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_/\_The Changers_/\_ (My 3rd roleplay..)
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| Supernerd | Date: Sunday, 2011-10-09, 1:16 AM | Message # 1 |
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| Oh? So you think this is cool? To be a Change? No, its not, its a nightmare, a nightmare that i hope that never happens to anybody else....i only wished that my hope was true...Listen. Having these powers are a pain in the ass,the cops are after us,so are the TAPA, The Anti Power Association... having scientists wanting to know how we do such amazing powers that we do with our hands, or well, anything. Don't ask me how I got them, cause i don't know...I was just a kid just like you, a family...a home, but thats gone now. All i have are my guts, and instincts, to help me pass each minute, each hour, each day...if you see this message,and if you are one of me, read this message carefully. Never trust anyone you see...never trust any one of your own, not even me, y'see,they have spies, they use them..to plot there next strategy on us, on how to capture us, in case were somehow giving a "virus" to anyone..we already had to kill one of our own..lets just hope your not next. All I can say is...its a hard life to be me, a Changer.
(Sorry couldnt really think of anything good to call the people with powers...XD)
-Changer Character sheet-
Name:
Age:
Appearance:
Weapon(s)?(Dont have to have one):
Powers(Two please..no more than that.):
When were you a Changer?:
Bio:
Other: (Sorta for like giving a tip about how you can calm down your character or like foreshadowing)
-T.A.P.A Spy Character Sheet- (No more than two...)
Name:
Age:
Appearance:
Weapons(?):
Powers(Once again no more than two):
When were you a changer?:
When you were caught(Can be at birth...):
Bio:
Other: (same as the other other,)
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Reviews
~Equinox~
Story:3/5
It's got a story, but not a REAL story. It's hard to explain. There's a story from a unknown person's view, but not a plot for any long term story.
Grammar:4/5
It's got some good grammar, but just a FEW mistakes. A very few.
Character detail:4/5
Very nice character sheets and variety of character values. It's well done.
Plot Development:2.5/5
It's got a bit of a plot. Trying to put up with being a changeling. Not a massive or expansive plot though, so it's not a very good plot development, but it's got some possibilities.
Overall rating:3/5
Honestly, this is a pretty good RP. I don't plan on joining, but I must say if I had about 1 cell more in my brain to put up with making a CS, I would gladly join. Don't think this is a bad RP because I don't feel like joining, it's honestly really good. My laziness is just getting to me from work.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
Message edited by Supernerd - Sunday, 2011-10-09, 12:14 PM |
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| Demon | Date: Friday, 2011-10-14, 6:01 PM | Message # 136 |
 ※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
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| (done)
I sighed, drinking some water. "Whats his name, anyways?"
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| Supernerd | Date: Friday, 2011-10-14, 6:02 PM | Message # 137 |
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| I groaned as i woke up, the smell of pizza instantly filling up my nostrils. "eeh?" I slowly leaned up, "Pepperoni!, No way! Where'd you get the money?" I said as i examined each of the pizzas to see which one was biggest, after deciding, i picked it up and took a bite.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
Message edited by Supernerd - Friday, 2011-10-14, 6:04 PM |
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| Demon | Date: Friday, 2011-10-14, 6:04 PM | Message # 138 |
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| "I think he stole it" I grunted. "Whats your name, anyways?"
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| Zero | Date: Friday, 2011-10-14, 6:06 PM | Message # 139 |
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| "Oh, I got a friend that lent me some money, AND NO he doesn't know about my powers." Added (2011-10-14, 6:06 PM)
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(Got to go soon  )
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| Demon | Date: Friday, 2011-10-14, 6:06 PM | Message # 140 |
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| I nodded. "I wouldve just stole it" I smirked. "I already have wanted posters" I shrugged.
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| Supernerd | Date: Friday, 2011-10-14, 6:07 PM | Message # 141 |
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| "My name?" I said raising an eyebrow. "Is Isaac, i'll be right back, i'm gonna take a walk, i need to loosen up my muscles...Be right back!" I said cheerily and i walked down into the forest, towards the lake.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Zero | Date: Friday, 2011-10-14, 6:07 PM | Message # 142 |
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| "Your a fugitive?"
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| Demon | Date: Friday, 2011-10-14, 6:08 PM | Message # 143 |
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| I nodded, watching Isaac leave. "Trust me, I've done enough to piss off the police"
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| Zero | Date: Friday, 2011-10-14, 6:11 PM | Message # 144 |
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| "Huh, well when he gets back from his walk we should find a better place to stay."
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| Demon | Date: Friday, 2011-10-14, 6:13 PM | Message # 145 |
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| I nodded. "I think theres something abit suspicious about that kid... I dont know what it is though.."
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| Supernerd | Date: Friday, 2011-10-14, 6:14 PM | Message # 146 |
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| I started to jog, jogging along a path, and once i was about 20 minutes away from our "camp" I then pushed the inside of my left collar "I've found two Changers" i whispered quietly. "What can they do?" Whispered the person on the side of the radio. "A girl named(Demons name, i forget it XD) that can shapeshift, and a boy named zero who can make illusions..that is all i know so far." I said. "Ok, report in two more days on what you've learned." the man said. "got it" I answered, and started to head back to camp. Added (2011-10-14, 6:14 PM)
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(keep talking about me, i wont reach the camp for a bit)
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Demon | Date: Friday, 2011-10-14, 6:16 PM | Message # 147 |
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| (Your fucking kidding, right? BRISK! IM USING FUCKING BRISK! IVE BEEN USING HER FOR 3 YEARS!! -___-)
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| Zero | Date: Friday, 2011-10-14, 6:19 PM | Message # 148 |
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| "Ya, there is something about him isn't there?" Added (2011-10-14, 6:19 PM)
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"So, whats the story with you anyways?"
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| Demon | Date: Friday, 2011-10-14, 6:20 PM | Message # 149 |
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| "ya.." I paused, looking down.
"Trust me.... Its a wierd story..." I laughed. "You probably wont believe me anyways, most dont. But by the way I act, some do.."
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| Zero | Date: Friday, 2011-10-14, 6:21 PM | Message # 150 |
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| (Mmmm...mini pizzas...nom nom nom..burps. XD)
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