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_/\_The Changers_/\_ (My 3rd roleplay..)
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| Supernerd | Date: Sunday, 2011-10-09, 1:16 AM | Message # 1 |
 A Hater/Friend of Equinox
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| Oh? So you think this is cool? To be a Change? No, its not, its a nightmare, a nightmare that i hope that never happens to anybody else....i only wished that my hope was true...Listen. Having these powers are a pain in the ass,the cops are after us,so are the TAPA, The Anti Power Association... having scientists wanting to know how we do such amazing powers that we do with our hands, or well, anything. Don't ask me how I got them, cause i don't know...I was just a kid just like you, a family...a home, but thats gone now. All i have are my guts, and instincts, to help me pass each minute, each hour, each day...if you see this message,and if you are one of me, read this message carefully. Never trust anyone you see...never trust any one of your own, not even me, y'see,they have spies, they use them..to plot there next strategy on us, on how to capture us, in case were somehow giving a "virus" to anyone..we already had to kill one of our own..lets just hope your not next. All I can say is...its a hard life to be me, a Changer.
(Sorry couldnt really think of anything good to call the people with powers...XD)
-Changer Character sheet-
Name:
Age:
Appearance:
Weapon(s)?(Dont have to have one):
Powers(Two please..no more than that.):
When were you a Changer?:
Bio:
Other: (Sorta for like giving a tip about how you can calm down your character or like foreshadowing)
-T.A.P.A Spy Character Sheet- (No more than two...)
Name:
Age:
Appearance:
Weapons(?):
Powers(Once again no more than two):
When were you a changer?:
When you were caught(Can be at birth...):
Bio:
Other: (same as the other other,)
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Reviews
~Equinox~
Story:3/5
It's got a story, but not a REAL story. It's hard to explain. There's a story from a unknown person's view, but not a plot for any long term story.
Grammar:4/5
It's got some good grammar, but just a FEW mistakes. A very few.
Character detail:4/5
Very nice character sheets and variety of character values. It's well done.
Plot Development:2.5/5
It's got a bit of a plot. Trying to put up with being a changeling. Not a massive or expansive plot though, so it's not a very good plot development, but it's got some possibilities.
Overall rating:3/5
Honestly, this is a pretty good RP. I don't plan on joining, but I must say if I had about 1 cell more in my brain to put up with making a CS, I would gladly join. Don't think this is a bad RP because I don't feel like joining, it's honestly really good. My laziness is just getting to me from work.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
Message edited by Supernerd - Sunday, 2011-10-09, 12:14 PM |
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| Demon | Date: Tuesday, 2011-11-15, 3:21 PM | Message # 376 |
 ※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
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| I sighed. "She took off before I could say no" And I walked off.
ಠ_ಠ (づ ￣ ³￣)づ
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| Evie | Date: Wednesday, 2011-11-16, 11:11 AM | Message # 377 |
 RP'er Without A Life
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| I bent over my father and he was sound asleep, harmless almost like a child. He looked so sad,and I almost felt sorry for him.
Shoot for the moon★ ☆ ✰
If you miss★ ☆ ✰
You'll still land among the stars★ ☆ ✰
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| Zombo104 | Date: Thursday, 2011-11-17, 0:04 AM | Message # 378 |
 Famous RP'er
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| My eyes opened slightly, I was still in the form of a cougar but it felt like I was in a moving vehicle. I looked around me to find I was in a van. No......no.no.no.no.no.no.no.no.no. NO!!! This can't be happening! How do the TAPA have me?!?!?! Oh, right that Isaac person.... If I ever get away I'm going to make sure I find him and rip his living heart out I sighed, the darts contents were still too potent for me to shapeshift back into a human so I laid my head back down on the van floor and waited.
It's funny until someone gets hurt. Then it's just hilarious.
