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_/\_The Changers_/\_ (My 3rd roleplay..)
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| Supernerd | Date: Sunday, 2011-10-09, 1:16 AM | Message # 1 |
 A Hater/Friend of Equinox
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| Oh? So you think this is cool? To be a Change? No, its not, its a nightmare, a nightmare that i hope that never happens to anybody else....i only wished that my hope was true...Listen. Having these powers are a pain in the ass,the cops are after us,so are the TAPA, The Anti Power Association... having scientists wanting to know how we do such amazing powers that we do with our hands, or well, anything. Don't ask me how I got them, cause i don't know...I was just a kid just like you, a family...a home, but thats gone now. All i have are my guts, and instincts, to help me pass each minute, each hour, each day...if you see this message,and if you are one of me, read this message carefully. Never trust anyone you see...never trust any one of your own, not even me, y'see,they have spies, they use them..to plot there next strategy on us, on how to capture us, in case were somehow giving a "virus" to anyone..we already had to kill one of our own..lets just hope your not next. All I can say is...its a hard life to be me, a Changer.
(Sorry couldnt really think of anything good to call the people with powers...XD)
-Changer Character sheet-
Name:
Age:
Appearance:
Weapon(s)?(Dont have to have one):
Powers(Two please..no more than that.):
When were you a Changer?:
Bio:
Other: (Sorta for like giving a tip about how you can calm down your character or like foreshadowing)
-T.A.P.A Spy Character Sheet- (No more than two...)
Name:
Age:
Appearance:
Weapons(?):
Powers(Once again no more than two):
When were you a changer?:
When you were caught(Can be at birth...):
Bio:
Other: (same as the other other,)
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Reviews
~Equinox~
Story:3/5
It's got a story, but not a REAL story. It's hard to explain. There's a story from a unknown person's view, but not a plot for any long term story.
Grammar:4/5
It's got some good grammar, but just a FEW mistakes. A very few.
Character detail:4/5
Very nice character sheets and variety of character values. It's well done.
Plot Development:2.5/5
It's got a bit of a plot. Trying to put up with being a changeling. Not a massive or expansive plot though, so it's not a very good plot development, but it's got some possibilities.
Overall rating:3/5
Honestly, this is a pretty good RP. I don't plan on joining, but I must say if I had about 1 cell more in my brain to put up with making a CS, I would gladly join. Don't think this is a bad RP because I don't feel like joining, it's honestly really good. My laziness is just getting to me from work.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
Message edited by Supernerd - Sunday, 2011-10-09, 12:14 PM |
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| Supernerd | Date: Thursday, 2011-12-01, 7:12 PM | Message # 496 |
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| Men soon came into the room as they all fell unconscious, lifting them into vans and driving them to an unknown destination, putting sedative in them every couple of hours. Soon, they were each put in seperate different rooms, they were white paneled, with no hint of a door anywhere, but all there was a speaker on the roof, a white bed with a thin sheet on it, each of them had an Id number on the back of their wrists.
Cody-
My eyes slowly opened...I felt like crap, feeling nautious. It felt like i was- wait, I leaned up on my bed, looking around. "Oh no...." I whispered.
Isaac-
I slowly opened my eyes...seeing Forest?! Wait! What?! I stood up, then layed down quickly, cause i had the urge to puke, I looked to my left, seeing Virra lieing down on the ground unconscious. "She didnt...FUCK!"
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Kenzieroo | Date: Thursday, 2011-12-01, 7:25 PM | Message # 497 |
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From the Forest
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| ~Silver
I found a smoothed out rock and I sat down. Sighing I open my bag pulling out my Picolo and play a soft song to calm my fraying nerves.
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| Demon | Date: Thursday, 2011-12-01, 8:16 PM | Message # 498 |
 ※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
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| I woke up, feeling groggy. I saw the white. "SHIT!" I pounded my fist into the wall, creating a hole. I pulled my hand out, shaking off the dust. I stood up, resisting the urge to puke.
