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_/\_The Changers_/\_ (My 3rd roleplay..)
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| Supernerd | Date: Sunday, 2011-10-09, 1:16 AM | Message # 1 |
 A Hater/Friend of Equinox
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| Oh? So you think this is cool? To be a Change? No, its not, its a nightmare, a nightmare that i hope that never happens to anybody else....i only wished that my hope was true...Listen. Having these powers are a pain in the ass,the cops are after us,so are the TAPA, The Anti Power Association... having scientists wanting to know how we do such amazing powers that we do with our hands, or well, anything. Don't ask me how I got them, cause i don't know...I was just a kid just like you, a family...a home, but thats gone now. All i have are my guts, and instincts, to help me pass each minute, each hour, each day...if you see this message,and if you are one of me, read this message carefully. Never trust anyone you see...never trust any one of your own, not even me, y'see,they have spies, they use them..to plot there next strategy on us, on how to capture us, in case were somehow giving a "virus" to anyone..we already had to kill one of our own..lets just hope your not next. All I can say is...its a hard life to be me, a Changer.
(Sorry couldnt really think of anything good to call the people with powers...XD)
-Changer Character sheet-
Name:
Age:
Appearance:
Weapon(s)?(Dont have to have one):
Powers(Two please..no more than that.):
When were you a Changer?:
Bio:
Other: (Sorta for like giving a tip about how you can calm down your character or like foreshadowing)
-T.A.P.A Spy Character Sheet- (No more than two...)
Name:
Age:
Appearance:
Weapons(?):
Powers(Once again no more than two):
When were you a changer?:
When you were caught(Can be at birth...):
Bio:
Other: (same as the other other,)
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Reviews
~Equinox~
Story:3/5
It's got a story, but not a REAL story. It's hard to explain. There's a story from a unknown person's view, but not a plot for any long term story.
Grammar:4/5
It's got some good grammar, but just a FEW mistakes. A very few.
Character detail:4/5
Very nice character sheets and variety of character values. It's well done.
Plot Development:2.5/5
It's got a bit of a plot. Trying to put up with being a changeling. Not a massive or expansive plot though, so it's not a very good plot development, but it's got some possibilities.
Overall rating:3/5
Honestly, this is a pretty good RP. I don't plan on joining, but I must say if I had about 1 cell more in my brain to put up with making a CS, I would gladly join. Don't think this is a bad RP because I don't feel like joining, it's honestly really good. My laziness is just getting to me from work.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
Message edited by Supernerd - Sunday, 2011-10-09, 12:14 PM |
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| Demon | Date: Saturday, 2011-12-03, 9:15 PM | Message # 526 |
 ※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
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| (Darn... Cause I'm bored xD)
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| Equinox | Date: Saturday, 2011-12-03, 9:22 PM | Message # 527 |
 Social warrior of the administration
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| I grab a locked chest and throw it against the wall. The wooden makings of the chest shatter, releasing it's treasures inside.
Weaponry.
~Glacial Malphite: The Shard of the Monolith~
"I hear rumors that the Shard of the Monolith is an unstoppable force. They aren't rumors."-Nausus, on the topic of Malphite's arrival.
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| Kenzieroo | Date: Saturday, 2011-12-03, 9:22 PM | Message # 528 |
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From the Forest
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| Quote (Kenzieroo) (Still don't know what to do.)
On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic
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| Demon | Date: Saturday, 2011-12-03, 9:23 PM | Message # 529 |
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※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
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| (... Well this is awkward)
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| Kenzieroo | Date: Saturday, 2011-12-03, 9:24 PM | Message # 530 |
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From the Forest
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| Quote (Demon) (... Well this is awkward)
(Or is it?)
On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic
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| Demon | Date: Saturday, 2011-12-03, 9:26 PM | Message # 531 |
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※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
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| (Yes, it is.)
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| Kenzieroo | Date: Saturday, 2011-12-03, 9:28 PM | Message # 532 |
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From the Forest
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| (Man computer lose the affect of everything.)
On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic
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| Demon | Date: Saturday, 2011-12-03, 9:31 PM | Message # 533 |
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※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
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| (Lol... x3)
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| Kenzieroo | Date: Saturday, 2011-12-03, 9:32 PM | Message # 534 |
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From the Forest
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(Yes, that was very necessary.)
On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic
Message edited by Kenzieroo - Saturday, 2011-12-03, 9:32 PM |
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| Demon | Date: Sunday, 2011-12-04, 9:48 AM | Message # 535 |
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| (Waiting...)
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| Kenzieroo | Date: Sunday, 2011-12-04, 12:10 PM | Message # 536 |
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From the Forest
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| (Idk what to do, need ideas...)
On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic
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| Zombo104 | Date: Sunday, 2011-12-04, 3:00 PM | Message # 537 |
 Famous RP'er
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| "Lets go find that Cody guy." I tell Brisk and fly off.
It's funny until someone gets hurt. Then it's just hilarious.
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| Demon | Date: Sunday, 2011-12-04, 3:16 PM | Message # 538 |
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| I nodded, flying after her. I glided next to Chloe, scanning the area.
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| Kenzieroo | Date: Sunday, 2011-12-04, 6:06 PM | Message # 539 |
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From the Forest
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| ~Silver
I walk about a mile or so tripping at lest 20 time maybe more.
On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic
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| Zero | Date: Tuesday, 2011-12-06, 9:02 PM | Message # 540 |
 Great RP'er
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| I arrived at the forest entrance only to see that there is a ambulance and some police there,What the hell? I go up to a policeman too ask what happened and he just told me in what a natural disaster and that a cave had collapsed on some people. Right away I knew it was no "natural disaster" something had happened. I rushed off in too the scene without anybody noticing.
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