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_/\_The Changers_/\_ (My 3rd roleplay..)
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| Supernerd | Date: Sunday, 2011-10-09, 1:16 AM | Message # 1 |
 A Hater/Friend of Equinox
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| Oh? So you think this is cool? To be a Change? No, its not, its a nightmare, a nightmare that i hope that never happens to anybody else....i only wished that my hope was true...Listen. Having these powers are a pain in the ass,the cops are after us,so are the TAPA, The Anti Power Association... having scientists wanting to know how we do such amazing powers that we do with our hands, or well, anything. Don't ask me how I got them, cause i don't know...I was just a kid just like you, a family...a home, but thats gone now. All i have are my guts, and instincts, to help me pass each minute, each hour, each day...if you see this message,and if you are one of me, read this message carefully. Never trust anyone you see...never trust any one of your own, not even me, y'see,they have spies, they use them..to plot there next strategy on us, on how to capture us, in case were somehow giving a "virus" to anyone..we already had to kill one of our own..lets just hope your not next. All I can say is...its a hard life to be me, a Changer.
(Sorry couldnt really think of anything good to call the people with powers...XD)
-Changer Character sheet-
Name:
Age:
Appearance:
Weapon(s)?(Dont have to have one):
Powers(Two please..no more than that.):
When were you a Changer?:
Bio:
Other: (Sorta for like giving a tip about how you can calm down your character or like foreshadowing)
-T.A.P.A Spy Character Sheet- (No more than two...)
Name:
Age:
Appearance:
Weapons(?):
Powers(Once again no more than two):
When were you a changer?:
When you were caught(Can be at birth...):
Bio:
Other: (same as the other other,)
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Reviews
~Equinox~
Story:3/5
It's got a story, but not a REAL story. It's hard to explain. There's a story from a unknown person's view, but not a plot for any long term story.
Grammar:4/5
It's got some good grammar, but just a FEW mistakes. A very few.
Character detail:4/5
Very nice character sheets and variety of character values. It's well done.
Plot Development:2.5/5
It's got a bit of a plot. Trying to put up with being a changeling. Not a massive or expansive plot though, so it's not a very good plot development, but it's got some possibilities.
Overall rating:3/5
Honestly, this is a pretty good RP. I don't plan on joining, but I must say if I had about 1 cell more in my brain to put up with making a CS, I would gladly join. Don't think this is a bad RP because I don't feel like joining, it's honestly really good. My laziness is just getting to me from work.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
Message edited by Supernerd - Sunday, 2011-10-09, 12:14 PM |
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| Demon | Date: Saturday, 2011-11-26, 2:23 PM | Message # 451 |
 ※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
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| A snarl ripped through my throat and I threw Isaac down to shut him up.
"Wake up!" I barked at everyone. "We need to move, quick! Before someone finds us!"
ಠ_ಠ (づ ￣ ³￣)づ
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| Supernerd | Date: Saturday, 2011-11-26, 3:40 PM | Message # 452 |
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| Isaac-
I felt more pain shoot through my body, and I fell unconscious from the pain
Cody-
I covered my ears with my hands, my god Isaac could scream, then it abruptly stopped, Brisk yelling at us to wake up, god she looked cute when she was angry. "Don't need you to tell us to wake up when that dumb-ass is screeching his head off" I retorted. Getting up quickly as I began to grab the supplies that I haven't put onto the computer yet.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Demon | Date: Saturday, 2011-11-26, 8:35 PM | Message # 453 |
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※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
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| I rolled my eyes. I shoved Isaac on my back, along with the unconcious Vierra. "Lets go"
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| Supernerd | Date: Sunday, 2011-11-27, 0:04 AM | Message # 454 |
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| Cody-
"But where?! I don't think anybody heard us. Despite how loud he was, we are at least 3 miles away from town!" I exclaimed.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Evie | Date: Sunday, 2011-11-27, 0:35 AM | Message # 455 |
 RP'er Without A Life
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| I mumbled and my chest hurt
Shoot for the moon★ ☆ ✰
If you miss★ ☆ ✰
You'll still land among the stars★ ☆ ✰
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| Demon | Date: Sunday, 2011-11-27, 8:55 AM | Message # 456 |
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※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
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| I shrugged. "I'm pretty good at sniffing places out, so follow me" I trotted out, sniffing the air.
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| Supernerd | Date: Sunday, 2011-11-27, 12:00 PM | Message # 457 |
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| Cody-
I sighed, following her.
Isaac-
He is still unconscious, but not tied up.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Demon | Date: Sunday, 2011-11-27, 1:32 PM | Message # 458 |
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※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
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| I turned human, and carried them over my shoulders. Soon, I found another dugout place. "This place looks good" I climbed in.
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| Supernerd | Date: Sunday, 2011-11-27, 1:39 PM | Message # 459 |
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A Hater/Friend of Equinox
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| Cody-
I watched her as she walked deeper into the forest, carrying Isaac and Virra. God she was strong, and tough. I smiled. "Good work....Also, my computer is just about to be finished, then I can start hacking their codes, cause if I can open all the cages....then that will be something worth to see. " I smirked as I jumped down.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Evie | Date: Sunday, 2011-11-27, 2:27 PM | Message # 460 |
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RP'er Without A Life
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| I slowly opened my eyes and realized I was on the back of Brisk. "You can put me down now." I mumbled
Shoot for the moon★ ☆ ✰
If you miss★ ☆ ✰
You'll still land among the stars★ ☆ ✰
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| Demon | Date: Sunday, 2011-11-27, 3:42 PM | Message # 461 |
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※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
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| I laughed, putting Virra down. "Nice job, Cody. Damn, I wanna see the look on thier faces..."
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| Supernerd | Date: Sunday, 2011-11-27, 4:46 PM | Message # 462 |
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| Cody-
I grinned as I put the finishing touches on the computer. "Good...nwo to get to work." I began by going onto the google, typing in the ip adress of the T.A.P.A agency, and then furrowed my eyebrows as a password log came up. "Crap...they didnt have this before...we need Isaac for this. Isaac!"
Isaac-
"Mmph...." I slowly opened my eyes...
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Demon | Date: Sunday, 2011-11-27, 5:45 PM | Message # 463 |
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※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
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| I picked him up by the collar of his shirt, throwing him towards Cody. I stood at the exit, smirking.
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| Supernerd | Date: Sunday, 2011-11-27, 9:18 PM | Message # 464 |
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A Hater/Friend of Equinox
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Messages: 3145
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| Cody-
As isaac was flung toward me, his face met my fist with a punch. "Whats the password!"
Isaac-
The next thing i knew, I was on the ground, pain in my face. "The password?....its Power Control8869..."
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Evie | Date: Sunday, 2011-11-27, 10:32 PM | Message # 465 |
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RP'er Without A Life
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| "You beat me too it!" I laughed after Cody punched Issac.
Shoot for the moon★ ☆ ✰
If you miss★ ☆ ✰
You'll still land among the stars★ ☆ ✰
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