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_/\_The Changers_/\_ (My 3rd roleplay..)
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| Supernerd | Date: Sunday, 2011-10-09, 1:16 AM | Message # 1 |
 A Hater/Friend of Equinox
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| Oh? So you think this is cool? To be a Change? No, its not, its a nightmare, a nightmare that i hope that never happens to anybody else....i only wished that my hope was true...Listen. Having these powers are a pain in the ass,the cops are after us,so are the TAPA, The Anti Power Association... having scientists wanting to know how we do such amazing powers that we do with our hands, or well, anything. Don't ask me how I got them, cause i don't know...I was just a kid just like you, a family...a home, but thats gone now. All i have are my guts, and instincts, to help me pass each minute, each hour, each day...if you see this message,and if you are one of me, read this message carefully. Never trust anyone you see...never trust any one of your own, not even me, y'see,they have spies, they use them..to plot there next strategy on us, on how to capture us, in case were somehow giving a "virus" to anyone..we already had to kill one of our own..lets just hope your not next. All I can say is...its a hard life to be me, a Changer.
(Sorry couldnt really think of anything good to call the people with powers...XD)
-Changer Character sheet-
Name:
Age:
Appearance:
Weapon(s)?(Dont have to have one):
Powers(Two please..no more than that.):
When were you a Changer?:
Bio:
Other: (Sorta for like giving a tip about how you can calm down your character or like foreshadowing)
-T.A.P.A Spy Character Sheet- (No more than two...)
Name:
Age:
Appearance:
Weapons(?):
Powers(Once again no more than two):
When were you a changer?:
When you were caught(Can be at birth...):
Bio:
Other: (same as the other other,)
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Reviews
~Equinox~
Story:3/5
It's got a story, but not a REAL story. It's hard to explain. There's a story from a unknown person's view, but not a plot for any long term story.
Grammar:4/5
It's got some good grammar, but just a FEW mistakes. A very few.
Character detail:4/5
Very nice character sheets and variety of character values. It's well done.
Plot Development:2.5/5
It's got a bit of a plot. Trying to put up with being a changeling. Not a massive or expansive plot though, so it's not a very good plot development, but it's got some possibilities.
Overall rating:3/5
Honestly, this is a pretty good RP. I don't plan on joining, but I must say if I had about 1 cell more in my brain to put up with making a CS, I would gladly join. Don't think this is a bad RP because I don't feel like joining, it's honestly really good. My laziness is just getting to me from work.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
Message edited by Supernerd - Sunday, 2011-10-09, 12:14 PM |
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| Supernerd | Date: Monday, 2011-11-28, 0:36 AM | Message # 466 |
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| Cody-
I smirked. "Thanks Virra...." I typed in the password. Then it led to a black screen with codes on it. "Now to rephrase some of them...which, should open the doors. I started to type some codes. Then pressed enter, and a loud beeping noise came from my computer. I flinched. "God...that startled me..."
Isaac-
I stared at Cody, I never knew he was a computer Genius...but he can't be that good of one...or is he? I had no idea.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Demon | Date: Monday, 2011-11-28, 3:12 PM | Message # 467 |
 ※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
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Messages: 9627
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| I held my ears. "Damn, thats annoying."
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| Evie | Date: Monday, 2011-11-28, 6:53 PM | Message # 468 |
 RP'er Without A Life
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| I sat down beside Issac and started talking to him casually, "So when did you become a TAPA spy?"
Shoot for the moon★ ☆ ✰
If you miss★ ☆ ✰
You'll still land among the stars★ ☆ ✰
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| Equinox | Date: Monday, 2011-11-28, 6:56 PM | Message # 469 |
 Social warrior of the administration
Group: Administrators
Messages: 7183
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| (I feel like being a normal citizen in the middle of this, but there is no CS for that. How unfortunate.)
(Lock and load guys, if I get the chance, bullets will be blazing.)
~Glacial Malphite: The Shard of the Monolith~
"I hear rumors that the Shard of the Monolith is an unstoppable force. They aren't rumors."-Nausus, on the topic of Malphite's arrival.
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| Demon | Date: Monday, 2011-11-28, 7:18 PM | Message # 470 |
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※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
Group: Administrators
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| (That would be....)
