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_/\_The Changers_/\_ (My 3rd roleplay..)
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| Supernerd | Date: Sunday, 2011-10-09, 1:16 AM | Message # 1 |
 A Hater/Friend of Equinox
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| Oh? So you think this is cool? To be a Change? No, its not, its a nightmare, a nightmare that i hope that never happens to anybody else....i only wished that my hope was true...Listen. Having these powers are a pain in the ass,the cops are after us,so are the TAPA, The Anti Power Association... having scientists wanting to know how we do such amazing powers that we do with our hands, or well, anything. Don't ask me how I got them, cause i don't know...I was just a kid just like you, a family...a home, but thats gone now. All i have are my guts, and instincts, to help me pass each minute, each hour, each day...if you see this message,and if you are one of me, read this message carefully. Never trust anyone you see...never trust any one of your own, not even me, y'see,they have spies, they use them..to plot there next strategy on us, on how to capture us, in case were somehow giving a "virus" to anyone..we already had to kill one of our own..lets just hope your not next. All I can say is...its a hard life to be me, a Changer.
(Sorry couldnt really think of anything good to call the people with powers...XD)
-Changer Character sheet-
Name:
Age:
Appearance:
Weapon(s)?(Dont have to have one):
Powers(Two please..no more than that.):
When were you a Changer?:
Bio:
Other: (Sorta for like giving a tip about how you can calm down your character or like foreshadowing)
-T.A.P.A Spy Character Sheet- (No more than two...)
Name:
Age:
Appearance:
Weapons(?):
Powers(Once again no more than two):
When were you a changer?:
When you were caught(Can be at birth...):
Bio:
Other: (same as the other other,)
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Reviews
~Equinox~
Story:3/5
It's got a story, but not a REAL story. It's hard to explain. There's a story from a unknown person's view, but not a plot for any long term story.
Grammar:4/5
It's got some good grammar, but just a FEW mistakes. A very few.
Character detail:4/5
Very nice character sheets and variety of character values. It's well done.
Plot Development:2.5/5
It's got a bit of a plot. Trying to put up with being a changeling. Not a massive or expansive plot though, so it's not a very good plot development, but it's got some possibilities.
Overall rating:3/5
Honestly, this is a pretty good RP. I don't plan on joining, but I must say if I had about 1 cell more in my brain to put up with making a CS, I would gladly join. Don't think this is a bad RP because I don't feel like joining, it's honestly really good. My laziness is just getting to me from work.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
Message edited by Supernerd - Sunday, 2011-10-09, 12:14 PM |
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| Kenzieroo | Date: Saturday, 2011-12-10, 0:58 AM | Message # 571 |
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From the Forest
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| ~Silver
I pull down the Picolo. Its weird to think even if I dont see it anything could be happening. I sigh felt as if someone smacked me in the face whatever might be going on the posablitys are endless. I put the Picolo back to my mouth and continue to play, I had not time to kid myself I couldn't help if I wanted to.
On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic
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| Equinox | Date: Saturday, 2011-12-10, 1:00 AM | Message # 572 |
 Social warrior of the administration
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| (I have my ways.)
The sound of a flute filled the air. A fiery, loud flute. As if the flute and it's music were tainted with demonic power to each note...
~Glacial Malphite: The Shard of the Monolith~
"I hear rumors that the Shard of the Monolith is an unstoppable force. They aren't rumors."-Nausus, on the topic of Malphite's arrival.
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| Supernerd | Date: Saturday, 2011-12-10, 1:01 AM | Message # 573 |
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| (Thats cool :P)
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Kenzieroo | Date: Saturday, 2011-12-10, 1:02 AM | Message # 574 |
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From the Forest
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| (what the heck?!?)
On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic
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| Supernerd | Date: Saturday, 2011-12-10, 1:03 AM | Message # 575 |
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| (Just post kenzi)
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Kenzieroo | Date: Saturday, 2011-12-10, 1:09 AM | Message # 576 |
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From the Forest
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| ~Silver
I had started playing a real song. Well part of a song Wagles Triumph. Measure 17, 3/4 fast all slurred 16th notes.
On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic
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| Evie | Date: Saturday, 2011-12-10, 3:09 AM | Message # 577 |
 RP'er Without A Life
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| "Thanks.....again." I told the snake I knew was a Brisk. I Walked up to Issac grabbing him by his throat and lifting him off the ground."You might not feel this now, but you will when you wake up." I said darkly to the unconscious Issac as flames enveloped my hand. I placed it firmly on his right shoulder and when I pulled it away a red mark of a hand print remained. " You won't forget me now." Then with both hands I threw him so he smashed against a nearby tree.
Shoot for the moon★ ☆ ✰
If you miss★ ☆ ✰
You'll still land among the stars★ ☆ ✰
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| Demon | Date: Saturday, 2011-12-10, 8:16 AM | Message # 578 |
 ※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
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| I morphed into a human. "No prob"
I slung Isaac over my shoulder. "He isnt getting away" I laughed. "Lets go look for Chloe..."
Nearby, I heard the sound of a picolo. I narrowed my eyes. I morphed into a wolf, Isaac on my back. I heard footsteps, of 2 people, (Equi and Kenzi) then the flapping of wings and Cody screaming.
"Lets go"
ಠ_ಠ (づ ￣ ³￣)づ
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| Kenzieroo | Date: Saturday, 2011-12-10, 9:29 AM | Message # 579 |
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From the Forest
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| (I am not walk FYI.)
~Silver
My gut twisted, something was off. O stoped playing. What bugged me most it that it bugged me to beggin with.
On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic
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| Equinox | Date: Saturday, 2011-12-10, 11:22 AM | Message # 580 |
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| The flute sound stopped.
-Jarren-
Looks like there are several spread out among the trees. I could easily kill a few, but I would eventually get cornered.
Thank god for these spirit tools. I'll easily make due of them.
~Glacial Malphite: The Shard of the Monolith~
"I hear rumors that the Shard of the Monolith is an unstoppable force. They aren't rumors."-Nausus, on the topic of Malphite's arrival.
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| Supernerd | Date: Saturday, 2011-12-10, 1:13 PM | Message # 581 |
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| Cody-
"Oh god..." I said, not looking down again. "Please put me down...please put me down..." I said in a small voice.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Zombo104 | Date: Saturday, 2011-12-10, 1:17 PM | Message # 582 |
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| "I will as long as you promise not to run away. Otherwise it's back into the air with you."
It's funny until someone gets hurt. Then it's just hilarious.
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| Supernerd | Date: Saturday, 2011-12-10, 1:20 PM | Message # 583 |
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| Cody-
"Fine fine....just please...take me down. " I said, my voice still very small not looking at the ground, and I was almost hyperventilating, freaking out.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Zombo104 | Date: Saturday, 2011-12-10, 1:27 PM | Message # 584 |
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| I landed setting him on the ground. "There, now to find Brisk....."
It's funny until someone gets hurt. Then it's just hilarious.
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| Evie | Date: Saturday, 2011-12-10, 2:58 PM | Message # 585 |
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RP'er Without A Life
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| "who's Chloe?...."
Shoot for the moon★ ☆ ✰
If you miss★ ☆ ✰
You'll still land among the stars★ ☆ ✰
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