and Virra a while back. Isaac's transmitter had told the TAPA where we were. Brisk got most of us away but I got caught. Brisk took you with her along with Isaac cause you said you could help us. Not so long ago all of us were in another cave and you were trying to hack the TAPA to let the other Changers they had captured out, something happened and me, you, and Brisk got captured." I explained.
It's funny until someone gets hurt. Then it's just hilarious.
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