(Intresting.)
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| Evie | Date: Monday, 2011-11-28, 8:52 PM | Message # 471 |
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RP'er Without A Life
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Messages: 2382
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| (Equinox you should join!)
Shoot for the moon★ ☆ ✰
If you miss★ ☆ ✰
You'll still land among the stars★ ☆ ✰
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| Supernerd | Date: Monday, 2011-11-28, 9:38 PM | Message # 472 |
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A Hater/Friend of Equinox
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| (Equinox, go ahead, here, i'll make a quick one XD
Civilian CS-
Name:
Appearance:
Age:
Anyone that you know is a changer? (family member Etc.):
Weapons(Yup, a random civilian with a weapon):
Bio:
Other:
There.)Added (2011-11-28, 9:38 PM)
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( A shocker is gonna be happening....anyone ready for it?????)
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Equinox | Date: Tuesday, 2011-11-29, 8:38 AM | Message # 473 |
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Social warrior of the administration
Group: Administrators
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| Civilian CS-
Name: Jarren Varinda (Vah-rin-dah)
Appearance: In the attachment.
Age: 29
Anyone that you know is a changer? (family member Etc.): The rest of his family.
Weapons(Yup, a random civilian with a weapon): A wide range of weaponry, hidden among his clothing.
Bio: Jarren lives among a family of changers, as a normal human. Who his actual family is, he does not know. He has finally cracked, and his current family is having to try and contain him at the moment. They were unable to disarm him before trapping him in his current containment.
Other: Jarren has gone psychotic, and he has to be contained, or else he'll begin a slaughter.
~Glacial Malphite: The Shard of the Monolith~
"I hear rumors that the Shard of the Monolith is an unstoppable force. They aren't rumors."-Nausus, on the topic of Malphite's arrival.
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| Demon | Date: Tuesday, 2011-11-29, 3:18 PM | Message # 474 |
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※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
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Messages: 9627
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| (Great.)
(A phsycotic civilian with a wide range of weapons...)
(This'll be intresting)
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| Equinox | Date: Tuesday, 2011-11-29, 3:52 PM | Message # 475 |
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Social warrior of the administration
Group: Administrators
Messages: 7183
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| (And if you guys know anything about my roleplaying, it's that my best characters are the ones with psychotic tenancies.)
~Glacial Malphite: The Shard of the Monolith~
"I hear rumors that the Shard of the Monolith is an unstoppable force. They aren't rumors."-Nausus, on the topic of Malphite's arrival.
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| Demon | Date: Tuesday, 2011-11-29, 4:59 PM | Message # 476 |
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※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
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| (As with Brisk.
:3)
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| Zombo104 | Date: Tuesday, 2011-11-29, 7:16 PM | Message # 477 |
 Famous RP'er
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| I looked oddly at Virra talking casually with Isaac, then I went to watch Cody hack the TAPA system and asked, "Hey, do you think you could figure out a way to get this collar off of me?"
It's funny until someone gets hurt. Then it's just hilarious.
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| Zero | Date: Tuesday, 2011-11-29, 8:16 PM | Message # 478 |
 Great RP'er
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Messages: 159
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| (I know you hate it when somebody leaves for a long time and all of a sudden comes back but, I don't have Internet so I can't go on when ever I want)
I went to help the girl I saw on the floor up and ask her who she was and what happened but, saw that she had a TAPA name tag that said Angela and I quickly hit her hit her unconscious again. I ran from the TAPA Facility and headed back to the forest completety forgetting why I was going to the TAPA in the first place.
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| Kenzieroo | Date: Tuesday, 2011-11-29, 8:50 PM | Message # 479 |
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From the Forest
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| (Is it to late to join? )
On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic
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| Equinox | Date: Tuesday, 2011-11-29, 8:53 PM | Message # 480 |
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Social warrior of the administration
Group: Administrators
Messages: 7183
Status: Offline
| (I literally just joined, why would it be?)
~Glacial Malphite: The Shard of the Monolith~
"I hear rumors that the Shard of the Monolith is an unstoppable force. They aren't rumors."-Nausus, on the topic of Malphite's arrival.
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