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| Supernerd | Date: Thursday, 2011-11-17, 0:06 AM | Message # 379 |
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A Hater/Friend of Equinox
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Messages: 3145
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| There were two guys in the back of the van with her, guards. Talking to one another, not noticing her being awake.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Evie | Date: Thursday, 2011-11-17, 10:38 AM | Message # 380 |
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RP'er Without A Life
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Messages: 2382
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| I sat in a chair beside my dad like I was visiting a friend in a hospital. "Dad, wake up now." I whispered. His eyes slowly opened but he didn't seem to recognize me. He just sat and stared with no expression, I stared back.
Shoot for the moon★ ☆ ✰
If you miss★ ☆ ✰
You'll still land among the stars★ ☆ ✰
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| Supernerd | Date: Thursday, 2011-11-17, 11:26 AM | Message # 381 |
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A Hater/Friend of Equinox
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| Her Dad tgen smiled. "Ah..." His voice was quiet. "I see...you've gone past security." He said. Added (2011-11-17, 11:26 Am)
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-Isaac-
I opened my eyes...everything was such a blur, all I saw was brown and green. I was looking at the ground? I bobbed up and down on something. Somebody was carrying me! I looked to my left as hard as I could, though I couldnt see the persons face...but I did see another boy on the other shoulder, I knew his name. "Cody.." I whispered to myself. I then struggled weakly. "Who are you!? Let me go!"
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Demon | Date: Thursday, 2011-11-17, 4:42 PM | Message # 382 |
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※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
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| "You dont recognize me?" I turned to look at him, flashing a devious smile.
ಠ_ಠ (づ ￣ ³￣)づ
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| Supernerd | Date: Thursday, 2011-11-17, 7:31 PM | Message # 383 |
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A Hater/Friend of Equinox
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| My eyes widened. "FUCK!" I struggled but her grip was too strong. "WHERE ARE YOU TAKING ME?" I glanced at Cody. "I MEAN US!"
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Demon | Date: Thursday, 2011-11-17, 8:11 PM | Message # 384 |
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※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
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| "Dunno. A new cave" I held up 2 chips. One was from Isaac, one from Cody. I crushed them in my hands, dropping them in dust. "Now they wont come after us"
ಠ_ಠ (づ ￣ ³￣)づ
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| Supernerd | Date: Friday, 2011-11-18, 3:21 AM | Message # 385 |
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A Hater/Friend of Equinox
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| (You dont know Cody's name, so stick with the dark haired boy or whatever.)
I sighed. "What do you want from me?..." I asked. "I have nothing to give...let me go!" I pleaded.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Evie | Date: Friday, 2011-11-18, 11:19 AM | Message # 386 |
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RP'er Without A Life
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| "They never saw me." I told my dad coldly. I paused and waited but he didn't speak. "Dad, I have a friend her name is Alicia and she was captured after your guards came for Issac, where is she?"
Shoot for the moon★ ☆ ✰
If you miss★ ☆ ✰
You'll still land among the stars★ ☆ ✰
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| Supernerd | Date: Friday, 2011-11-18, 11:26 AM | Message # 387 |
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A Hater/Friend of Equinox
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Messages: 3145
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| He smiled weakly. "And...why should I tell you? You planned against me. What are you gonna do to prevent to call security." He said as he put his dinger on a red button on the button, but not pushing it. (Yes, a RED button, its that intense.)
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Demon | Date: Friday, 2011-11-18, 2:58 PM | Message # 388 |
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※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
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Messages: 9627
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| (XD)
I rolled my eyes. "Do you not understand? I've told you a thousand times!"
ಠ_ಠ (づ ￣ ³￣)づ
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| Supernerd | Date: Friday, 2011-11-18, 6:25 PM | Message # 389 |
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A Hater/Friend of Equinox
Group: Special
Messages: 3145
Status: Offline
| "Well tell me again." I said stubbornly, and are you holdinh him captive too?"I saod motioning tp Cody.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Zombo104 | Date: Friday, 2011-11-18, 7:15 PM | Message # 390 |
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Famous RP'er
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| I heard two guards in the back of the vehicle with me, they must not know I'm awake yet...... They were talking to each other so I listened in on what they were saying.
It's funny until someone gets hurt. Then it's just hilarious.
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