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_/\_The Changers_/\_ (My 3rd roleplay..)
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| Supernerd | Date: Sunday, 2011-10-09, 1:16 AM | Message # 1 |
 A Hater/Friend of Equinox
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| Oh? So you think this is cool? To be a Change? No, its not, its a nightmare, a nightmare that i hope that never happens to anybody else....i only wished that my hope was true...Listen. Having these powers are a pain in the ass,the cops are after us,so are the TAPA, The Anti Power Association... having scientists wanting to know how we do such amazing powers that we do with our hands, or well, anything. Don't ask me how I got them, cause i don't know...I was just a kid just like you, a family...a home, but thats gone now. All i have are my guts, and instincts, to help me pass each minute, each hour, each day...if you see this message,and if you are one of me, read this message carefully. Never trust anyone you see...never trust any one of your own, not even me, y'see,they have spies, they use them..to plot there next strategy on us, on how to capture us, in case were somehow giving a "virus" to anyone..we already had to kill one of our own..lets just hope your not next. All I can say is...its a hard life to be me, a Changer.
(Sorry couldnt really think of anything good to call the people with powers...XD)
-Changer Character sheet-
Name:
Age:
Appearance:
Weapon(s)?(Dont have to have one):
Powers(Two please..no more than that.):
When were you a Changer?:
Bio:
Other: (Sorta for like giving a tip about how you can calm down your character or like foreshadowing)
-T.A.P.A Spy Character Sheet- (No more than two...)
Name:
Age:
Appearance:
Weapons(?):
Powers(Once again no more than two):
When were you a changer?:
When you were caught(Can be at birth...):
Bio:
Other: (same as the other other,)
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Reviews
~Equinox~
Story:3/5
It's got a story, but not a REAL story. It's hard to explain. There's a story from a unknown person's view, but not a plot for any long term story.
Grammar:4/5
It's got some good grammar, but just a FEW mistakes. A very few.
Character detail:4/5
Very nice character sheets and variety of character values. It's well done.
Plot Development:2.5/5
It's got a bit of a plot. Trying to put up with being a changeling. Not a massive or expansive plot though, so it's not a very good plot development, but it's got some possibilities.
Overall rating:3/5
Honestly, this is a pretty good RP. I don't plan on joining, but I must say if I had about 1 cell more in my brain to put up with making a CS, I would gladly join. Don't think this is a bad RP because I don't feel like joining, it's honestly really good. My laziness is just getting to me from work.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
Message edited by Supernerd - Sunday, 2011-10-09, 12:14 PM |
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| Zombo104 | Date: Tuesday, 2011-11-22, 7:31 PM | Message # 421 |
 Famous RP'er
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| "Thanks for saving me Virra but I don't think I'm too safe to be around anymore, this necklace here is a way that the TAPA can control our powers. So, if they find us again they could use me as a weapon" I said watching her reaction carefully.
It's funny until someone gets hurt. Then it's just hilarious.
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| Supernerd | Date: Tuesday, 2011-11-22, 10:21 PM | Message # 422 |
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A Hater/Friend of Equinox
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| The scientist looked at them in surprise. "How the...Virra! Transform and (use fire bolt :3 JK) and attack!" Added (2011-11-22, 10:21 PM)
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(ik but wouldnt people be alarmed in the streets? also i mean ALICIA not virra.)
Cody-
We both ran hard out of the store. I was getting tired, blocking us from people's visions for a while, until we finally reached the forest. I dropped to the ground gasping. "Not...doing...that...again! *cough*" I said, wheezing.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Demon | Date: Tuesday, 2011-11-22, 10:22 PM | Message # 423 |
 ※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
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| I laughed. "You okay? First time stealing?"
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| Supernerd | Date: Tuesday, 2011-11-22, 10:26 PM | Message # 424 |
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A Hater/Friend of Equinox
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| "No...Blocked people's sights...wears me out..." I managed to wheez out, I was pale, but slowly regaining color as I continued to catch my breath.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Evie | Date: Wednesday, 2011-11-23, 0:58 AM | Message # 425 |
 RP'er Without A Life
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| "Can't you take it off?" I asked Alicia. "Please don't tell me I'm going to have to visit my dad again."
Shoot for the moon★ ☆ ✰
If you miss★ ☆ ✰
You'll still land among the stars★ ☆ ✰
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| Demon | Date: Wednesday, 2011-11-23, 7:55 AM | Message # 426 |
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※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
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| I nodded. "Well, we should get this thing started"
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| Zombo104 | Date: Wednesday, 2011-11-23, 7:25 PM | Message # 427 |
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| "I'm not sure, but the scientist told me I would have a fun time trying to get it off so maybe only TAPA agents can take it off?" I responded and started brainstorming.
It's funny until someone gets hurt. Then it's just hilarious.
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| Evie | Date: Wednesday, 2011-11-23, 7:57 PM | Message # 428 |
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RP'er Without A Life
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| "Yea maybe. If Brisk still has that TAPA agent then maybe he could help."
Shoot for the moon★ ☆ ✰
If you miss★ ☆ ✰
You'll still land among the stars★ ☆ ✰
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| Supernerd | Date: Thursday, 2011-11-24, 1:55 AM | Message # 429 |
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| Cody-
I nodded back. "yeah. Follow me!" Me and her then began to sprint back to the hideout.
Isaac-
"Mmph...no Cody." He said, asleep.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Demon | Date: Thursday, 2011-11-24, 9:20 AM | Message # 430 |
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※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
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| I narrowed my eyes at Isaac. Then ran after Cody.
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| Evie | Date: Thursday, 2011-11-24, 11:18 AM | Message # 431 |
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RP'er Without A Life
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| "Don't tell brisk, she might take it the wrong way."
Shoot for the moon★ ☆ ✰
If you miss★ ☆ ✰
You'll still land among the stars★ ☆ ✰
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| Supernerd | Date: Friday, 2011-11-25, 0:51 AM | Message # 432 |
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| Cody- We arrived back at the cave, and we dropped our stuff. I then began to assemble it. "So, what move did Isaac do to trick you?" I askec, trying to create a vonversation.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Demon | Date: Friday, 2011-11-25, 8:42 AM | Message # 433 |
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※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
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| (Respond on VIRUS, Damnit!!!)
"He acted as the nice guy, trying to be my friend. Which obviously, didnt work out for him. But... He did learn quite a handful about me"
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| Evie | Date: Friday, 2011-11-25, 10:19 AM | Message # 434 |
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| Brisk walked into the cave with another boy carrying some computer parts. He was one of the TAPA agents. Standing up swiftly I jumped Cody and shoved him up against the wall, "Who the hell is this kid!?"
Shoot for the moon★ ☆ ✰
If you miss★ ☆ ✰
You'll still land among the stars★ ☆ ✰
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| Demon | Date: Friday, 2011-11-25, 12:57 PM | Message # 435 |
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※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
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| I was abit suprised at (Evies) arrival.
I shrugged. "I crushed his tracking device and he said he'll help me. Not that I trust him all that much. Let the kid down"
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