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_/\_The Changers_/\_ (My 3rd roleplay..)
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| Supernerd | Date: Sunday, 2011-10-09, 1:16 AM | Message # 1 |
 A Hater/Friend of Equinox
Group: Special
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| Oh? So you think this is cool? To be a Change? No, its not, its a nightmare, a nightmare that i hope that never happens to anybody else....i only wished that my hope was true...Listen. Having these powers are a pain in the ass,the cops are after us,so are the TAPA, The Anti Power Association... having scientists wanting to know how we do such amazing powers that we do with our hands, or well, anything. Don't ask me how I got them, cause i don't know...I was just a kid just like you, a family...a home, but thats gone now. All i have are my guts, and instincts, to help me pass each minute, each hour, each day...if you see this message,and if you are one of me, read this message carefully. Never trust anyone you see...never trust any one of your own, not even me, y'see,they have spies, they use them..to plot there next strategy on us, on how to capture us, in case were somehow giving a "virus" to anyone..we already had to kill one of our own..lets just hope your not next. All I can say is...its a hard life to be me, a Changer.
(Sorry couldnt really think of anything good to call the people with powers...XD)
-Changer Character sheet-
Name:
Age:
Appearance:
Weapon(s)?(Dont have to have one):
Powers(Two please..no more than that.):
When were you a Changer?:
Bio:
Other: (Sorta for like giving a tip about how you can calm down your character or like foreshadowing)
-T.A.P.A Spy Character Sheet- (No more than two...)
Name:
Age:
Appearance:
Weapons(?):
Powers(Once again no more than two):
When were you a changer?:
When you were caught(Can be at birth...):
Bio:
Other: (same as the other other,)
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Reviews
~Equinox~
Story:3/5
It's got a story, but not a REAL story. It's hard to explain. There's a story from a unknown person's view, but not a plot for any long term story.
Grammar:4/5
It's got some good grammar, but just a FEW mistakes. A very few.
Character detail:4/5
Very nice character sheets and variety of character values. It's well done.
Plot Development:2.5/5
It's got a bit of a plot. Trying to put up with being a changeling. Not a massive or expansive plot though, so it's not a very good plot development, but it's got some possibilities.
Overall rating:3/5
Honestly, this is a pretty good RP. I don't plan on joining, but I must say if I had about 1 cell more in my brain to put up with making a CS, I would gladly join. Don't think this is a bad RP because I don't feel like joining, it's honestly really good. My laziness is just getting to me from work.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
Message edited by Supernerd - Sunday, 2011-10-09, 12:14 PM |
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| Supernerd | Date: Thursday, 2011-11-10, 7:26 PM | Message # 331 |
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A Hater/Friend of Equinox
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Messages: 3145
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| "WHAT IS GOING TO HAPPEN TO ME?!" I yelled, my eyes getting red and watery, I clenched my fists hard, they were shaking, a scared look was on my face, and I did sense fear in me, and it ever so increased.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Demon | Date: Thursday, 2011-11-10, 7:31 PM | Message # 332 |
 ※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
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| I pinched the bridge of my nose. "Look kid, you brought this on yourself. Dont act so innocent... Mercy isnt my thing"
ಠ_ಠ (づ ￣ ³￣)づ
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| Supernerd | Date: Thursday, 2011-11-10, 7:34 PM | Message # 333 |
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A Hater/Friend of Equinox
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Messages: 3145
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| "ANSWER MY QUESTION!". I yelled, I was still shaking, anger and fear overcoming me.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Demon | Date: Thursday, 2011-11-10, 7:54 PM | Message # 334 |
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※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
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| "Dont know. Its not bad torture, jut the fact that Im not letting you out of my sight."
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| Supernerd | Date: Thursday, 2011-11-10, 8:00 PM | Message # 335 |
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A Hater/Friend of Equinox
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Messages: 3145
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| I relaxed...great, I would be able to live long enough so they could come...
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Demon | Date: Thursday, 2011-11-10, 8:01 PM | Message # 336 |
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※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
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| "But trust me, the TAPA isnt getting you back anytime soon. Actually, not anytime at all"
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| Supernerd | Date: Thursday, 2011-11-10, 8:04 PM | Message # 337 |
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A Hater/Friend of Equinox
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| I raised an eyebrow."And how is that?" I grinned.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Demon | Date: Thursday, 2011-11-10, 8:07 PM | Message # 338 |
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※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
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| "Trust me. I have my methods"
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| Supernerd | Date: Thursday, 2011-11-10, 8:12 PM | Message # 339 |
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A Hater/Friend of Equinox
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Messages: 3145
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| I started to laugh.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Demon | Date: Thursday, 2011-11-10, 8:15 PM | Message # 340 |
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※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
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| I stared blankly at him. The only emotion on my face was in my eyes. They blazed with cold hatred.
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| Supernerd | Date: Thursday, 2011-11-10, 8:20 PM | Message # 341 |
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A Hater/Friend of Equinox
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| "They got me chipped dude!! In case I ever ran away!! And you!" i pointed at the girl. "Will be with your Father! And you!" i pointed at brisk."you'll be tested on! " I continued to laugh, tears coming to my eyes.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Demon | Date: Thursday, 2011-11-10, 8:27 PM | Message # 342 |
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※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
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| I smirked. "I can easily take that chip away. And it will be painful."
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| Supernerd | Date: Thursday, 2011-11-10, 8:34 PM | Message # 343 |
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A Hater/Friend of Equinox
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Messages: 3145
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| "If only you knew where." i smiled, "tick tock, they should be here within 15minutes."
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Evie | Date: Friday, 2011-11-11, 0:33 AM | Message # 344 |
 RP'er Without A Life
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| "My father wont be on his feet anytime soon, Hes bruised and burnt." I smiled widely. "Oh and if you don't tell us where that chip is you'll find yourself being thrown off a cliff. Bad move telling us man, even if they do find you, you wont be with us and you won't be alive. Now....tell me where the chip is."
Shoot for the moon★ ☆ ✰
If you miss★ ☆ ✰
You'll still land among the stars★ ☆ ✰
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| Zombo104 | Date: Friday, 2011-11-11, 0:55 AM | Message # 345 |
 Famous RP'er
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| I glared at Isaac evily "Oh, so you ARE a TAPA spy......" an evil smirk spreading across my face
It's funny until someone gets hurt. Then it's just hilarious.
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