ಠ_ಠ (づ ￣ ³￣)づ
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| Kenzieroo | Date: Thursday, 2011-12-01, 8:21 PM | Message # 499 |
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From the Forest
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| ~Silver
I quickly stop, but not abruptly. I finished the song first I look around and it wasn't until then I noticed the beauty of the forest. Having been raised in a house my whole life I had only seen pictures of places such as thin. While looking around in a circle I realized I had found myself in a thicket. A good place to take a longer break then 10 minutes.
On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic
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| Equinox | Date: Thursday, 2011-12-01, 8:49 PM | Message # 500 |
 Social warrior of the administration
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| THUMP THUMP THUMP
"LET ME OUT OFF THIS!"
"We...We may have to put him down..."
"Are you sure he doesn't have hydrophobia? Perhaps we could give him a vaccine..."
"No, if he did, we'd know it. He's not foaming or anything, and he still has intelligence."
"So...He's just plain crazy?"
"Unfortunately, yes."
"What do we do then?"
"We have to kill him."
~Glacial Malphite: The Shard of the Monolith~
"I hear rumors that the Shard of the Monolith is an unstoppable force. They aren't rumors."-Nausus, on the topic of Malphite's arrival.
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| Supernerd | Date: Thursday, 2011-12-01, 10:46 PM | Message # 501 |
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A Hater/Friend of Equinox
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| (Wait, i forget, is everybody woken up?? XD)
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Kenzieroo | Date: Thursday, 2011-12-01, 11:04 PM | Message # 502 |
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From the Forest
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| (Idk.)
On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic
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| Zombo104 | Date: Friday, 2011-12-02, 0:08 AM | Message # 503 |
 Famous RP'er
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| I opened my eyes, pure white..... I closed them again as pain seared through them. I tried to recollect my memories. We were in a cave, I was watching Cody hack the TAPA, then...... My eyes snapped open and I jumped off the bed and quickly looked around. Then I felt my stomach do a little flip and I was vomiting on the floor.
It's funny until someone gets hurt. Then it's just hilarious.
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| Evie | Date: Friday, 2011-12-02, 10:27 AM | Message # 504 |
 RP'er Without A Life
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| I opened my eyes slowly and saw Issac standing above me..... crap. I tried to keep still and pretend I was asleep but instead I leaned over and threw up all my stomach contents barely missing his left shoe.
Shoot for the moon★ ☆ ✰
If you miss★ ☆ ✰
You'll still land among the stars★ ☆ ✰
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| Demon | Date: Friday, 2011-12-02, 3:02 PM | Message # 505 |
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※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
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| I got up, dusting my pants. Then, I punched the wall again. Another hole. I smirked, and morphed into a raven, flew through the hole, and looked around.
ಠ_ಠ (づ ￣ ³￣)づ
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| Kenzieroo | Date: Friday, 2011-12-02, 5:55 PM | Message # 506 |
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From the Forest
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| ~Silver
I pull out a bottle of water and take a big drink. Even if this is a thicket I should get a move on.
On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic
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| Zombo104 | Date: Friday, 2011-12-02, 6:16 PM | Message # 507 |
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| stood and wiped my mouth and hoped there was a glass of water in here. Luckily there was, I gulped it down and began searching for a way out. Finding nothing I slammed my fist on the wall and slid to the floor holding back my tears.
It's funny until someone gets hurt. Then it's just hilarious.
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| Kenzieroo | Date: Friday, 2011-12-02, 7:42 PM | Message # 508 |
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From the Forest
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| ~Silver
Putting both my piccolo and water away I get back up and continue to walk. Still not knowing where I was going.
On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic
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| Supernerd | Date: Friday, 2011-12-02, 9:20 PM | Message # 509 |
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| Isaac-
I jumped back in surprise, realising she was awake. "You!...Why did you do that!" I screamed
(I'lll post mroe later on, in a rush)
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Kenzieroo | Date: Friday, 2011-12-02, 11:02 PM | Message # 510 |
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From the Forest
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| (IDK what to do next)
On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic
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