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_/\_The Changers_/\_ (My 3rd roleplay..)
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| Supernerd | Date: Sunday, 2011-10-09, 1:16 AM | Message # 1 |
 A Hater/Friend of Equinox
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| Oh? So you think this is cool? To be a Change? No, its not, its a nightmare, a nightmare that i hope that never happens to anybody else....i only wished that my hope was true...Listen. Having these powers are a pain in the ass,the cops are after us,so are the TAPA, The Anti Power Association... having scientists wanting to know how we do such amazing powers that we do with our hands, or well, anything. Don't ask me how I got them, cause i don't know...I was just a kid just like you, a family...a home, but thats gone now. All i have are my guts, and instincts, to help me pass each minute, each hour, each day...if you see this message,and if you are one of me, read this message carefully. Never trust anyone you see...never trust any one of your own, not even me, y'see,they have spies, they use them..to plot there next strategy on us, on how to capture us, in case were somehow giving a "virus" to anyone..we already had to kill one of our own..lets just hope your not next. All I can say is...its a hard life to be me, a Changer.
(Sorry couldnt really think of anything good to call the people with powers...XD)
-Changer Character sheet-
Name:
Age:
Appearance:
Weapon(s)?(Dont have to have one):
Powers(Two please..no more than that.):
When were you a Changer?:
Bio:
Other: (Sorta for like giving a tip about how you can calm down your character or like foreshadowing)
-T.A.P.A Spy Character Sheet- (No more than two...)
Name:
Age:
Appearance:
Weapons(?):
Powers(Once again no more than two):
When were you a changer?:
When you were caught(Can be at birth...):
Bio:
Other: (same as the other other,)
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Reviews
~Equinox~
Story:3/5
It's got a story, but not a REAL story. It's hard to explain. There's a story from a unknown person's view, but not a plot for any long term story.
Grammar:4/5
It's got some good grammar, but just a FEW mistakes. A very few.
Character detail:4/5
Very nice character sheets and variety of character values. It's well done.
Plot Development:2.5/5
It's got a bit of a plot. Trying to put up with being a changeling. Not a massive or expansive plot though, so it's not a very good plot development, but it's got some possibilities.
Overall rating:3/5
Honestly, this is a pretty good RP. I don't plan on joining, but I must say if I had about 1 cell more in my brain to put up with making a CS, I would gladly join. Don't think this is a bad RP because I don't feel like joining, it's honestly really good. My laziness is just getting to me from work.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
Message edited by Supernerd - Sunday, 2011-10-09, 12:14 PM |
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| Kenzieroo | Date: Tuesday, 2011-12-06, 10:09 PM | Message # 541 |
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From the Forest
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| ~Silver
I sigh, I'm ssooooo bored. I think to myself as I continue to walk. I hade NO idea what I was doing. Why did I even continue if I had no reason to do so, why don't I just turn myself in? I sigh, because you'll regret it the moment it happens, or at lest thats what you think.
On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic
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| Evie | Date: Wednesday, 2011-12-07, 1:05 AM | Message # 542 |
 RP'er Without A Life
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| "You think you can just choke me and almost kill me? If I had died you would be getting tortured right now!" I told him angrily.
Shoot for the moon★ ☆ ✰
If you miss★ ☆ ✰
You'll still land among the stars★ ☆ ✰
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| Demon | Date: Wednesday, 2011-12-07, 9:09 PM | Message # 543 |
 ※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
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| Soon, we reached outside. I sighed in relief. "We're out! Lets go look for the others"
ಠ_ಠ (づ ￣ ³￣)づ
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| Kenzieroo | Date: Wednesday, 2011-12-07, 9:12 PM | Message # 544 |
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From the Forest
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| (You should meet up with me soon, but ugh soon.)
On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic
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| Equinox | Date: Thursday, 2011-12-08, 9:24 AM | Message # 545 |
 Social warrior of the administration
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| I could hear people coming upstairs. Time to make my grand escape.
I jump out the window, grabbing onto a rooftop. I climb up, and begin running across rooftops, to get as far away as possible.
