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_/\_The Changers_/\_ (My 3rd roleplay..)
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| Supernerd | Date: Sunday, 2011-10-09, 1:16 AM | Message # 1 |
 A Hater/Friend of Equinox
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| Oh? So you think this is cool? To be a Change? No, its not, its a nightmare, a nightmare that i hope that never happens to anybody else....i only wished that my hope was true...Listen. Having these powers are a pain in the ass,the cops are after us,so are the TAPA, The Anti Power Association... having scientists wanting to know how we do such amazing powers that we do with our hands, or well, anything. Don't ask me how I got them, cause i don't know...I was just a kid just like you, a family...a home, but thats gone now. All i have are my guts, and instincts, to help me pass each minute, each hour, each day...if you see this message,and if you are one of me, read this message carefully. Never trust anyone you see...never trust any one of your own, not even me, y'see,they have spies, they use them..to plot there next strategy on us, on how to capture us, in case were somehow giving a "virus" to anyone..we already had to kill one of our own..lets just hope your not next. All I can say is...its a hard life to be me, a Changer.
(Sorry couldnt really think of anything good to call the people with powers...XD)
-Changer Character sheet-
Name:
Age:
Appearance:
Weapon(s)?(Dont have to have one):
Powers(Two please..no more than that.):
When were you a Changer?:
Bio:
Other: (Sorta for like giving a tip about how you can calm down your character or like foreshadowing)
-T.A.P.A Spy Character Sheet- (No more than two...)
Name:
Age:
Appearance:
Weapons(?):
Powers(Once again no more than two):
When were you a changer?:
When you were caught(Can be at birth...):
Bio:
Other: (same as the other other,)
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Reviews
~Equinox~
Story:3/5
It's got a story, but not a REAL story. It's hard to explain. There's a story from a unknown person's view, but not a plot for any long term story.
Grammar:4/5
It's got some good grammar, but just a FEW mistakes. A very few.
Character detail:4/5
Very nice character sheets and variety of character values. It's well done.
Plot Development:2.5/5
It's got a bit of a plot. Trying to put up with being a changeling. Not a massive or expansive plot though, so it's not a very good plot development, but it's got some possibilities.
Overall rating:3/5
Honestly, this is a pretty good RP. I don't plan on joining, but I must say if I had about 1 cell more in my brain to put up with making a CS, I would gladly join. Don't think this is a bad RP because I don't feel like joining, it's honestly really good. My laziness is just getting to me from work.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
.....
There you have it.
Message edited by Supernerd - Sunday, 2011-10-09, 12:14 PM |
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| Evie | Date: Friday, 2011-12-02, 11:17 PM | Message # 511 |
 RP'er Without A Life
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| "I was saving you're ass!" I told him. "When I went to see my dad he told me that if they ever got you back, he would slowly kill you. Slowly and painfully with tests.." I lied,but he didn't know that.
Shoot for the moon★ ☆ ✰
If you miss★ ☆ ✰
You'll still land among the stars★ ☆ ✰
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| Zombo104 | Date: Saturday, 2011-12-03, 2:41 AM | Message # 512 |
 Famous RP'er
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| (You could maybe run into Evie and Super?)
It's funny until someone gets hurt. Then it's just hilarious.
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| Demon | Date: Saturday, 2011-12-03, 8:05 AM | Message # 513 |
 ※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
Group: Administrators
Messages: 9627
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| I heard crying nearby. I cawed, and saw (Zombo's char name)
ಠ_ಠ (づ ￣ ³￣)づ
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| Evie | Date: Saturday, 2011-12-03, 12:58 PM | Message # 514 |
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RP'er Without A Life
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| (Its alicia)
Shoot for the moon★ ☆ ✰
If you miss★ ☆ ✰
You'll still land among the stars★ ☆ ✰
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| Zombo104 | Date: Saturday, 2011-12-03, 1:58 PM | Message # 515 |
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Famous RP'er
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| (Why does everyone keep forgetting my name? lol) I heard a caw outside and banged on the walls again "Hello?! Is anyone out there?" I cried out.
It's funny until someone gets hurt. Then it's just hilarious.
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| Demon | Date: Saturday, 2011-12-03, 2:16 PM | Message # 516 |
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※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
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| (Idk XD)
I was in raven form. I cawed again, landing on Alicias shoulder. "Its me! Brisk!"
ಠ_ಠ (づ ￣ ³￣)づ
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| Zombo104 | Date: Saturday, 2011-12-03, 2:49 PM | Message # 517 |
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Famous RP'er
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| "Woah.... Hi" I said a little surprised at seeing her shapeshifted Cool! She has shapeshifting ability too! "Sooo any idea where the others are?" I said while also shapeshifting into......... an owl.
It's funny until someone gets hurt. Then it's just hilarious.
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| Kenzieroo | Date: Saturday, 2011-12-03, 5:39 PM | Message # 518 |
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From the Forest
Group: Moderators
Messages: 7524
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| (Where is everyone exactly?)
On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic
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| Demon | Date: Saturday, 2011-12-03, 5:54 PM | Message # 519 |
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※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
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Messages: 9627
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| I shrugged. So I'm NOT the only shapeshifter... "Lets go find them"
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| Kenzieroo | Date: Saturday, 2011-12-03, 5:56 PM | Message # 520 |
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From the Forest
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| (I can sorta kinda shapeshift XD)
On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic
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| Demon | Date: Saturday, 2011-12-03, 5:56 PM | Message # 521 |
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※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
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Messages: 9627
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| (XD Me, Zombo, and one of Supers characters are in the TAPA hideout)
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| Kenzieroo | Date: Saturday, 2011-12-03, 6:09 PM | Message # 522 |
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From the Forest
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| (Still don't know what to do.)
On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic
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| Equinox | Date: Saturday, 2011-12-03, 9:12 PM | Message # 523 |
 Social warrior of the administration
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| A crack went across the glass.
"Shit! Look, a crack!"
"Does this mean we'll have to kill him?"
"There's no time like the present."
The figure bursts through the class, putting a blade through both of the people. He withdraws his blades, and runs off upstairs.
~Glacial Malphite: The Shard of the Monolith~
"I hear rumors that the Shard of the Monolith is an unstoppable force. They aren't rumors."-Nausus, on the topic of Malphite's arrival.
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| Demon | Date: Saturday, 2011-12-03, 9:14 PM | Message # 524 |
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※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
Group: Administrators
Messages: 9627
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| (Equi, are you in TAPA? Or in the TAPA building?)
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| Equinox | Date: Saturday, 2011-12-03, 9:14 PM | Message # 525 |
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Social warrior of the administration
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Messages: 7183
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| (Neither.)
~Glacial Malphite: The Shard of the Monolith~
"I hear rumors that the Shard of the Monolith is an unstoppable force. They aren't rumors."-Nausus, on the topic of Malphite's arrival.
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