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_/\_The Changers_/\_ (My 3rd roleplay..)
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| Supernerd | Date: Sunday, 2011-10-09, 1:16 AM | Message # 1 |
 A Hater/Friend of Equinox
Group: Special
Messages: 3145
Status: Offline
| Oh? So you think this is cool? To be a Change? No, its not, its a nightmare, a nightmare that i hope that never happens to anybody else....i only wished that my hope was true...Listen. Having these powers are a pain in the ass,the cops are after us,so are the TAPA, The Anti Power Association... having scientists wanting to know how we do such amazing powers that we do with our hands, or well, anything. Don't ask me how I got them, cause i don't know...I was just a kid just like you, a family...a home, but thats gone now. All i have are my guts, and instincts, to help me pass each minute, each hour, each day...if you see this message,and if you are one of me, read this message carefully. Never trust anyone you see...never trust any one of your own, not even me, y'see,they have spies, they use them..to plot there next strategy on us, on how to capture us, in case were somehow giving a "virus" to anyone..we already had to kill one of our own..lets just hope your not next. All I can say is...its a hard life to be me, a Changer.
(Sorry couldnt really think of anything good to call the people with powers...XD)
-Changer Character sheet-
Name:
Age:
Appearance:
Weapon(s)?(Dont have to have one):
Powers(Two please..no more than that.):
When were you a Changer?:
Bio:
Other: (Sorta for like giving a tip about how you can calm down your character or like foreshadowing)
-T.A.P.A Spy Character Sheet- (No more than two...)
Name:
Age:
Appearance:
Weapons(?):
Powers(Once again no more than two):
When were you a changer?:
When you were caught(Can be at birth...):
Bio:
Other: (same as the other other,)
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Reviews
~Equinox~
Story:3/5
It's got a story, but not a REAL story. It's hard to explain. There's a story from a unknown person's view, but not a plot for any long term story.
Grammar:4/5
It's got some good grammar, but just a FEW mistakes. A very few.
Character detail:4/5
Very nice character sheets and variety of character values. It's well done.
Plot Development:2.5/5
It's got a bit of a plot. Trying to put up with being a changeling. Not a massive or expansive plot though, so it's not a very good plot development, but it's got some possibilities.
Overall rating:3/5
Honestly, this is a pretty good RP. I don't plan on joining, but I must say if I had about 1 cell more in my brain to put up with making a CS, I would gladly join. Don't think this is a bad RP because I don't feel like joining, it's honestly really good. My laziness is just getting to me from work.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
Message edited by Supernerd - Sunday, 2011-10-09, 12:14 PM |
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| Demon | Date: Saturday, 2011-11-12, 8:23 PM | Message # 361 |
 ※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
Group: Administrators
Messages: 9627
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| I narrowed my eyes, and shrunk back down to my human form. I slung Isaac over my shoulder.
"Help me how?"
ಠ_ಠ (づ ￣ ³￣)づ
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| Supernerd | Date: Saturday, 2011-11-12, 8:40 PM | Message # 362 |
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A Hater/Friend of Equinox
Group: Special
Messages: 3145
Status: Offline
| "I am...telekinetic...so I can...read minds..." and with that, he fell unconscious.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Demon | Date: Sunday, 2011-11-13, 10:11 AM | Message # 363 |
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※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
Group: Administrators
Messages: 9627
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| "And that helps how....?" I muttered. I wonder if I should bring him with...
ಠ_ಠ (づ ￣ ³￣)づ
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| Supernerd | Date: Sunday, 2011-11-13, 12:01 PM | Message # 364 |
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A Hater/Friend of Equinox
Group: Special
Messages: 3145
Status: Offline
| "I...am able...to move things with my mind...and, I can read minds...so that means I can hold Isaac in place...and tell if hes lying." and with that, He passed out.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Demon | Date: Sunday, 2011-11-13, 1:41 PM | Message # 365 |
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※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
Group: Administrators
Messages: 9627
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| I smirked. "Intresting...."
I turned human, slung Isaac over one shoulder, and the other kid over my other shoulder.
ಠ_ಠ (づ ￣ ³￣)づ
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| Supernerd | Date: Sunday, 2011-11-13, 7:10 PM | Message # 366 |
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A Hater/Friend of Equinox
Group: Special
Messages: 3145
Status: Offline
| (lol...im guessing you need to find a new spot)
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Demon | Date: Monday, 2011-11-14, 3:05 PM | Message # 367 |
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※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
Group: Administrators
Messages: 9627
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| (Uhuh)
ಠ_ಠ (づ ￣ ³￣)づ
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| Evie | Date: Monday, 2011-11-14, 4:41 PM | Message # 368 |
 RP'er Without A Life
Group: Checked
Messages: 2382
Status: Offline
| I Had still felt a little woozy from the drug and when reality hit me, it seemed I had missed the whole fight. Brisk was gone so was Issac....did TAPA have them? I ran outside the cave and noticed Brisk trudging off with two boys slung over her shoulders. "Brisk!" I shouted, "What happend? Wheres (Zombos name)?"
Shoot for the moon★ ☆ ✰
If you miss★ ☆ ✰
You'll still land among the stars★ ☆ ✰
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| Demon | Date: Monday, 2011-11-14, 5:00 PM | Message # 369 |
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※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
Group: Administrators
Messages: 9627
Status: Offline
| I turned around. "Im gonna go look for (Zombo) now. I had a fight with some TAPA kids. I beat them and they ran off like chickens" I snickered. "But they ran off like chickens with (Zombo)"
ಠ_ಠ (づ ￣ ³￣)づ
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| Supernerd | Date: Monday, 2011-11-14, 5:43 PM | Message # 370 |
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A Hater/Friend of Equinox
Group: Special
Messages: 3145
Status: Offline
| The black haired boy and Isaac still layed unconscious
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Evie | Date: Monday, 2011-11-14, 6:24 PM | Message # 371 |
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RP'er Without A Life
Group: Checked
Messages: 2382
Status: Offline
| "No you go and find someplace else to stay, I'll go find (Zombo)" I told Brisk "I know the TAPA building well, make sure that isn't chipped like Issac was." Added (2011-11-14, 6:24 PM)
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(Zombos name is Alisa)
Shoot for the moon★ ☆ ✰
If you miss★ ☆ ✰
You'll still land among the stars★ ☆ ✰
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| Supernerd | Date: Monday, 2011-11-14, 11:34 PM | Message # 372 |
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A Hater/Friend of Equinox
Group: Special
Messages: 3145
Status: Offline
| Alisa was in a Van, getting driven to a different headquarters, ever since Brisk's breakout.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Evie | Date: Monday, 2011-11-14, 11:48 PM | Message # 373 |
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RP'er Without A Life
Group: Checked
Messages: 2382
Status: Offline
| (Woow.... >:( )
I ran so fast my feet burned right into headquarters and into my dads hospital room where he was recovering from multiple burns and a couple broken ribs.
Shoot for the moon★ ☆ ✰
If you miss★ ☆ ✰
You'll still land among the stars★ ☆ ✰
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| Supernerd | Date: Tuesday, 2011-11-15, 1:55 AM | Message # 374 |
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A Hater/Friend of Equinox
Group: Special
Messages: 3145
Status: Offline
| (Want me to talk as your dad Evie?)
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Evie | Date: Tuesday, 2011-11-15, 11:14 AM | Message # 375 |
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RP'er Without A Life
Group: Checked
Messages: 2382
Status: Offline
| (Okay)
Shoot for the moon★ ☆ ✰
If you miss★ ☆ ✰
You'll still land among the stars★ ☆ ✰
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