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_/\_The Changers_/\_ (My 3rd roleplay..)
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| Supernerd | Date: Sunday, 2011-10-09, 1:16 AM | Message # 1 |
 A Hater/Friend of Equinox
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| Oh? So you think this is cool? To be a Change? No, its not, its a nightmare, a nightmare that i hope that never happens to anybody else....i only wished that my hope was true...Listen. Having these powers are a pain in the ass,the cops are after us,so are the TAPA, The Anti Power Association... having scientists wanting to know how we do such amazing powers that we do with our hands, or well, anything. Don't ask me how I got them, cause i don't know...I was just a kid just like you, a family...a home, but thats gone now. All i have are my guts, and instincts, to help me pass each minute, each hour, each day...if you see this message,and if you are one of me, read this message carefully. Never trust anyone you see...never trust any one of your own, not even me, y'see,they have spies, they use them..to plot there next strategy on us, on how to capture us, in case were somehow giving a "virus" to anyone..we already had to kill one of our own..lets just hope your not next. All I can say is...its a hard life to be me, a Changer.
(Sorry couldnt really think of anything good to call the people with powers...XD)
-Changer Character sheet-
Name:
Age:
Appearance:
Weapon(s)?(Dont have to have one):
Powers(Two please..no more than that.):
When were you a Changer?:
Bio:
Other: (Sorta for like giving a tip about how you can calm down your character or like foreshadowing)
-T.A.P.A Spy Character Sheet- (No more than two...)
Name:
Age:
Appearance:
Weapons(?):
Powers(Once again no more than two):
When were you a changer?:
When you were caught(Can be at birth...):
Bio:
Other: (same as the other other,)
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Reviews
~Equinox~
Story:3/5
It's got a story, but not a REAL story. It's hard to explain. There's a story from a unknown person's view, but not a plot for any long term story.
Grammar:4/5
It's got some good grammar, but just a FEW mistakes. A very few.
Character detail:4/5
Very nice character sheets and variety of character values. It's well done.
Plot Development:2.5/5
It's got a bit of a plot. Trying to put up with being a changeling. Not a massive or expansive plot though, so it's not a very good plot development, but it's got some possibilities.
Overall rating:3/5
Honestly, this is a pretty good RP. I don't plan on joining, but I must say if I had about 1 cell more in my brain to put up with making a CS, I would gladly join. Don't think this is a bad RP because I don't feel like joining, it's honestly really good. My laziness is just getting to me from work.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
Message edited by Supernerd - Sunday, 2011-10-09, 12:14 PM |
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| Supernerd | Date: Friday, 2011-10-14, 7:08 PM | Message # 166 |
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A Hater/Friend of Equinox
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| My eyes widened in confusion. "What the fuck are you talking about?! Did Zero put some fucking magic mushrooms in your part of the pizza or something?!"
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Demon | Date: Friday, 2011-10-14, 7:12 PM | Message # 167 |
 ※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
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| I pinched the bridge of my nose with my fingers, shaking my head. "I was such a moron... Im outta here, bastard!" I snarled, running out.
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| Supernerd | Date: Friday, 2011-10-14, 7:49 PM | Message # 168 |
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A Hater/Friend of Equinox
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| "Wait Brisk!" I said, reaching a hand out, but it was too late, she left, Shit....This is bad. "brisk..." I said quietly.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Demon | Date: Friday, 2011-10-14, 7:59 PM | Message # 169 |
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※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
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| I climbed up a tree, sitting on one of the branched and leaning my back against the trunk. "Damn bastard..." I was only afew yards away from the cave.
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| Supernerd | Date: Friday, 2011-10-14, 8:03 PM | Message # 170 |
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| "Why would brisk say such things..."I said quietly, since i had a feeling she was nearby...I sighed."Well, whatever shes been eating will hopefully wear off" I started to walk inside the cave slowly.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Demon | Date: Friday, 2011-10-14, 8:07 PM | Message # 171 |
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※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
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| I banged my head against the tree trunk. "The hell did I just say? What if he ISNT the enemy?"
I was unaware that I was prettymuch shouting.
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| Supernerd | Date: Friday, 2011-10-14, 8:09 PM | Message # 172 |
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| I listened silently, grinning, since i knew that she was behind the cave somewhere, I might've tricked her after all.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Demon | Date: Friday, 2011-10-14, 8:11 PM | Message # 173 |
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※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
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| I rubbed my temples. "Then again... I know when people are lieing... And that face, was glowing with lies.."
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| Supernerd | Date: Friday, 2011-10-14, 8:13 PM | Message # 174 |
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| I frowned slightly, i didnt think i looked like i was lying, i always practiced my expressions in the mirror when i was at T.A.P.A)
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Demon | Date: Friday, 2011-10-14, 8:16 PM | Message # 175 |
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| I groaned. "This is so stupid... Reminds me of home... This is a hellhole..."
"Just like Hell.... My home..." I added slowly at the end, rubbing my forhead.
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| Supernerd | Date: Friday, 2011-10-14, 8:18 PM | Message # 176 |
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| Now, my ears were definitely perked, this was far more interesting than i thought, a person, from hell!? That could add up some bonus points back at T.A.P.A.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Demon | Date: Friday, 2011-10-14, 8:20 PM | Message # 177 |
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※You shouldnt anger me. ಠ_ಠ※
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| I sighed. "Fuck my life..."
(XD)
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| Supernerd | Date: Friday, 2011-10-14, 8:25 PM | Message # 178 |
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| I sighed, i waited...then i had to pull out one of my aces, I started to cry, sitting in the corner of the cave, i pretended to try and muffle it with my arm.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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| Demon | Date: Friday, 2011-10-14, 8:27 PM | Message # 179 |
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| (The fuck???)
I heard someone crying in the cave.. That just made me curious. I jumped off the branch and peeked inside. "The fuck is wrong with you?"
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| Supernerd | Date: Friday, 2011-10-14, 8:31 PM | Message # 180 |
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A Hater/Friend of Equinox
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Messages: 3145
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| (XD If this even confuses you i am good))
I continued to cry then looked up, my eyes red and puffy from crying."I-im C-crying in c-case you h-h-havent figured that out, G-go away..." I continued to cry into my arm as i sat there.
Some say its nice to have good signatures....
Well.
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There you have it.
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