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_/\_The Changers_/\_ (My 3rd roleplay..)
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| Supernerd | Date: Sunday, 2011-10-09, 1:16 AM | Message # 1 |
 A Hater/Friend of Equinox
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| Oh? So you think this is cool? To be a Change? No, its not, its a nightmare, a nightmare that i hope that never happens to anybody else....i only wished that my hope was true...Listen. Having these powers are a pain in the ass,the cops are after us,so are the TAPA, The Anti Power Association... having scientists wanting to know how we do such amazing powers that we do with our hands, or well, anything. Don't ask me how I got them, cause i don't know...I was just a kid just like you, a family...a home, but thats gone now. All i have are my guts, and instincts, to help me pass each minute, each hour, each day...if you see this message,and if you are one of me, read this message carefully. Never trust anyone you see...never trust any one of your own, not even me, y'see,they have spies, they use them..to plot there next strategy on us, on how to capture us, in case were somehow giving a "virus" to anyone..we already had to kill one of our own..lets just hope your not next. All I can say is...its a hard life to be me, a Changer.
(Sorry couldnt really think of anything good to call the people with powers...XD)
-Changer Character sheet-
Name:
Age:
Appearance:
Weapon(s)?(Dont have to have one):
Powers(Two please..no more than that.):
When were you a Changer?:
Bio:
Other: (Sorta for like giving a tip about how you can calm down your character or like foreshadowing)
-T.A.P.A Spy Character Sheet- (No more than two...)
Name:
Age:
Appearance:
Weapons(?):
Powers(Once again no more than two):
When were you a changer?:
When you were caught(Can be at birth...):
Bio:
Other: (same as the other other,)
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Reviews
~Equinox~
Story:3/5
It's got a story, but not a REAL story. It's hard to explain. There's a story from a unknown person's view, but not a plot for any long term story.
Grammar:4/5
It's got some good grammar, but just a FEW mistakes. A very few.
Character detail:4/5
Very nice character sheets and variety of character values. It's well done.
Plot Development:2.5/5
It's got a bit of a plot. Trying to put up with being a changeling. Not a massive or expansive plot though, so it's not a very good plot development, but it's got some possibilities.
Overall rating:3/5
Honestly, this is a pretty good RP. I don't plan on joining, but I must say if I had about 1 cell more in my brain to put up with making a CS, I would gladly join. Don't think this is a bad RP because I don't feel like joining, it's honestly really good. My laziness is just getting to me from work.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
Message edited by Supernerd - Sunday, 2011-10-09, 12:14 PM |
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| Kenzieroo | Date: Friday, 2011-12-23, 1:49 PM | Message # 856 |
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From the Forest
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| (LOL)
On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic
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| Supernerd | Date: Friday, 2011-12-23, 1:53 PM | Message # 857 |
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A Hater/Friend of Equinox
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Messages: 3145
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| (Also, wtf, GGGG????? ...Thats either spam....or...well, noobish :L Three random ppl. ((One that i definitely know is a friend of Zebra's)) and 2 others....oh god.)
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Evie | Date: Friday, 2011-12-23, 2:06 PM | Message # 858 |
 RP'er Without A Life
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| "Who are you anyway." I said to the unknown man that had no right sticking his nose in our business.
Added (2011-12-23, 2:06 PM)
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(Yea painkiller got something up my sleeve..)
Shoot for the moon★ ☆ ✰
If you miss★ ☆ ✰
You'll still land among the stars★ ☆ ✰
Message edited by Evie - Friday, 2011-12-23, 2:07 PM |
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| Kenzieroo | Date: Friday, 2011-12-23, 2:13 PM | Message # 859 |
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From the Forest
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Messages: 7524
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| ~Cat
I don't move listening, apparently this wasn't a very happy get together. I morph into a bobcat to get closer, but I still stay out of sight just in case.
On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic
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| Demon | Date: Friday, 2011-12-23, 2:16 PM | Message # 860 |
 ※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
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| I narrowed my eyes at the man.
ಠ_ಠ (づ ￣ ³￣)づ
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| Kenzieroo | Date: Friday, 2011-12-23, 2:35 PM | Message # 861 |
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From the Forest
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Messages: 7524
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| ~Cat
Soon I'm close enough to see, but not to close. It was weird that I even cared about this, normal I'd pass without a trace, I live alone and I liked it, but this seemed important.
On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic
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| Teddy | Date: Friday, 2011-12-23, 5:09 PM | Message # 862 |
 Starting RP'er
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Messages: 48
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| Kenzieroo | Date: Friday, 2011-12-23, 5:37 PM | Message # 863 |
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From the Forest
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| ~Silver
"Brace yourself I'm about to cut the wire, tell me when."
On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic
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| Equinox | Date: Friday, 2011-12-23, 5:45 PM | Message # 864 |
 Social warrior of the administration
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| "Someone who knows what the future holds." I say, making sure my hat is tipped to keep a shadow over my face.
~Glacial Malphite: The Shard of the Monolith~
"I hear rumors that the Shard of the Monolith is an unstoppable force. They aren't rumors."-Nausus, on the topic of Malphite's arrival.
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| Kenzieroo | Date: Friday, 2011-12-23, 5:49 PM | Message # 865 |
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From the Forest
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Messages: 7524
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| ~Cat
I stay low to the floor, What are they talking about?
On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic
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| Teddy | Date: Friday, 2011-12-23, 6:12 PM | Message # 866 |
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Starting RP'er
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| Kenzieroo | Date: Friday, 2011-12-23, 9:19 PM | Message # 867 |
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From the Forest
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Messages: 7524
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| (And you just proved all Brooke's are stuck up snobs! Congratulation you get nothing!)
On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic
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| Zombo104 | Date: Friday, 2011-12-23, 9:40 PM | Message # 868 |
 Famous RP'er
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Messages: 831
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| "Okay, cut it." I closed my eyes prepared for the worse.
It's funny until someone gets hurt. Then it's just hilarious.
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| Kenzieroo | Date: Friday, 2011-12-23, 9:48 PM | Message # 869 |
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From the Forest
Group: Moderators
Messages: 7524
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| ~Silver
I cut it, shivers run down my back and a tiny shock comes out. Nothing harmful or deadly, I give a sigh of relief. "The rest has no power," and I cut the rest off the wires only leaving the one in her back. "I can't remove the wire, but I can shorten it." I cut it only last time the take a step back letting the wire fall to the ground.
On The Edge Of Imagination And Logic
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| Supernerd | Date: Friday, 2011-12-23, 9:49 PM | Message # 870 |
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A Hater/Friend of Equinox
Group: Special
Messages: 3145
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| (Teddy, you are spamming roleplays, and i'm starting to get pissed off, please, just please, solve this somewhere else besides this frickin website, settle it on Facebook or something. >:O)
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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