~Glacial Malphite: The Shard of the Monolith~
"I hear rumors that the Shard of the Monolith is an unstoppable force. They aren't rumors."-Nausus, on the topic of Malphite's arrival.
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| Zombo104 | Date: Thursday, 2011-12-08, 10:00 AM | Message # 546 |
 Famous RP'er
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| I had stayed a little bit behind Brisk so she didn't notice that I had turned a corner. I found Cody's cell so I opened the door and found him already awake. I landed at the foot of the bed and changed back to human. "Found you. Come on lets get out of here."
It's funny until someone gets hurt. Then it's just hilarious.
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| Demon | Date: Thursday, 2011-12-08, 8:26 PM | Message # 547 |
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※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
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| "Im going ahead, got it, guys?" I yelled back. I flew off wihout an answer.
ಠ_ಠ (づ ￣ ³￣)づ
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| Kenzieroo | Date: Thursday, 2011-12-08, 8:48 PM | Message # 548 |
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From the Forest
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| (Yes, nO?)
On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic
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| Supernerd | Date: Thursday, 2011-12-08, 10:38 PM | Message # 549 |
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A Hater/Friend of Equinox
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| Cody-
I furrowed my eyebrows at the girl that had shapeshifted. "Do I know you?...." I looked around, I didnt see why I should actually be alarmed of this place, it seemed quite fine....
Isaac-
I stood there speechless "B-b-but THEY WEREN'T GOING TO TORTURE ME!!!!! IM THEIR HEAD SPY!-" I said pounding on my chest with a fist at what i last said. "-AND I WOULD BE GLAD TO TORTURED IF IT MEANT KILLING YOU!" I screamed.
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Officials were everywhere, running to the previous locations of the prisoners. Guns with sedative darts inside.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Zombo104 | Date: Thursday, 2011-12-08, 11:24 PM | Message # 550 |
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Famous RP'er
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| "Yes, you do know me. I was one on the Changers along with Brisk. Do you remember her at least? Anyways you helped us and now the TAPA will probably have some nasty plans for you." I heard the sounds of footsteps down the halls around where me and Brisk's cell was.
It's funny until someone gets hurt. Then it's just hilarious.
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| Supernerd | Date: Thursday, 2011-12-08, 11:34 PM | Message # 551 |
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A Hater/Friend of Equinox
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| Cody-
I raised an eyebrow. "I know TAPA well...they wouldnt do a thing to me...its YOU, who I do not remember. I've been a member here for years!" I said, "And your a escapee in progress; not!" I smirked as I then swung my fist at the girls face.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Zombo104 | Date: Thursday, 2011-12-08, 11:40 PM | Message # 552 |
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Famous RP'er
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| I grabbed his arm as he took a swing at me, I growled and pinned him to the bed. "You think your going to hurt me?" I considered a variety of different things to change into but couldn't think of anything that wouldn't kill him. Then I remembered my other power. I tried to get into his mind to plant some thoughts in there. You will not try to hurt me. You will follow me to where Brisk is waiting
It's funny until someone gets hurt. Then it's just hilarious.
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| Evie | Date: Friday, 2011-12-09, 0:06 AM | Message # 553 |
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RP'er Without A Life
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| "Fine! Kill me then! You couldn't finish the job before!, try me now!" I got up and satisfyingly kicked him in the face.
Shoot for the moon★ ☆ ✰
If you miss★ ☆ ✰
You'll still land among the stars★ ☆ ✰
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| Demon | Date: Friday, 2011-12-09, 4:06 PM | Message # 554 |
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※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
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| I trusted Chloe to get Cody. I flew around, and heard screaming. "Isaac" I muttered. I was in the form of a white bunny rabbit as I landed, making my apearance nothing like my normal self. I hopped up to Isaac and stared up at him, acting like a normal cute little bunny. (XD)
ಠ_ಠ (づ ￣ ³￣)づ
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| Kenzieroo | Date: Friday, 2011-12-09, 5:44 PM | Message # 555 |
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From the Forest
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| (Demon?!?!?!)
On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic
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