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_/\_The Changers_/\_ (My 3rd roleplay..)
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| Supernerd | Date: Sunday, 2011-10-09, 1:16 AM | Message # 1 |
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| Oh? So you think this is cool? To be a Change? No, its not, its a nightmare, a nightmare that i hope that never happens to anybody else....i only wished that my hope was true...Listen. Having these powers are a pain in the ass,the cops are after us,so are the TAPA, The Anti Power Association... having scientists wanting to know how we do such amazing powers that we do with our hands, or well, anything. Don't ask me how I got them, cause i don't know...I was just a kid just like you, a family...a home, but thats gone now. All i have are my guts, and instincts, to help me pass each minute, each hour, each day...if you see this message,and if you are one of me, read this message carefully. Never trust anyone you see...never trust any one of your own, not even me, y'see,they have spies, they use them..to plot there next strategy on us, on how to capture us, in case were somehow giving a "virus" to anyone..we already had to kill one of our own..lets just hope your not next. All I can say is...its a hard life to be me, a Changer.
(Sorry couldnt really think of anything good to call the people with powers...XD)
-Changer Character sheet-
Name:
Age:
Appearance:
Weapon(s)?(Dont have to have one):
Powers(Two please..no more than that.):
When were you a Changer?:
Bio:
Other: (Sorta for like giving a tip about how you can calm down your character or like foreshadowing)
-T.A.P.A Spy Character Sheet- (No more than two...)
Name:
Age:
Appearance:
Weapons(?):
Powers(Once again no more than two):
When were you a changer?:
When you were caught(Can be at birth...):
Bio:
Other: (same as the other other,)
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Reviews
~Equinox~
Story:3/5
It's got a story, but not a REAL story. It's hard to explain. There's a story from a unknown person's view, but not a plot for any long term story.
Grammar:4/5
It's got some good grammar, but just a FEW mistakes. A very few.
Character detail:4/5
Very nice character sheets and variety of character values. It's well done.
Plot Development:2.5/5
It's got a bit of a plot. Trying to put up with being a changeling. Not a massive or expansive plot though, so it's not a very good plot development, but it's got some possibilities.
Overall rating:3/5
Honestly, this is a pretty good RP. I don't plan on joining, but I must say if I had about 1 cell more in my brain to put up with making a CS, I would gladly join. Don't think this is a bad RP because I don't feel like joining, it's honestly really good. My laziness is just getting to me from work.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
Message edited by Supernerd - Sunday, 2011-10-09, 12:14 PM |
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| Kenzieroo | Date: Tuesday, 2011-11-29, 9:08 PM | Message # 481 |
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From the Forest
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| (IDK just askin')
-Changer Character sheet-
Name: Silver
Age: 14
Appearance:
Weapon(s)?(Don’t have to have one): A pocket knife
Powers (Two please. no more than that.): Healing and the ability to copies others voices (Anything living) and appearances (Only humans)
When were you a Changer?: When I turned five
Bio: When she grew up she lead a somewhat normal life, until she was five when she was messing around and copied her brother’s appearance. She was hidden at her house and home schooled and that worked until she was ten. That’s when the government go involved though no one but them knows how they go there information. Now’s she’s on the move.
Other: She can play just about every instrument since that was the only thing she could do besides school work and watching TV which she hates. She always had her pocket knife a piccolo to calm her nerves and a water bottle in a small black bag.
On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic
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| Supernerd | Date: Wednesday, 2011-11-30, 7:12 PM | Message # 482 |
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A Hater/Friend of Equinox
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Messages: 3145
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| (Accepted,) ((Ur CS reminds me of the X-men...that blue-girl person)
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Kenzieroo | Date: Wednesday, 2011-11-30, 7:14 PM | Message # 483 |
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From the Forest
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| (I havn't watched that so yea.)
(How should I start?)
On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic
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| Supernerd | Date: Wednesday, 2011-11-30, 7:17 PM | Message # 484 |
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A Hater/Friend of Equinox
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| (Accepted as well Equi.) Added (2011-11-30, 7:17 PM)
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THUD THUD THUD Noises came from up above. (our cave is underground right?)
Cody-
I looked up. "What was that?....."
Isaac-
I smirked....then began to burst out laughing.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Kenzieroo | Date: Wednesday, 2011-11-30, 7:17 PM | Message # 485 |
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From the Forest
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| (I like his character XD, mines not much of fighter she likes diseption better.)
On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic
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| Supernerd | Date: Wednesday, 2011-11-30, 7:18 PM | Message # 486 |
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A Hater/Friend of Equinox
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| (well in an other rp place, a person started off in a hotel they snuck into, then when she was nearly discovered, went into the forest...but i would bother with whats gonna be happening next)
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Kenzieroo | Date: Wednesday, 2011-11-30, 7:22 PM | Message # 487 |
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From the Forest
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| (Whats ganna happen?)
On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic
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| Demon | Date: Wednesday, 2011-11-30, 8:10 PM | Message # 488 |
 ※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
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| "Shit..." I grabbed Isaac by the collar and started shaking him around. "BASTARD! What the hell did you do?!"
ಠ_ಠ (づ ￣ ³￣)づ
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| Kenzieroo | Date: Wednesday, 2011-11-30, 8:18 PM | Message # 489 |
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From the Forest
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| ~Silver
I walk as slowly as I could through the leaves and twigs of the thick forest getting caught on something even two minutes. I bend down and move some of the bushes around, at this rate I'll be nowhere in 5 hours!
On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic
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| Supernerd | Date: Wednesday, 2011-11-30, 11:57 PM | Message # 490 |
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| Isaac-
I just laughed. "I didn't do anything. Cody did!!! HAHA!!!!"
Cody-
I stared at him, he was crazy! He was-
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SSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSsssssssssssss Cans spraying gas fell into the room, spreading all around the cave.
Cody-
I started to feel drowsy.. "oh no...." And fell unconscious.
Isaac-
I laughed quietly, becoming unconscious.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Evie | Date: Thursday, 2011-12-01, 0:24 AM | Message # 491 |
 RP'er Without A Life
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| I pulled my shirt over my mouth and picked up Issac, they were not getting him that easly. Then I sped out of the cave faster then the speed of light. When I was far away the gas fumes I had breathed caused me to fall down and soon everything went black.
Shoot for the moon★ ☆ ✰
If you miss★ ☆ ✰
You'll still land among the stars★ ☆ ✰
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| Kenzieroo | Date: Thursday, 2011-12-01, 9:43 AM | Message # 492 |
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From the Forest
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| (Where are you guys?)
On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic
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| Evie | Date: Thursday, 2011-12-01, 10:36 AM | Message # 493 |
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RP'er Without A Life
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| (the middle of a forest)
Shoot for the moon★ ☆ ✰
If you miss★ ☆ ✰
You'll still land among the stars★ ☆ ✰
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| Demon | Date: Thursday, 2011-12-01, 3:01 PM | Message # 494 |
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※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
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| (In an underground cave.)
"Shit..." I slowly stood up, but slumped over and fell into unconcioussness.
ಠ_ಠ (づ ￣ ³￣)づ
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| Kenzieroo | Date: Thursday, 2011-12-01, 5:43 PM | Message # 495 |
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From the Forest
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Messages: 7524
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| ~Silver
I continue to walk finding a deer trail which did make things faster, but still. I sigh that wasn't even the worse part I had NO idea where I was going! I'll tell you living issued for about 10 years isn't good for you, well at lest I was in shape.
On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic
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