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_/\_The Changers_/\_ (My 3rd roleplay..)
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| Supernerd | Date: Sunday, 2011-10-09, 1:16 AM | Message # 1 |
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| Oh? So you think this is cool? To be a Change? No, its not, its a nightmare, a nightmare that i hope that never happens to anybody else....i only wished that my hope was true...Listen. Having these powers are a pain in the ass,the cops are after us,so are the TAPA, The Anti Power Association... having scientists wanting to know how we do such amazing powers that we do with our hands, or well, anything. Don't ask me how I got them, cause i don't know...I was just a kid just like you, a family...a home, but thats gone now. All i have are my guts, and instincts, to help me pass each minute, each hour, each day...if you see this message,and if you are one of me, read this message carefully. Never trust anyone you see...never trust any one of your own, not even me, y'see,they have spies, they use them..to plot there next strategy on us, on how to capture us, in case were somehow giving a "virus" to anyone..we already had to kill one of our own..lets just hope your not next. All I can say is...its a hard life to be me, a Changer.
(Sorry couldnt really think of anything good to call the people with powers...XD)
-Changer Character sheet-
Name:
Age:
Appearance:
Weapon(s)?(Dont have to have one):
Powers(Two please..no more than that.):
When were you a Changer?:
Bio:
Other: (Sorta for like giving a tip about how you can calm down your character or like foreshadowing)
-T.A.P.A Spy Character Sheet- (No more than two...)
Name:
Age:
Appearance:
Weapons(?):
Powers(Once again no more than two):
When were you a changer?:
When you were caught(Can be at birth...):
Bio:
Other: (same as the other other,)
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Reviews
~Equinox~
Story:3/5
It's got a story, but not a REAL story. It's hard to explain. There's a story from a unknown person's view, but not a plot for any long term story.
Grammar:4/5
It's got some good grammar, but just a FEW mistakes. A very few.
Character detail:4/5
Very nice character sheets and variety of character values. It's well done.
Plot Development:2.5/5
It's got a bit of a plot. Trying to put up with being a changeling. Not a massive or expansive plot though, so it's not a very good plot development, but it's got some possibilities.
Overall rating:3/5
Honestly, this is a pretty good RP. I don't plan on joining, but I must say if I had about 1 cell more in my brain to put up with making a CS, I would gladly join. Don't think this is a bad RP because I don't feel like joining, it's honestly really good. My laziness is just getting to me from work.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
Message edited by Supernerd - Sunday, 2011-10-09, 12:14 PM |
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| Equinox | Date: Friday, 2011-12-09, 5:49 PM | Message # 556 |
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| I could hear rushing around at a big building in the distance.
It seemed appropriate to head towards there, perhaps I could...Get used to my surroundings.
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And by getting used to my surroundings, I mean murder everything I see.
~Glacial Malphite: The Shard of the Monolith~
"I hear rumors that the Shard of the Monolith is an unstoppable force. They aren't rumors."-Nausus, on the topic of Malphite's arrival.
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| Demon | Date: Friday, 2011-12-09, 6:56 PM | Message # 557 |
 ※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
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| (Ya, Kenzi?)
ಠ_ಠ (づ ￣ ³￣)づ
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| Kenzieroo | Date: Friday, 2011-12-09, 6:59 PM | Message # 558 |
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From the Forest
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| (Did you not read what I asked you earlyier?)
On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic
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| Demon | Date: Friday, 2011-12-09, 7:01 PM | Message # 559 |
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※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
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| (OOHHH Sorry about that DX
Sure, I'll find you. In a sec)
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| Kenzieroo | Date: Friday, 2011-12-09, 7:05 PM | Message # 560 |
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From the Forest
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| (Cool)
~Silver
I sigh, doing the only thing I could think. Pulling out my Picolo and start playing a soft melody not a real song just a bunch of notes.
On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic
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| Supernerd | Date: Friday, 2011-12-09, 7:07 PM | Message # 561 |
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| Cody-
I stared at her, I could feel her trying to edge into my thoughts, but i blocked them. "I'm telekinetic, do you REALLY think you can get into my head? Pathetic." I shoved the 'escapee' off me.
Isaac-
I fell to the ground, and as I layed on the ground, a bunny rabbit was in front of my face, it mocked me, she mocked me. "Fuck!" I got up, glaring at the girl and tackling her to the ground. My eyes crazed and wild, as I tackled her to the ground, i startled to strangle her, shaking her head around cursing each time I shook her.
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The men were still coming, heading through the hallways, searching.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Demon | Date: Friday, 2011-12-09, 7:13 PM | Message # 562 |
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※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
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| I got abit mad, so I silently hopped behind a tree, morphed into a snake, and slid out with a venomous hiss. I bit Isaacs hand, injecting just enough poison to make a man unconicous.
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| Kenzieroo | Date: Friday, 2011-12-09, 7:16 PM | Message # 563 |
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From the Forest
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| ~Silver
I drift into a different world. I shut my eyes at this point nothing mattered.
On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic
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| Supernerd | Date: Friday, 2011-12-09, 7:18 PM | Message # 564 |
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| Isaac-
"ASSHOLE! BITCH! YOU WHO-" TST I froze, my hands trembled, and as I looked down I saw a snake..."A...snake?" and my eyes slightly rolled behind my head as i fell unconscious.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Zombo104 | Date: Friday, 2011-12-09, 10:50 PM | Message # 565 |
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| I landed on the floor with a thud. "So you telekinetic are you? Interesting.." I changed into a giant griffin and grabbed Cody in my talons, breaking out of the roof of the building then flew off to the forest.
It's funny until someone gets hurt. Then it's just hilarious.
Message edited by Zombo104 - Friday, 2011-12-09, 10:50 PM |
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| Supernerd | Date: Friday, 2011-12-09, 10:58 PM | Message # 566 |
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| Cody-
My eyes widened. "What the? ahh! AAHHHH! WHERE ARE YOU-AAHHHH" The roof had broken, and I was already several feet up in the air as I looked down, then looked up again, praying silently to myself not to fall down as perspiration formed rapidly on my forehead.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Zombo104 | Date: Saturday, 2011-12-10, 0:00 AM | Message # 567 |
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| "Heh heh. Don't worry I won't let you fall. Y'know I think something similar to this may have happened to Isaac." I spotted Brisk,Isaac, and Virra. I flew down and landed a little ways from them pinning Cody underneath my claws. "Hey guys. Whats up?" I ask casually
It's funny until someone gets hurt. Then it's just hilarious.
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| Kenzieroo | Date: Saturday, 2011-12-10, 0:05 AM | Message # 568 |
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| ~Silver
I continue to play my Picolo, louder and louder it got. It was still a soft melody of notes. The trees and pants turn a blur of green in my vision off my narrow eyes.
On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic
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| Equinox | Date: Saturday, 2011-12-10, 0:41 AM | Message # 569 |
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| I see something carrying a person-
A person?
That's one person less to kill, and that's unacceptable. Plus, it looks like I'll be killing some legendary freak.
~Glacial Malphite: The Shard of the Monolith~
"I hear rumors that the Shard of the Monolith is an unstoppable force. They aren't rumors."-Nausus, on the topic of Malphite's arrival.
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| Supernerd | Date: Saturday, 2011-12-10, 0:53 AM | Message # 570 |
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| Cody-
I tryed to tug out of the girl/bird's grip. "WHAT THE HELL! LET. ME. GO! YOU FREAK!" (Equinox perfect time top join in/stalk)
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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