_/\_The Changers_/\_ (My 3rd roleplay..) - Page 28

Date: Sunday, 2011-10-09, 1:16 AM | Message # 1

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Oh? So you think this is cool? To be a Change? No, its not, its a nightmare, a nightmare that i hope that never happens to anybody else....i only wished that my hope was true...Listen. Having these powers are a pain in the ass,the cops are after us,so are the TAPA, The Anti Power Association... having scientists wanting to know how we do such amazing powers that we do with our hands, or well, anything. Don't ask me how I got them, cause i don't know...I was just a kid just like you, a family...a home, but thats gone now. All i have are my guts, and instincts, to help me pass each minute, each hour, each day...if you see this message,and if you are one of me, read this message carefully. Never trust anyone you see...never trust any one of your own, not even me, y'see,they have spies, they use them..to plot there next strategy on us, on how to capture us, in case were somehow giving a "virus" to anyone..we already had to kill one of our own..lets just hope your not next. All I can say is...its a hard life to be me, a Changer.

(Sorry couldnt really think of anything good to call the people with powers...XD)

-Changer Character sheet-

Name:
Age:
Appearance:
Weapon(s)?(Dont have to have one):
Powers(Two please..no more than that.):
When were you a Changer?:
Bio:
Other: (Sorta for like giving a tip about how you can calm down your character or like foreshadowing)

-T.A.P.A Spy Character Sheet- (No more than two...)
Name:
Age:
Appearance:
Weapons(?):
Powers(Once again no more than two):
When were you a changer?:
When you were caught(Can be at birth...):
Bio:
Other: (same as the other other,)

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Story:3/5
It's got a story, but not a REAL story. It's hard to explain. There's a story from a unknown person's view, but not a plot for any long term story.

Grammar:4/5
It's got some good grammar, but just a FEW mistakes. A very few.

Character detail:4/5
Very nice character sheets and variety of character values. It's well done.

Plot Development:2.5/5
It's got a bit of a plot. Trying to put up with being a changeling. Not a massive or expansive plot though, so it's not a very good plot development, but it's got some possibilities.

Overall rating:3/5
Honestly, this is a pretty good RP. I don't plan on joining, but I must say if I had about 1 cell more in my brain to put up with making a CS, I would gladly join. Don't think this is a bad RP because I don't feel like joining, it's honestly really good. My laziness is just getting to me from work.

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Date: Sunday, 2011-11-20, 3:04 AM | Message # 406

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I walked through the front door, a guard looked at me then ran straight at me holding some sort of tazer. I moved out of the way, just in time too and he slammed into the wall not getting up again. Unnoticed I dragged the guard into a closet then stole his uniform and his cool tazer. Everything was so easy. I walked down the hall with the TAPA security guard mask pulled down over my face with the name tag "Bill" sewed onto my left shirt pocket. As I walked down the hall I stopped at a woman who looked like she was a scientist. "Where was the changer girl moved to? I am supposed to go and supervise." I Said in a gruff manly voice.
"Shes on level four in room 207 there testing a new product I was told." She told me sweetly.
"Thanks." I replied. I turned to walk away but the lady put her hand on my shoulder, I tensed getting ready to fight back but all did was say, "Bill sweety you really should stop smoking you're voice is starting to sound worse and worse."
"Just a cold." I told her relieved that she really thought I was bill. I walked slowly until I made it around the corner and sped through the halls until I reached a door marked ROOM 207 TESTING LAB. (permission to eventually kill random evil scientist?)

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Date: Sunday, 2011-11-20, 8:50 AM | Message # 407

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I growled at Isaac. "Shut it!" I flashed him a pissed off glare. Then, I looked at Cody calmly, with a smile. "You wanted to help, but you passed out. So I found a new hideout..."

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Date: Sunday, 2011-11-20, 5:22 PM | Message # 408

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Cody-

I smiled. "Good. Also, to let you know, I could probably set up a computer system in here...all I need is some power cords, extension cords..." He continued to list off the things he needed.

Isaac-

I stared at him in disbelief. "Cody...." I was absolutely speechless.

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Date: Sunday, 2011-11-20, 7:33 PM | Message # 409

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I smirked at Isaacs reaction. "I cant trust you guys alone, so you'll come with me when I get the stuff"

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Date: Sunday, 2011-11-20, 7:40 PM | Message # 410

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(Is Isaac tied up?)

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Date: Sunday, 2011-11-20, 7:42 PM | Message # 411

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(Yup)

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Date: Sunday, 2011-11-20, 7:46 PM | Message # 412

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Cody-

I nodded. "That's understandable, let's go, but first..." I walked up to Isaac, and smirked slightly. "night" I spin kicked him at the head, and he came unconscious. "There. now we can go." I had then started to climb, and once I got to the top i dusted myself off.

Isaac-

I stared at him...no way...he wasnt joking. I watched him walk up to me. And he smirked and said. "night" Night? Then, darkness.

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Date: Sunday, 2011-11-20, 7:49 PM | Message # 413

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I smirked. Im starting to like this kid.. I slung Isaac over my shoulder.

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Date: Sunday, 2011-11-20, 8:02 PM | Message # 414

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Cody-

"Ok...now follow me....I hope your sneakier than I am. Im quite clumsy" And i started to jog in the direction of the city.

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Date: Sunday, 2011-11-20, 11:00 PM | Message # 415

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(permission to kill evil scientist?)
Casually I unlocked the door with an ID scanner and entered the room. Alica was sitting in a chair across the room, metal clamps held her arms and legs to the chair so she could barely move. There was also an odd necklace around her neck that she wasn't wearing before. It was so pretty that I couldn't seem to take my eyes off it. "What are you doing in here?!"an angry voice demanded. I ripped my eyes away from the necklace to see a creepy scientist lurking in the corner. "I had orders to bring you an important letter." I told him. "Well give it here!, I haven't got all day."
I nodded and walked closer to him, when I was close enough I stuck my hand into my pocket and whipped out the tazer then shot it right at him. I got him in the chest, then he fell to the floor twitched a bit then went still. Whoops my bad.

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Date: Monday, 2011-11-21, 2:42 PM | Message # 416

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I nodded, following behind him. Just incase he made a move, I had my pistol in one hand.

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Date: Monday, 2011-11-21, 10:23 PM | Message # 417

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I walked over to Alicia and undid the metal straps that held her. Maybe I could find her a security outfit too, and a tazer. "Its me, Virra." I told her and lifted up my mask so she could see my face.

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Date: Tuesday, 2011-11-22, 0:59 AM | Message # 418

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Cody-

I continued to jog, I knew she had her pistol ready, I rsally couldn't blame her. "Better hide your gun " I said, not looking behind as I could see street lights, after walking, we arrived at the electronic shop. I stared at all the items.. Pointing my finger lightly at which things to take.On 3. One...Two...Three! I snagged everything that I could, while at the same time blocking the store man's sight of us, man was he a pervert...I grabbed everything I needed and looked at her," got everything else?"

(Pretend that you left Isaac at the hole)

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Date: Tuesday, 2011-11-22, 10:16 AM | Message # 419

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Eventually I had gotten Alica safely back to the forest and we found stupid Issac tied up in a cave..

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